Baconhat's Application

[Baconhat 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: ShizzDawgg

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -5 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, i've gone through far too many years of literature.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm 15 and jobless. However, I have 3 A.P. classes that i'm taking and I play soccer, so me being jobless is understandable . I'm a sophomore in highschool currently, and i'm relatively mature for my age.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: At the maximum, about 35 hours a week, at minimum, probably 10 hours, it all really varies based off of schoolwork.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about a year and 2 months or so.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I roleplay all the time in the MMORPG, World of Warcraft(I play on the roleplaying realm, Cenarion Circle). I understand that you can take on the role of a certain person that you create and can decide the fate of said person. I also know that what you do can affect what others in a positive or negative way.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Hopefully this server will offer the feeling of Lord of the Rings online, with the awesomeness of minecraft. I'm a pretty good pvper, so i'll need to lay off the "Stand and Deliver!" motto that I live by. I have no problem role-playing before fighting someone.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Herocraft Online, I didn't leave, i'm just getting bored of it because i've been fairly active on it for about 8 months now, just taking long-term break at the moment.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yup, I understand them.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Humans, Orcs, Dwarves, and there are other races such as undead.

-How did you hear about us?: I saw a video for this server in a video recommendation on youtube, and it interested me because I played Lord of the Rings online, enjoyed it, and love minecraft.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Baconhat

In-Character:

-Character Name: Dhovain (It means Falcon Spirit)

-What is your Race?: Elf.

-Biography:

Dhovain was born to Kelarin and Bavain Hlaethym as a lighter-skinned wood elf. His Great-Grandfather was one of the most deadly assassins of his time, but now he is dead. When he was young, his father, Barvain taught him to use the bow by shooting small game in the forests south of Laurelin, and he excelled at it. He grew up in Laurelin until he turned 180, and decided that he wanted to leave home. He left with nothing but a bow, arrow, and 500 minas. He ventured for the city of Ravenhold, from which he had loved since he was a young elf. On his journey to Ravenhold an arrow was shot at him from an unknown source and offguard, it landed a hit just below his left breast. Dhovain started to lose vision, and right before he blacked out, he saw a hooded figure who stood in front of him.

Dhovain woke up days later in a grove. How he ended up there is unknown, even to him. All of his belongings were on him, and he was not harmed. Trying to pull himself back together he ventured for a river as he was thristy. When he came upon a river, he knelt down in order to drink, and then stripped as he was about to bathe. Upon seeing his reflection, he noticed that in the same spot that the arrow hit him, was a mark of a feather. Not knowing exactly why there was a mark in a spot where there should have been a run, he touched it with his forefinger. Upon touching it he experienced the revelations of his Great-Grandfather sniping his targets from far away. Dhovain felt as if he had learned a new skill, the ability to shoot targets from far away with deadly accuracy. Still unaware of who had shot him, and still seeking after his beloved city, Dhovain continued on his venture for Ravenhold.

-Character Age: 200. Almost a mature elf.

-Character Appearance: Somewhat similar in appearance to Legolas, Dhovain has shorter hair of the same blond appearance. He wears similar clothes to legolas as well, as he is an elven ranger. He tends to wear colors that camouflage him best, which in his case is green, brown, and white. He has light green eyes and is darker white-skinned. He has tatooed feather below his left breast.

-Character Personality: Courageous and Audacious. He is a kind person, but he is not so sweet-hearted towards the evil.

-Your ambitions: Dhovain seeks vengeance. Though he is an elf, and of a peaceful peoples, he seeks to rid Aegis of the undead. He also wishes to bring the chaotic world to peace.

-Can your character read or write?: Very well indeed.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, though Dhovain prefers not to mine. Elves don't like getting dirty.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, though not the best, Dhovain has decent architectural skills.

-Can you wield a sword?: Dhovain's primary weapon is the bow, but he has mastered the aspects of the sword in an attempt to fend off the horde of undead.

-Enjoy Farming?: Dhovain enjoys farming, it keeps him in touch with nature.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Dhovain is a master of the bow. He excells at combat and wishes to bring an end to the undead. He can snipe an enemy from 100 blocks away.

-A screenshot of your skin: Er.. Not sure how to upload it other than through minerneedcoolshoes.. I'll try and attach it I guess. http://imageshack.us...mupload&newlp=1

-Other Information: The server looks GREAT! If I am accepted, and even if I am not, i'd like to see the server to continue to progress the way that it is. I also play on the server, "Herocraft: The Multiverse" quite a bit. I don't know what good this will do, but my friend R3flexed told me to tell you guys.. :P

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [X]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

The application had good material. Place names, cities, and a reasonable age. But it came crashing downwards when you said you learned of secrets and gained knowledge from touching a feather, embedded on your chest.

Oh yeah, your skin link doesn't work. The link is faulty.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

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