Leoneus's Application #2

[Leoneus 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Ondafloor

-How old are you?:

16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern Time US

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, my first language is English and I use grammar correctly.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am pretty creative as a person and I usually like to stick to my one character.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Depends, Usually between 8-20 hours.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:

I have played this game for about a year.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:

Roleplaying is putting yourself in a character’s shoes. You ARE that character, you know what they know, but they don’t know what you know. (That’s Meta-Gaming)

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

A large player base of mature roleplayers.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I love to RP and they were more build-based servers.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Human, Orc, Dwarf, Elf.

-How did you hear about us?:

A friend.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Ondafloor

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Leoneus

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Biography:

Born into an abusive family, where his mother would barely feed him, and his father would use him as a slave, beating him if he acted out. He was never able to make true friends due to his lack of education. Usually never left the house, the small amount of free time that he possessed, he spent in his basement learning new recipes for his workbench.

As he got older, he had met someone named Janux, who taught him what he needed to know about reading and writing. Janux was like a father to Leoneus, he was his tutor, and his friend. He slowly lost ties with Janux. His parents locked him in a cage when they found what he was doing. They wanted him to know nothing. He was only let out to work the farm.

It wasn’t until he was 19 that he made an escape plan. His father would watch him constantly while working on the farm. If he would slip up, his father would come over, grab his hoe, and repeatedly whack him with it. Leoneus had built himself a sharp axe over the past few weeks. Sharpening the stone that he got from his basement each night. His father walked about two feet away when Leoneus through his axe, into the back of his father’s lower leg. His father yelled in pain, and eventually the pain became anger. By that point, Leoneus had already ran, and jumped over the fence. He was long gone.

-Character Age:

20

-Character Appearance:

Average Clothes, not ripped or tattered, not fancy either. They fit him more for traveling.

-Character Personality:

Shy, never really interacted towards the other children as a child. Isolates himself from the crowd.

-Your ambitions:

He always was somewhat of an exile. He has always wanted to belong. He wants to work his way into the norm.

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes, he can read fluently, but his writing is a bit broken.

-Can your character mine?:

His mentor, named Janux, taught him to mine as a child. He was tutored by him.

-Are you a capable builder?:

Building was never Leoneus’s strong suit. His buildings are blocky, and simple.

-Can you wield a sword?:

He knows the basics of the art. He is not a sword master by any stretch of the imagination.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Not at all. He despises it in fact. His father used him as a slave to farm as a child. He doesn’t even want to see a farm again.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

He is crafty with his hands. His axes were always the best axes.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imgur.com/QUnSK

-Other Information:

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/