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[Haad 0]

1. How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern time US. Florida

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a very kind person who enjoys life. I have a great

personality and enjoy Minecraft too much.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:5-6 times a week

How long have you played minecraft?:I played a free version for about a year.I resently bought the full version.

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I have been roleplaying since I was about 8. To me roleplaying is meeting new people, Adventure, and fighting, but as a differnt person.

What do you expect this server will be like?:A lot like World of Warcaft and Runescape.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:This is my first MC server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes I have agreed to all the rule and the LORE

Name the 4 races on this server. The 4 main races I believe are Orc,Elves,Humans, and Dwarves

How did you hear about us?:Banner on a mod topic

Did you vote?:Yes

What was your favourite Law?:No Griefing. I extremely hate griefers.

What was your least favourite Law?:None of them because laws are important.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?Mancat

In-Character:

Character Name: James Deathwalker

What is your Race?:Human

-Biography:As a child I grew up in a small family. My father was a solider and he would always tell me stories of the wars he had been in. One day the kingdom went to war with the orcs and he had to leave I was only 10 at the time. My father never returned and I waited 7 long years for him to return, and I assumed he was dead. I have hated the orcs ever since. I started to hunt orcs and slay the women and children of the orc villages.

One day when I was 20, an Orc guard caught me during one of my raids and I was thrown in prison for 5 years and was sentenced to hang. I was marched out of my cell and they put a bag over my head. They walked me up some stairs and put the noose across my throat. Then it became tighter and I was choking but then I heard a noise and I hit the floor. I was dragged across the ground and I heard swords and screaming around me. The next thing I know the bag was ripped off my head and I was in the forest. But no one was there. I walk out of the forest and all that I saw of the orc village were dead bodies and burnt buildings.

As I returned home I was shuned for the wicked things I have done. My closest friends and my own mother would not talk to me. I was an outcast, every one hated me. One day I packed up my things and headed for the city of Oren to start a new life.

Character Age:25

Character Appearance:Brown ruffled hair. Brown eyes. skin:white with a bit of a tan. Broken nose (from a bar fight). I am 6 foot 5. Not very muscular.

-Character Personality: Very depressed and lonesome and enjoys to drink alone. He is afraid of the dark.

Your ambitions:To get a good job and meet new people. To kill every orc I see (but follow the server rules)

Can your character read or write?:Yes he can he learned as a child.

Can your character mine?:No but he can learn

Are you a capable builder? No his father wasn’t around to teach him a lot of craftmenships

Can you wield a sword? Yes he would prefer a job fighting mobs and enemies.

Enjoy Farming?:Yes but prefer not to. But work is work.

Does your character have any special skills?:Good with animals and I am a very good fighter.

A screenshot of your skin: Check Attachments

Other Information: I wish I had a horse

[Mercius 15]

Denied.

Not bad overall but a few points to improve on:

-Your bio. It needs some depth, I don't know very much about your character. And I don't see why he's so needlessly violent, or how your character single handedly slaughtered orc villagers and got away for so long. Be wary of powergaming.

-Villainy. Please make sure you've researched what you can and can't do without an approved villain application. You will not be able to kill every orc you see.

-Lore. Use of it is minimal and I feel you haven't really done your research. Oren is not a city!

-Be cautious of spelling and grammatical errors.

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