WilliamEpic's Application

[Wirri 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: WilliamEpic

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT -7 USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, indeed.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am smart, helpful, respectful, and nice. I love to play with people and love Minecraft. I like roleplay and play many tabletop games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 3-5 Hours a day on weekdays, 7+ hours on weekends.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since Alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know that roleplay is fun and I am learned in it. I've done it on and off for years, in various games/tabletops.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A nice, fun roleplay server. With a great community and nice cities/builds.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Olympus Gaming, Thedarktide, Cygnus X-1

Olympus - Playerbase diminished.

Thedarktide - Changed for the worse, was no longer fun.

Cygnus X-1 - Server closed.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes. What about the lore? I love the lore! Beautiful.:

-Name the 4 races on this server. Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orcs

-How did you hear about us?: Through ExtremeTop100

-Did you vote?: I have.

-What was your favourite Law?: No griefing.

-What was your least favourite Law?: They all seemed neccessary and fair.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Wirri

In-Character:

-Character Name: Thoten

-What is your Race?: Dwarven

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Wirri

-Biography:

Thoten was born to the family of Thorin Oakenshield, the great family under the Lonely Mountain, he is well recognized for what his family did to exterminate Smaug and take back what was rightfully theirs. He was raised to be a genuine dwarf. Loving drinking, mining, and all things merry. He was trained, and exceptionally good at fighting, and loves war. He is wise, knowledge imparted all the way down his generation, and is in good standing among his friends, family, and race. He loves to eat too, all meat is good to him. While he can come off as blunt and rude at times, he is very merry on the inside, and doesn't enjoy stupidity. He is a noble man of honor, integrity, respect, and trust. He values these traits very much and has many years ahead of him.

-Character Age: 169

-Character Appearance: Strong, intimidating, long and thick beard. Short, looks old, worn, and weary. Nice smile and tattered clothing.

-Character Personality: Hearty, joking, blunt, and at times, rude.

-Your ambitions: To raise in the ranks and take a government position, become well known and respected, for I am Thoten. Grungi (Lord of Mines and Smith), Gromthi (Ancestor) of Thorin Oakenshield.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read the dwarven language easily, and is learning the language of the humans, he can write his name and most other dialogue legibly, but has trouble doing so.

-Can your character mine?: My character is a fine mining, coming from the greatest of dwarven families, ancestor of Thorin Oakenshield.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes, in a unique style that has been passed down through generations.

-Can you wield a sword?: I can wield a sword, but prefer warhammers, please, let's take this to the arena.

-Enjoy Farming?: It is a tedious work, but one that needs doing, I prefer to have meat when I can, and do not care for many farmed goods.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] My character is exceptionally good at mining and war. He fights to the death, protects his friends, and is a man of valor, honor, strength, and respect.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://i.imgur.com/Z5axY.png

-Other Information: I love to play Minecraft, love to mine, love to roleplay, and love building. I hope to see you all in game and I hope to see that my application gets accepted.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

Power/Metagaming [X]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Hmm... let's see, Your definition for roleplay was incorrect, your biography had parts that don't exist in the world of Aegis. Try using actual city names from the accepted server lore.

And Thorin Oakshield doesn't exist.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before