re: deadsparks app

[deadspark 0]

my last app was not accepted thanks to spelling. so hope this is improved.

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

deadspark

-How old are you?:

23

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

england

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

im from england so yes. grammar could be inproved but i try

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

i left school and started working as a waiter, been in and out of work and done loads of odd jobs. recently settled down with a girl and now work in a super market full time.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

never really worked it out. i do shift work so acess is restricted but about 3-5h a day

-How long have you played minecraft?:

about a week before alpha ended

-What do you know about roleplaying?:

played loosely RP servers before. some MC some private WOW.

simply put your walking a 1000 miles in some one else's shoes but there bright blue with a bell on the end.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

i expect to find players with a similar approach to playing that i enjoy. i have been playing MC for a long time now and i hope to find your server to be fun.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

i wont list all the servers i have played on since i payed for this game but to make it simple. the reason why i stay with any of them is because of the people that are on them.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes and yes

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Elf, Orc, Human and dwarf

-How did you hear about us?:

I was searching for an RP server

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

deadspark

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Sparky Mith

-What is your Race?:

elf

-Biography:

Sparky Mith as a child grew up on his parents farm. on the day of the adulthood festival, sparky decides to clime the grove's bigest tree to watch the festival because he was not invited. sparky's eyes was instantly captivated by a young princess. not knowing how to talk to such a beutiful woman, or for that matter. some one of noble blood, sparky decides to follow her.

for three whole days sparky learns as much as he can about this princess.

on the 4th day, after finding out she is leaving for home that night. he sneeks under the cover of her fathers trailer.

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that night the princess and her noble family set off into the woods. heading to there home many miles away, not knowing of there stowaway.

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After close to a week, one night a member of the noble's guards finds sparky. but feeling nice provides some moldy bread and an apple. but tells sparky to leave now or face what the kind guard should have done.

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you might think a teenager lost in the woods would just die, and no easy death at that. the undead walk the land. but no sparky found within him self the will to live and to fight, perhaps a bit messy and years after thoes first few nights he has scars, but some how found a way to survive

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years have passed and sparky has been called many names: lover, killer and 'sell traid' to name a few. but the few people that know him well call him friend.

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sparky is grown up now but he is still after that princess. a force that drives a fire to live and prosper

-Character Age:

30 occ-i dont know what you consider an ok age for elf so i put what my human year equivalent would be

-Character Appearance:

tall, blond, and a few scars. no prince like beauty but ruggedly handsome

-Character Personality:

kind and always willing to help. but slow to acept friends

-Your ambitions:

to find the girl of corse

-Can your character read or write?:

yes-but spells words how they sound

-Can your character mine?:

yes-but has only mined so far enouth to survive

-Are you a capable builder?:

can repair buildings with no fear of heights. but that sort of work pays little. and has yet to build his own home

-Can you wield a sword?:

yes- and well with the scars to show years of fighting

-Enjoy Farming?:

yes- as it is a reminder of home and childhood

-Does your character have any special skills?:

after years of being a nomad: survival, traiding, and fending for my self is 2nd nature

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/707/elfman30.jpg/

-Other Information:

occ- i hope you like my skin. i know its not an edit of your default but if its a problem i will ask for help on the forums to see if some one will make an ok one for me.

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thank you for reading my app, i understand that my spelling might be a pain for some people but i am dyslexic and tend to spell words how they sound insted of the corect way. this has not been a problem before for RP and can easerly be taken as a querk of my guy

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[Chevalier 5]

Can you write a longer biography please?