My App

[Orn_Eldurbeard 31]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Sillycindikitty

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: New Zealand

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am fun Friendly and i can also be responsible

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 2-3 days weekly

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I have been on many different rp servers so i know to stay in character

-What do you expect this server will be like?: An amazing server with many fun and interesting people

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on many servers such as super earth and i decied to leave it cause My friend told me about LOTC

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and I think the rules are really fair and the lore is interesting

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Dwarf, Elf, and Orc. The two advanced races are the Undead and the Ascended, which come from the Aenguls and Daemons.

-How did you hear about us?: My friend Briton1

-Did you vote?: yes I voted

-What was your favourite Law?: Greifing Defiantly i hate greifers

-What was your least favourite Law?: None i think they are all fair

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? RiverW09

In-Character:

-Character Name: Cinder

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: RiverW09

-Biography: Lost In the woods With Her Older Brother kraros She Knew That she wasny safe but that kraros would do everything to protect her one day kraros came running back From Hunting witch can only mean 2 thing 1 he has news 2 He is running from somting i was shock to know he had fond a village i nice lady called sheha, sheha looked after us till iwas 16 now me and my brother are off to explore

-Character Age: 16

-Character Appearance:

-Character Personality: My character is Friendly She Likes Natural Things and knows when to be serious

-Your ambitions: My ambition is to explore the world and join a village and to Be well know among the elfs

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder? no

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: Being nible

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/elven-scout-351168/

-Other Information:

[Blawharag 277]

Please do not repost your application within 48 hours. Take this time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems with your app. Feel free to contact me on either the Teamspeak channel or through the forums if you have any questions, comments or concerns.

#1 Please provide a definition of what RP is in the "What is Roleplay" question.

#2 Your IC section needs work. Please flesh out and expand upon all the answers here, especially the Biography.

#3 You took every trait except building but provide no explanation as to why. Please give a detailed explanation as to how your character developed each of these traits and make sure they fit with your character. If it doesn't make sense, don't say yes. It's poor RP to do that.

#4 Please proof read your application. Your heavy frequency of grammar errors made this very difficult to read. I don't expect professional level writing, but when you say "witch" instead of "which" and spell "Wasn't" as "Wasny" its difficult to understand what you are trying to say. When I first read "witch" I thought you meant witches and was about to tell you there really aren't witches that are hunted in the world of Aegis (though it's not a bad concept).