Maximas1244 Application [updated]

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Minecraft Account Name: Maximas1244

-How old are you? 13

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a 13 year old boy who grew up with rpg's when i was introduced to minecraft and currently play it all the time, but I would always look for the perfect server and was hoping this could be it. I like to play Tennis a lot and when i get home from a long game I like to have a nice sit down and play minecraft.

-Do I have a good grip on the English Language/good grammer?: Yes

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia/New South Wales[NSW]

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im crafty, good leader, Very good Fighter, a great planner, and great with a bow.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Five days weekly, 3-5 hour dailey.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing for about 5-7 months now.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: How long have you been doing it? I know quite a bit about roleplaying, i know you have to take on the role of another character and play as you would want to react to the situations you find the character in. I have been playing roleplay for most my life. I have played futuristic, fantasy and medieval types it is my favorite fantasy.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A fun and adventurous server with lots of choice and freedom with a whole world to explore.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them? MineSworn. There was a lot of swearing and staff members would disrespect the members and cheat.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes, I found the lore very dense and detailed. . The Lore put me in a nice mindset, and also gave me high expectations.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elf's, Dwarves, Orcs, Humans

-How did you hear about us?: Looking Through Minestatus and on the Forums

-Did you vote?: Yes

What was your favorite Law?: The no griefing law, that made me so happy when i saw it.

-What was your least favorite Law?: Nothing caught my eye, all were fair and reasonable

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: I love LOTC

In-Character

-Character Name: Maximas

What is your Race?: Human!

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum: I love LOTC

- Forum account: Maximas1244

-Biography:

Born into a Middle class family, Maximas lived with his parents for a short period of time. Maximas father was a mining, he retired when maximas was 5, he taught some skills to mine. At the age of 6, Maximas trained every day by his trainer, to become a Knight but on some days he would go to school. He learnt many skills from his trainer like, surviving, Building shelters, fighting, archery, acrobatics and hunting, he would always quickly adapted to any environment he was thrown into. But what happened next, would scar him forever.

One day, after his day of training, he was walking on the gravel path to his home. Seeing in his site’s was his home, when he walked and got closer to his home, he saw bandits raiding his home, he ran as fast has he can to see what happening to his family. Seeing his mother running to him telling him to run, and before she could kiss him goodbye she was shot in the back, in which his Mother died in his arms. His father telling him run he that he would hold them off. Maximas ran and last seeing his father been cut down and killed.

Once it was morning Maximas, was walking to his Trainer house, he was trying hold his tears in, because of loss of his family. Until a Patrol of Guards came by in which he saw his trainer, running to him and calling out his name, his trainer seeing him and told to the patrol to stop. Maximas explain what happen to his home and his family to his trainer. Taking him to his home, the trainer knew that he would need to watch over him and tale care of him until he was ready for his knighthood. On some days he would go to school but on most of days he would train. His Trainer taught him every day, to never give up and each day. He learnt more skills every day, and doing everything his trainer said and which started calling him his father after a few months.

After nine years of training learning the skills preparing him for his future as a knight, he would always remind himself of what had happen to his parents, he knew revenge wasn’t the way but he always wish he could get them back for what they did. At the age of nineteen earning his Knighthood and finally becoming a Knight. He fought Bandits, and he Protected Villages but many people still didn't know him. After two years, he left he Headed to the Land of Aegis that was perfect in every way, to protect it from harm, to fight and die for it.

-Character Age: 21

-Character Appearance: Darkish brown hair, Nice Brown Eyes and Nice, Nice Skin Colored Skin

Character Personality: Always determined and cunning, he would always care for others and try to help them in everyway, he tough , he won’t hurt anyone unless they mess with him

-Your ambitions: Explore and Protect the land of Aegis, Becoming a Royal Knight at the Kings Side, fight until evil is vanquished, and have a nice wife, or have a good friend to help him and for him to help him/her.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, good at it

-Can your character mine?: Yes, Not that good at it

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, can only build little shelters to survive that all

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-Can you wield a sword?: Skilled with a sword and wielded a sword since the younge age of 5.

-Enjoy Farming?: no

-Does your character have any special skills?: Planning, sneaking, blocking, Dodging, he shoot arrows fast, hit faster with a sword, a very good leader, and counterattack.

-A screenshot of your skin

http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=6997 This is a skin from the list of LOTC Offial Skin Pack, Knight.

-Other Information: I very do enjoy a good RP server . It looks very awesome.

[Blawharag 277]

Good app overall, but:

#1 You listed 3 different time zones. Australia and EST are on nearly opposite sides of the planet.

#2 Your frequency and type of grammar mistakes leads me to believe you do not have a good grip on English. This is not a problem, but you should be truthful in your answer so that I can make sure you have the help you may need when joining. If English is your native language, proof read your application, it is very difficult to understand.

#3 You gave no viable explanation for the character traits you put in for your character. You claimed he was raised as a knight given a more or less education standard of a noble. This does not explain where he obtained the architectural knowledge to build, mining experience, or farming experience. Do not just add these traits because you want your character to have them, only answer yes to the traits that make sense for you character and give thorough explanations as to why you picked them. Taking them for the sake of taking them is poor role play.

Please do not repost your application within 48 hours. Take this time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems listed above.

[Maximas1211 34]

Could i edit now or still need to make a new ap in another 48 hours

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