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[Blackmatrix99 0]

-Minecraft Account Name: Blackmatrix99

-How old are you?:12 years old

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Sweden GMT 1+

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes at least for my age

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Well I'm a typical boy. I like video games, reading, being with friends and movies. I also like to build stuff ( both in minecraft but also with lego)

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:At least 10 hours but proably more.

-How long have you played minecraft?:6 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I don't know that very much.Im kinda new to it however i have played some rpgs like WoW and some other free ones. I also liked to play pokémon when i was younger. I played those about 1-2 years ago. I understand that you are supposed to take the roll of another person and see things through his eyes.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: It's going to be epic!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I don't play on that many public servers I played on Imperium and my friend's public server a lot. Imperium has gotten problems with white list right now and my friend don't play Minecraft anymore so that's the reason i left.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes i have understood the rules. I read a bit of the lore and it looks good and i understand it.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elfs, Orcs, Humans, Dwarfs

-How did you hear about us?:I was just searching for a nice server and came acroos this one

-Did you vote?:Yep

-What was your favourite Law?:Can't really say all of them are good. However i like the no 1337 one beacuse usually i don't understand all the weird language on the internet :/

-What was your least favourite Law?:None all are good

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Flyingfish

In-Character:

-Character Name:Angelus'lunae

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Flying fish,The fish that fly

-Biography: He was born on a night when the moon was bigger than ever. His parents thought he was beautiful like an angel and that's why he got his name Angelus'lunae from the latin.( Angel of the moon in english). He was raised to fight for the well of nature and could wield any sword at the age of 85. However on his 249th birthday his town got attacked. Angelus and his father was to fend of the invaders but during the fight his father was injured. Angleus made sure his father got safely back to their house. The other elfs were able to heal him however his fathers arm is damaged and he will never be able to wield a sword. From that day Angelus swore he would kill any invader that threatened the freedoom of his people. After this event he adventured into the wilds. He lived simple drinking water from the lakes in the forests. He collected nuts and berries to eat, and took care of anyone who tried to destroy the nature around him. However one day when he was walking on the path between two cities he was attacked by several bandits. His sword was not strong enough and his bow's arrows could not even scratch their armor. He was killed under this attack. The robbers looted his dead body and ran back into the woods. He felt empty. His spirit wandered around for months. Suddenly a bright light appeared and he found himself on the Cloud Temple of Aegis. He had become reborn. Suddenly he felt a feeling inside of him. Not rage but neither hate or sadness. Then he understood what the feeling was. It's time to take revenge.

-Character Age:250

-Character Appearance: Yellow hair, brown eyes, brown skin, small mouth. Wears a green shirt and pants with a brown leather belt and a leather band across his chest. He has gotten shoulder pieces made by the toughest iron and gloves made by leather. He has a sword made by the wood by the trees in his town, and the iron from the mines far away in dwarfen lands.

-Character Personality:He is loyal to the elves empire. He is brave and swift but sometimes has to be a better person.

-Your ambitions: He wants the elven empire to be known far and beyond the worlds limits.He wants a big home with lots of food. He also wants to become the Master of the sword.

-Can your character read or write?:He can only read a little and can't write. However he wants to learn the art of reading and writing.

-Can your character mine?:No he can't

-Are you a capable builder?He is strong enough but needs help with architecture.

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes he is good at it. His father started teaching him when he was 80 years.

-Enjoy Farming?:Yes but he need's an person to teach him much better. His mother taught him the basics though.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]He is an master with the sword and bow. He can play the flute made by the special trees in the elven empire.

-A screenshot of your skin: Screenshot minecraftskin.bmp

-Other Information:He likes to eat cake.

Screenshot minecraftskin.bmp

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

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Other Comments:

Bandits... are overused. Try using some other plot device.

Your biography has powergaming. You don't die and relive... you simply are knocked unconscious or hurt badly.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before

[Blackmatrix99 0]

Ok i guess I´ll try again in 2 days thanks for the review anyway :)