My Application

[MrFunkee 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: MrFunkee

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: PST/United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I've been looking into good RP Minecraft servers, as they seem quite fun. I enjoy RPGs so I figured this server would be great, I look forward to playing it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Probably a couple days out of the week.

-How long have you played minecraft?:About 3 months, give or take.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I played WoW for a while, RPing in that. Aside from that I haven't done much, but I want to get into it. I know the main rule is never break character, and just go with your imagination on what your character should be.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it to be a really fun experience to play on it.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I've played on a few PvP servers, but I wasn't really attracted to them because they were a bit chaotic.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, Elf, Human, Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?:Minecraftservers.net, scrolling through servers that could be fun.

-Did you vote?:Yes

-What was your favourite Law?:No 1337 speak (so annoying), or the lack of laws in the Wild.

-What was your least favourite Law?:None of them seemed to pop out to me as unreasonable.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?MrFunkee

In-Character:

-Character Name: Kapuze

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: MrFunkee

-Biography: Little is known about his personality, or intentions. Many people are wary of him, even more fear him. No matter where he goes, he is always a stranger, and he keeps it that way. One moment he will seem to appear out of nowhere, the next he's gone. He tends to slip the minds of people, until he is seen again. His magic is something of legend as he unleashes his arcane powers within. He is quite persuasive and manipulative of others as well.

-Character Age:26

-Character Appearance: He is clad in all black, save for bits of gold on his clothes. Atop his head, he dons a hat of the same color, shrouding his eyes, covering his identity. Aside from that, he appears to be your average man, or so it seems...

-Character Personality: Reserved, quiet, shady, manipulative. He has a bit of an unpredictable personality towards others, as one never knows how he will react to anything.

-Your ambitions: To have at his command minions to do his bidding, and to rise as king. Simply to gain power and, through power, gain fear.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes

-Can your character mine?: Yes, but prefers others do it for him

-Are you a capable builder? Decent

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but would prefer magic daggers. Something inconspicuous, hidden, unpredictable.

-Enjoy Farming?: Again, he would rather others do his work for him, but he can dirty his hands now and then.

-Does your character have any special skills?: His magic and manipulation.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/preview/both/9/72054 (doesn't show hat very well but it is there)

-Other Information: I have another skin in mind somewhat close to the description if you don't like this one so much. Email me if such a case occurs.

[Blawharag 277]

#1 Bio too short, lengthen and add detail.

#2 Heavy evidence of powergaming/mary sue-ing. I would suggest remaking your character from scratch, and leaving out super magic god powers. Magic is one thing, being a legendary over the top master of the craft is another.

#3 Your character traits need an explanation. Where did you learn to mine, build, wield a sword ect. Do not just add them to your character so you can do them, only add what makes sense and explain it with a good explanation as to why you have it.

Please do not repost your application within 48 hours. Take this time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems listed above.