Maxsos55's 2nd Application

[Gallan 2]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Maxsos55

-How old are you?: 12

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: UTC+08:00

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar? Yes, But were all Human here, only the occasional mistake.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Every day I come home to my family from school and I play Minecraft. I’ve been looking for a server with a MMORPG feel for ages now. I love Baseball and I pitch for my team, Wembley 15’s.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can play up to 30 hours and at least 5 hours. So I’ll be an active player.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for a good 1 year now.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: To know RP you must see the world through your character’s eyes, smell it through your character’s nose, no, you must BE your character, make the decisions of what you truly want to decide and on top of that you mustn't type YO! and just walk in a door! You must ask if anyone's home and let them open it up for you!

-What do you expect this server will be like?: An epic MMORP Experience, I mean to play with your mates, is that not fun? I think this server deserves to stay #1.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: None. This will be my first.I played with my friend on a survival but ... boring.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely. They make total sense and I agree with every single one.

-Name the 4 races on this server: That would be but not limited to, Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. Not including sub-races and the Undead and Ascendents.

-How did you hear about us?: A website showed this as #1! Plus my friend plays on it, I played on it at his house and I LOVE IT.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Maxsos55

In-Character:

-Character Name: Delarian Leath

-What is your Race?: Human.

-Biography: At the age of just 18, Delarian and his Father, Kaigh, went out to trade with the Elves. The day before they had found an Elfin sword in the ruins of their house and wanted to return it to the Elves for 100 Minas to buy 100 Cobblestone so they could repair their house that had been burned by thugs. The early morning finally turned to dawn as the sun lazily peeped over the horizon. Kaigh quickly glanced up in the direction Malinor, a small band of bandits had charged out of the trees. In the heat of the fray Delarian managed to take out two of the three thugs but when he looked back, the last bandit stabbed Kaigh in the back. Kaigh’s death came quick and cleanly.

Delarian quickly dispatched the last Bandit. Lying next to his father’s silent body, Delarian fell asleep in a heap of tears and his father’s blood. 5 years later Delarian awakes to now, in the Cloud Temple of Aegis.

-Character Age: 23, quite young for a Human.

-Character Appearance: A strong, handsome man with brown hair, he wears leather adventurer clothing and has light-tan skin.

-Character Personality: Loves to fight alongside friends, extremely loyal and will never abandon a good fight. He enjoys a good beer from Al’Khazar.

-Your ambitions: Start fresh and forget the horrors of his hard, past life.

-Can your character read or write?: In his early years he learnt from his dad, he was quick to learn the alphabet.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he is extremely strong and can swing a heavy Pickaxe due to the fact that his father had met a Dwarf and received a few tips.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, he has experience in the work and has helped with a few large builds. He watched his father build sheds and fences and now knows the basics.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, he is very strong and has beaten off many thugs and bandits. He played “Bandits and Guards” with his friends at an early age, which involves rough play and wooden swords.

-Enjoy Farming?: He has been doing it most of his life so he is very skilled with the concept.

-Does your character have any special skills?: No, he is ok at painting nature though.

-A screenshot of your skin: My skin is in the picture: http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/world-of-kaladra/ Or it should be in the attatchments!

-Other Information: Even if I’m not accepted, this is an amazing server, well done! NERVOUS :unsure:

[Trouvo 205]

DENIED

One of the best formatting jobs i have seen in awhile and an excellent understanding of the definition of RP, but lacking in your understanding of character development especially given the time period in which the server is based. You need to fill in your bio a bit more, it is way too short, it doesnt flow and goes back and forth somewhat choppy. Also your character should not be able to do everything, farm, build, mine, fight, that is not a common thing in this time period and makes your character very overpowered and non lore specific.

also for your next application, use the insert image icon to place your skin image in the application so as to avoid the need to view another webpage, and attachments are always too small

Other than character development and bio your application looks really good.

[Gallan 2]

Thanks , a few more days and I'll give you perfection!

Thanks again,

Max