App 8 Kidkillen

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APP

-Minecraft Account Name: kidkillen

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Sweden

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I can talk good but not spell that good. All spelling has been corrected by a program.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a young guy that loves to play games. When I get home from school, I make myself a sandwich and start playing Minecraft, CoD or something.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 80 hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since 1.2.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Roleplaying is like pretending that you are someone else. Like for example, I am from Sweden, but when I roleplay, I am an 30 year old Dwarf living in an house in the woods. You can just come up with a character, write the characters story, then you make the character look the way you want and then you start playing with the character.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A polite and fun server to spend my afternoons on.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have been on a lot of servers but I left them because, I was either badly treated because of my age or I just did not like the servers citizens and buildings.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have and I agree whit every single one of them.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Human, Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: I watched the trailer on Reckreations Chanel.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: kidkillen

In-Character:

-Character Name: Dorian IronPick.

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: Dorian is a Dwarf living in The main Dwarfen city. He loves to venture into caves and he stays down there for like 2 days. When he is at home again he counts how much materials and stone he have gotten under his trip to the caves. When he knows how much money it is worth, he goes to the merchant chop and sells almost all of it. What he doesn't sell he makes new pickaxes, swords and axes. Then he rest for a week and then he does it all again.

Dorian was born in the cave that he lives in. He had a happy child hood. His dad was a miner and his mom owned a bakery. Dorian learned everything that he knows about from his father. Dorian and his father used to go into the caves and sleep there together. His dad would give him “homework” . But he didn't care to much about that. Instead of doing his “homework” he went into the caves to hunt spiders, zombies, skeletons and endermen. And when his dad or mom asked him if he had made his “homework” he just said that he was to tired but he would do it tomorrow.

When Dorian was 18 he got a job as a chef at his mothers bakery. He worked there for like a year or so and then he stared his own mine.

He worked there all alone but he didn't mind that. He liked to walk around in his big cave system. And that's where he is in his life right now.

-Character Age: 30 years old.

-Character Appearance: Pretty long for a Dwarf. Big brown coat and gray trousers. Orange long hair and a normal size beard.

-Character Personality: A happy guy that always has a smile on his face. He likes to talk with other persons and he loves to joke with his friends. He is kind of a kid stuck in a adult body except for his love of bear and gold. But when some one disagrees with him he redyes his fists. If war is coming he gladly picks up his sword or bow.

-Your ambitions: Dorian wants to be a rich Dwarf that is a known miner across the world of Aegis.

-Can your character read or write?: No, he never really needed to read in his childhood, so he never learned to read.

-Can your character mine?: Yes he can and he enjoys it very much.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes he can build a house of stone and wood.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes he can.

-Enjoy Farming?: No. He thinks it is boring to wait.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Not really except that he mines very fast.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoe...431984314843110

I hope you acsept me.

Thanks.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

It seems that you are avoiding using lore. "Main Dwarven City" Doesn't cut it.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before