Aodran 12 Share Posted November 20, 2011 Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: Lefardo -How old are you?: 16 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +2 Greenwich (Finland) -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I`m fare, helpful and smart player and I`ve never kicked out from any server. I like play minecraft and it is one of my favourite games. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10-15 houers. -How long have you played minecraft?: Since last spring. -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I have`nt got a change to roleplay much but I know the roleplaying rules, (stay in your charcter…) but I like the whole roleplaying idea and I think it`s pretty cool. -What do you expect this server will be like?: Exiting, fun and I could finaly get a change to roleplay like it supposed to be done. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Legendary craft and ImDeity Kingdoms. I left them becouse they promice roleplaying and the cold`nt keep that promice. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes I have read, understood, and agreed all the rules. I also read the lore part in forum. -Name the 4 races on this server. Dwarfs, Elfs, Humans and Orcs. There are also Undeads and Acendeds. -How did you hear about us?: I watched a trailer on youtube. -Did you vote?: Yes I did. -What was your favourite Law?: No use of hacks or modified clients. -What was your least favourite Law?: None of them -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? MrConer. In-Character: -Character Name: Aodran. -What is your Race?: Elf -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: MRConer -Biography: Aodran has a passion for learning magic. From early age he left his home to learn magic, see the world and to experience some great aventures. -Character Age: 73 -Character Appearance: Aodran has a blond hair pointy ears (like all elves) And he likes to wear green. Aodran has`nt got a beard. -Character Personality: Aodran is a great archer. He likes to learn new things and he is very ambious. -Your ambitions: To learn magic, study the world of Aegis, an mayby some day to start my own kingdom, or to get as a High Prince of elven council. -Can your character read or write?: Yes. On several languages. -Can your character mine?: Yes. -Are you a capable builder? Yes. -Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but not as well as he can shoot whit a bow. -Enjoy Farming?: Not so much. -Does your character have any special skills?:] Aodran can read any language that is written and he can shoot an ant from hundreds of meters away. -A screenshot of your skin: I don`t know how to get photo over here, or is linking just not working, but I can descrive my charater to you. Aodran has a blond hair, green shirt and trousers and blue eyes. -Other Information: No . Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taiga 764 Share Posted November 21, 2011 Your Application has been... DENIED Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied: Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ] Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ] Powergaming [ ] Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Status [ ] Cliche [ ] Needs Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [ ] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: Your biography is much too short~! Try including city names and things from the world of Aegis by reading the lore. Next, your character can't learn magic unless they are in the Mages Guild, Ascended, or Undead. You can only do this In Game, not in an Application~! If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account! <3 You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before. Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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