App

[yayfunfunfun__6 4]

Out-Of-Character:

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-Minecraft Account Name:

yayfunfunfun_6

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-How old are you?:

14.

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-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GMT+/-0:00, England.

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-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

yes i can do them both, but i sometime's make mistake's becouse human's usally make mistakes.

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-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I will help people in need.

I have a nice personality.

I am a nice and polite admin on my server.

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-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

proablly 5 hour's a day.

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-How long have you played Minecraft?:

For I few months, since 1.5.1

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-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

I have always liked roleplaying. I have played WoW, Fallout and other roleplay game. Roleplaying is were you play as a different character in a game, roleplay games are usually set in a different time or world. In roleplay there is a plot or storyline and all of the players have set role to play.

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-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect there will be friendly players and a fast atmosphere.

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-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I am currently an admin on a server but I’m looking for some think for interesting to fulfil my time.

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-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yeah I have read it all and I think that there is a lot of detail. I especially like the lore.

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-Name the 4 races on this server.

Humans.

Elf’s.

Orc’s.

Dwarfs.

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-How did you hear about us?:

I saw your trailer on YouTube and my friend told me about you.

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-Did you vote?:

Yes on all three of them.

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-What was your favourite Law?:

You must play in character as this is a RP server. I think it is needed to keep people in character.

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-What was your least favourite Law?:

I think that they are all fair.

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-What is your The Lord of Craft forum account name?

Yayfunfunfun_6

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In-Character:

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-Character Name:

Belvan

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-What is your Race?:

Elf

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-Lordofthecraft.net/forum account:

Yayfunfunfun_6

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-Biography:

I was born into a rich family of 4. My parents are nice people, my father was a general in the elven military and was well respected and he would teach me how to fight, whereas my mother would stay at home doing housework, she would also teach me to cook.

I had many friends they were all sons and daughters of soldiers, and we would usally go into the forest to play hide and seek. When they were not around I train and help my mum. On my tenth birthday my father got me a real sword to train with. My father also taught me and my older cousin. After 8 years of training my father said I could join the military and one day take his position as general. But since then we haven’t been in any wars so all I did was train, it was like I wasn’t even in the army so I quit and joined my friend freelance team.

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-Character Age:

20.

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-Character Appearance:

Wears a thick cotton blue shirt and brown leather trousers. His skin is light but slightly tanned from the sun. When he is in battle he wears iron armour with gold trimmings and a black hood that hides his face from the enemy.

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-Character Personality:

Mysterious, respectable and cares about his friends.

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-Your ambitions:

To build a team with my friend and become a well know figure in the elven military.

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-Can your character read or write?:

Yes he was in school till he was 16.

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-Can your character mine?:

Yes but will rather buy resources.

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-Are you a capable builder?

He is a very capable builder when he was young he helped build part of the military base with his father.

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-Can you wield a sword?:

Yeah he can wield a sword it’s one of his special skills.

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-Enjoy Farming?:

He does not like it very much but is capable of farming.

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-Does your character have any special skills?:

He is a skilled warrior and can handle a sword.

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-A screenshot of your skin:

My skin

[Blawharag 277]

Please do not repost your application within 48 hours. Take this time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems with your app.

Tough choice to make here, but there are a few minor roleplay inconsistencies you need to fix before you can get through.

#1 You answered yes to every character trait question, and gave short reasonings for each, but it lacks a lot of depth. Give more detailed explanations as to why you character went to school, who taught him to mine, when he went about helping his father build a military base ect. From what your bio sounded like, he spent his time training, playing, or helping his mother. Not in school, not in a quarry, not building a military installment.

#2 Your answer to the "What does RP mean to you" question needs to be fleshed out. Give a cleared definition on what RP is so we are sure you have a good grip on it.

Excellent formatting, but when you do repost, do not continue to repost everyday until it is looked at. We are looking through applications, dont worry, all you accomplish be reposting before it has been answered is spamming up our forums more.