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b]Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: tronan999

-How old are you?:18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States/ California

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes I understand the english language but sometimes I make spelling mistakes but everybody makes spelling mistakes once in a while.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am 18 I work at a small bookstore in my town.

I like to play and coach basketball and play in a competitve basketball league. I like to rp games and play minecraft with friends when I can.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I could be on when I don't work So around 2:000-6:00 and on the weekends I can play In the afternoon after my basketball games that I play on the weekend so on the weekend 2-00 to around 7:00

-How long have you played Minecraft?:I have palyed since minecraft alpha first came out.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:Rolepalying is being a different person other than yourself and do things that character would do not what you would do because you are being a different person other than yourself.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I've been looking for a good rp server for a while and I heard that this was a great roleplaying server from one of my friends on the server and said I should make an application I think this server will be a great rp server

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes I have agreed and read the rules and think the rules are very fair.

-Name the 4 races on this server:dwarf,elf,human,and orc

-How did you hear about us?:i've heard about Lord Of The Craft was from my friends on the server and from minecraft forums.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:tronan999

In-Character:

-Character Name: Jack Rydar

-What is your Race?:human

-Biography:

Jack grew up in a town just south of Al'Khazar and he always wanted to explore when he had free time. He also was taught how to wield a sword and often fought with his town buddies with wooden swords.His buddies and liked to explore the caves around the town they once had a close encounter with an outlaw in one of the caves they reported him to the authorities and they were rewarded. At the age of 16 the undead start to attack the nations jack's mother and father decided that they would move to Al'Khazar since they were close enough to not get attacked by undead. Jack tried to resist and tried to make his parents and him to stay but there minds were already set on moving to Al'Khazar So they packed up their stuff and traveled to Al'Khazar.

Jack Lived in Al'Khazar until he was 23 during that time his parents opened up a small grocerey shop in the market district. So he spent most of his time working in their shop.

But one day a person who looked like he was from the slum district walks in and pulss out a hidden switchblade but luckily he had his wooden sword that he had as a child that luckily he brought with him to the shop . Also It was a good thing his father taught him how to wield a sword for self defense. So he let the assailant come towards him then he sprung out from behind the counter and hit the assailant in the head with the butt of his wooden sword. He quickly tied him up and called for the guards.

At the age of 22 Jack decided that it was his time to leeave Al'Khazar to go and try to find the village that he lived in for most of his childhood. So he gathered enough money to buy a stone sword and got supplies from his parents shop and started off after a while of hiking he heard footsteps behind and in front of him. Then suddenly 2 arrows come bursting from the forest and hit him in the arm and straight in the chest and then he blacks out.After 4 days of being out cold he awakens to find himself lying on a bed surrounded by monks. He asks where he is and the leader says he was at the cloud temple of Aegis. Jack had heard about the cloud temple but never really thought that he would ever see it with his own eyes. They said he was out for four days. For the next week the monks treated Jack and taught him about the other nations in wich he wanted to go and explore the other nations. So after a while he thatnks the monks and heads off to start a new life in Aegis.

-Character Age: 22

-Character Appearance: Jack has brown hair,brown eyes, leather clothes,and two scars where 2 arrows penetrated his skin one on his chest and another on his right arm.

-Character Personality: Jack is a nice guy he doesn't really hold grudges and likes to help people out and one day explore all of the world of Aegis.

-Your ambitions: to explore all of Aegis and stop the undead threat and help the human Kingdom of Oren.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read and write a little bit but not much.

-Can your character mine?: no Jack can't mine he doesn't really understand the fundamentals of mining.

-Are you a capable builder?: yes jack can build wooden buildings

-Can you wield a sword?: yes he can wield a sword and will use his skills to help the good people of The Kingdom of Oren.

-Enjoy Farming?: he doesn't know how to farm but he would like to learn how to farm.

-Does your character have any special skills?: other than he likes to explore areas than no he does not have any other skills.

-A screenshot of your skin: tell me if this screenshot does not work i have other screen shots.

-Other Information:

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You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality (the personality and ambitions need the most work your bio is fine) etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.

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