Rumdoodle's application 2

[Zeddicus Fyren 133]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Rumdoodle

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Uk standard GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have a brilliant grip with the language, although i can also speak Russian fluently.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a student and i go to a good college till 4pm. When i get home i tend to do work then play Minecraft, or other games in a similar genre.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'm able to play as much as 10 hours a week minimum.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since the game came out, Alpha to be correct.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I understand that it is taking on a role of a character, this character being your Minecraft character and playing out your adventure through the eyes this person. You are able to see situations and understand and play them as this person does. You can imagine what you want and make it and you can do what you want.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: This server will be unique in many ways, the way that the server lets you play in a game inside a game with it's own meaning and understanding. It will be epic.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Orcworm.co.uk, i left it because it was too plain and nothing ever really happened. Rainbow server, because the owner would not care about the people, but only about the server itself.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely. Without rules there would be no order and no balance.

-Name the 4 races on this server: That would be but not limited to, Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. This is not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: Minestatus showed this server being #1, and a player referred me, by the name of Pravino.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Rumdoodle

In-Character:

-Character Name: Smithson HoneBeard

-What is your Race?: Dwarf with a subclass of a Mountain Dwarf.

-Biography: A young boy set out with a yearning passion, he never wanted to see pain and sorrow as he had seen at a young age. He was brought up to bring justice and peace between the races, but the Orc's remain unruly. His ancestors protected Kal Urgan for centuries, now he had to carry on their will.

He is a veteran of war, never lost a dual, battle, or a beer challenge. Smithson never really aged as a young lad, but the battle scars remained for his personal pleasure. He is referred as a hero, and myths and great stories say his name. He was never given a childhood, as growing up for him had been persistent training, fighting and protection from the wilderness that lay before him. Just before his father was slain protecting Smithson from an attack of Orcs and mobs, he granted the young boy the sword and the trusty pickaxe, with a quick flick of the tongue, Smithson was teleported away from the place he called home. He never found it again, but he persists his quest in search for the person behind the death of his family, whilst he protects the Kal Urgan and his own life in the process.

-Character Age: 127. Aging in number never really affected his appearance.

-Character Appearance: Roams the land with his trusty sword and pickaxe. A large brown beard covers the majority of the lower chest of his body. Battle scars engraved in his face and arms.

-Character Personality: Quiet but brave. Keeps himself to himself, yet, he still looks for the perfect woman to share his life with.

-Your ambitions: Smithson lives her life day by day. He wants to be known yet across the lands, succeed his purpose and then retire to a safekeeping with a grateful wife.

-Can your character read or write?: Very well indeed.

-Can your character mine?: Very skilled. He is a dwarf, it's in their blood.

-Are you a capable builder?: Not very exciting, prefers to build small grotto's in the side of mountains.

-Can you wield a sword?: He is a skilled swordsman and prefers to never leave it's side.

-Enjoy Farming?: Being quite patient, but he never enjoyed it.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is able to hibernate, but of which he is not proud of.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minecraft...0/10/Dwarf1.png

-Other Information: Regardless if I am accepted or not. I would like to say this is an amazing server. Also give credits to Pravino to referring me to this server. (Hope the bio was long enough, i spent some time coming up with the ending of it)

Regards,

-Pete

[Auvreaeath 263]

Please wait 48 Hours before making your next application, your last application was denied a few hours ago. This is a good application you just have several grammar mistakes, you were suppose to wait 48 Hours before making this application and that is all that's keeping you away right now. Please take the time to work on grammar mistakes and maybe add some detail to why your character can or can't do some of the skills at the bottom of you application.

Other then that it looks good and I think you might be a good member in the community just please wait 48 Hours before editing and posting a new application, Thank you.

[Zeddicus Fyren 133]

Ok 1 question, can i repost this?

[Auvreaeath 263]

Hmm, if you mean by repost the application as it is now yes you can, I advise just using this application editing it a little then in 48 hours post it as your third application. If you mean repost in any other way then go into detail please.