Jimbows App

[Jimbow0512 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Jimbow0512

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: New York

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes But i do make some grammar mistakes here and there.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm in high school, I play sports. And i love to play Minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 15-20 hours a week.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:Since alpha.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Well Role playing is when you act like someone else would. You pretty much step in their shoes and act like them.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it will be awesome since im a huge lotr buff.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Rageland.net Because my old clan was playing on it and i didn't like it because it wasn't role play.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have.

-Name the 4 races on this server:Elf, Human, Dwarf, Orcs. With sub races and noble and ancient.

-How did you hear about us?: Minecraft Forums.

-Did you vote?:Yea

-What was your favourite Law?: No fighting in towns.

-What was your least favourite Law?: They are all good. I like em all.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Jimbow0512

In-Character:

-Character Name: Bliddry

-What is your Race?: Human Northerner.

-Biography: Bliddry was born in a small town. His mother was a noble and his farther was a warrior.His farther was killed in a battle. Bliddry didnt know his farther because he was only a 2 years old. Bliddry mother took her husbands death really hard. She was filled grievances for month's on end. One day she took her own life. So Bliddry was taken by his uncle. And when Bliddry was 13 years old. He said to his uncle that he wants to be like his dad. From that day fourth his uncle trained him in the arts of a warrior. He also was taught how to read and write. Bliddry feels that he need's to honor his furthers death. By becoming a warrior like him. Every day he thinks about what his mother and farther would think about him. Bliddrys goal in life is to honor his farther by becoming as great of a warrior like him. He plans to set out on an adventure that he been planning since the day his uncle adopted him. He learned how to live out in the wild for a while. He learned how to mine ores for tools and weapons. He learned how to build basic houses. His uncle gave him his farther sword and this is the most imporatnt thing ti Bliddry and it will help him become one of the best warriors in the land.

-Character Age: 19

-Character Appearance: Medium sized man with Brown hair and Green eyes.

-Character Personality: Smart, Strong, Short tempered.

-Your ambitions: To become a Town Guard or a soldier. And maybe find a wife.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes his uncle taught him.

-Can your character mine?: He is not the best but if it comes to it he will.

-Are you a capable builder?: No a little square house is fine for him.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes! he was taught since he was a young kid. And Was the best in his little town.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes, But never did anything big.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is very skilled with a sword and a bow. Can survive in the wild for a few days.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: PM for more info about me or Bliddry!

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short or needs more detail.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

[Jimbow0512 0]

I have a question. I followed all the rules. I did 1 paragraph more than 7 sentences. I would like to know whats short about it. I contacted Haldon about my first app and i followed everything he said also. Other than that i just wanna know to improve on.