[Denied]Viewtivision's Application

[Viewtivision 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Viewtivision

-Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No, I didn't.

-How old are you?: 18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT -6, Central Standard Time, USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: American English. Yes. It's my primary language. My English grades are good and always have been.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I attend university and live on campus. When I'm not at class or doing my homework, I always enjoy gaming. In fact I'm majoring in game development at university right now. Minecraft has been my primary game of choice now for quite some time. I love it!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: No less than 10 hours. Approximately no more than 20 hours. I usually play about an hour (or two, sometimes even three) on the weekdays and then anywhere from 1-5 hours on Saturdays and Sundays. Really depends on what my schedule and availability permits.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Roleplaying is stepping outside of your own shoes. It's escaping reality, becoming creative and taking on a new form or being. Everything and anything you know about your real self, you must toss aside. You must jump into character. Act, talk, and stay true to your character. You are a different being when you roleplay and it's important to stay true to that role you're taking on.

-In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits set by the game, while powergaming is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems with the aim of progressing towards a specific goal.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Epic. I've looked at the map. I've kept up to date with the YouTube channel video excerpts and updates. I expect it to be the best RP server I've joined. I'm excited, I love to RP and this server definitely looks like it has outdone the rest in terms of stability, organization, and of course the visual element.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: ImDeity Kingdoms and Monster Craft. I left ImDeity because I couldn't find a proper group of users to build with and it felt like I was a loner in the server. Monster Craft I only played on for a very short time and didn't like the fact that it was solely PVP for the most part. I'm looking for an RP server and this one seems to be everything I've ever hoped for in a Minecraft server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes. Rules are important. I'm glad this server has them. Without rules, organization and success lack or are non-existent.

-How did you hear about us?: http://minecraftservers.net/

-Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: I have not voted on Minestatus, but I have voted on Minecraftservers.net

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Viewtivision

In-Character:

-Character Name: Necros

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: Meet Necros, an elf whose early experiences with war and violence have crafted him into a humble but brutal fighter. His parents and family were separated from him in a war that hit his old village when he was just a toddler. He has not seen his family since. He now lurks in Aegis, hoping to build, craft, and fight when necessary. Maybe if he's lucky his family members will turn up somewhere in the land alive? Only time will tell!

Character Age: 300 years of age (Just past the years of full maturity)

Character Appearance: Long ears and glowing eyes. Very similar appearance to that of a night elf. Long purpleish hair with a teal like skin tone. Necros has a scar going across the left side of his face. The scar is from a ferocious attack from years past when his old village was invaded. He now finds himself with his family gone, possibly murdered. Aegis is his new home.

Character Personality: Necros is very quiet and reserved. He doesn't like to talk much. It's most likely due to his war torn past. When the time is appropriate though, he will fight for what he believes in and take action.

-Your characters ambitions: Necros is still a growing elf. He has been through events and experiences that most elves his age have not witnessed. He has a troubled past, but it it gives him even more of a reason to fight for his future. He hopes to invest and build with a team of other comrades to ultimately make an established piece of territory within Aegis. He wants to enjoy the company of friends, but also wants to gain power and wealth along with them. He wants to fight anybody that poses a threat to the elven race as a whole. He is a warrior and a builder. He is Necros.

Can your character read or write?: Yes, both.

Can your character mine? Yes, he is completely capable.

Are you a capable builder?: Yes, Necros has built in the past and has experience building structurally impressive buildings and monuments.

Can you wield a sword?: If there is one thing Necros CAN do, it is this. He is an experienced warrior and fighter. The lack of weapons are his only problem, but will be soon resolved.

Farming?: Some very mild experiences with farming, but he doesn't enjoy it and avoids it if he can.

Any special skills?:Necros is very humble and wouldn't like to say anything about him is special. If there was one significant talent or skill that stood above the rest, it would be his weapon wielding and fighting talent. He is a warrior and fighter and takes pride in that.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://i40.tinypic.com/23u6hd0.png

-Other Information: I just wanted to say that this server looks so impressive and I really hope I can start diving into the world of Aegis as soon as possible. Props to the whole team of moderators, developers, programmers, admins, donators, etc... This server is quite astonishing!

[Trouvo 205]

DENIED

Your bio is too short, and your character is overpowered, due to your excellent use of writing i feel i do not need to explain these, please fix and repost after 48hrs. Other than than the bio and character skills you have a well written app, and your definition of rp is very good. If you fix those two things you will have no problem getting on in 2 days

[Viewtivision 0]

Character Bio (revised)

Meet Necros, an elf whose early experiences with war and violence have crafted him into a humble but brave fighter. His parents and family were separated from him in a war that hit his old village when he was just a toddler. He has not seen his family since. He now sets forth to Aegis, hoping to build, craft, and fight when necessary. His timid personality and shyness may be his two biggest downfalls as they will puncture his courage to meet new people and complete his aspirations and goals. Maybe if he's lucky his family members will turn up somewhere in the land alive to help him through these difficult times of being independent. He is ready to train in the ways of elves, focusing on the warrior elements of brute strength and power. He strays away from technical aspects such as engineering or magic and is more focused on weaponry and one on one combat. He is anxious to become part of an established village and work his way up through the ranks and skill sets to achieve his ultimate goal of establishing his own town within Aegis and eventually becoming part of one of the elf guard divisions to bring peace and honor about to his comrades.

Skills (revised): As of right now, Necros really has no special skills coming into this world. He's empty handed, but his vision of becoming a skilled swordsman is very bright. One day his dream may come true and he will be a part of the elven guard, dueling his sword, fighting for peace, honor, and vengeance!

[Trouvo 205]

....ok i will explain then...

your bio should show lots of character development and depth, not a basis or bullet points of his life, talk about his early war experience, and why he thinks brute strength and power are what elves see as power(because they dont), and you cant travel TO aegis, aegis is the land, the world, the planet, that would be like traveling to earth.... and skills i meant

this section

Can your character read or write?:

Can your character mine?

Are you a capable builder?:

Can you wield a sword?:

Farming?:

Any special skills?:

[Viewtivision 0]

....ok i will explain then...

your bio should show lots of character development and depth, not a basis or bullet points of his life, talk about his early war experience, and why he thinks brute strength and power are what elves see as power(because they dont), and you cant travel TO aegis, aegis is the land, the world, the planet, that would be like traveling to earth.... and skills i meant

this section

Can your character read or write?:

Can your character mine?

Are you a capable builder?:

Can you wield a sword?:

Farming?:

Any special skills?:

Character Biography Take 3

Meet Necros, an elf whose early experiences with war and violence have crafted him into a humble but brave fighter. His village was attacked by the undead many years ago due to the greedy land frenzy that accompanied the undead. He watched his Father, a dark elf, fight very viciously to protect the one and only thing that mattered, family. His parents and family were separated from him in this war, unfortunately. He has not seen his family since. He now sets forth on his own in new unknown grounds of Aegis, hoping to build, craft, and fight when necessary. His timid personality and shyness may be his two biggest downfalls as they will puncture his courage to meet new people and complete his aspirations and goals. Maybe if he's lucky his family members will turn up somewhere in the land alive to help him through these difficult times of being independent. He is ready to train in the ways of elves, focusing on the warrior elements of brute strength and power. These matter to him because he witnessed his father (his role model) fight for his life and his family's life during this war. He strays away from technical aspects such as engineering or magic and is more focused on weaponry and one on one combat because that's all he's grown to know based on his war torn past. He wants to fight anything that stands in his way of reuniting with his family. He is anxious to become part of an established village and work his way up through the ranks and skill sets to achieve his ultimate goal of establishing his own town within Aegis and eventually becoming part of one of the elf guard divisions to bring peace and honor about to his comrades.'

Skills take 3

Can your character read or write?: Yes, he has relative knowledge of both. He doesn't enjoy reading, and he writes when necessary.

Can your character mine?: Yes, he's an experienced miner and has explored caverns and mines with his father in the past. He is ready for enemies and knows well how to mix and match ores and materials to enhance the mining and building experience.

Are you a capable builder?: Yes, Necros has designed some architecturally impressive structures in the past. He built the old mansion his family lived in alongside his father, an expert builder himself.

Can you wield a sword?: Necros was never taught to fight, but when he saw his father fighting for the family during with war with the undead, he has seen many of the necessary skills and tactics necessary. He is a fighter. At this point in time, not a very good one, but his goal is to become a strong fighter like his father was.

Farming?: Necros doesn't enjoy farming. He doesn't know much about it because he's never had experience with it in his past life.

Any special skills?: As of right now, Necros really has no special skills coming into this world. He's empty handed, but his vision of becoming a skilled swordsman is very bright. One day his dream may come true and he will be a part of the elven guard, dueling his sword, fighting for peace, honor, and vengeance!

[Trouvo 205]

much much better, OOAT question but you could add the answer, why does your character want to build a village?

you still have to wait the 48 hrs though, but the effort and determination is commendable

[Viewtivision 0]

Necros wants to build for very personal reasons that will impact the public elven areas or homeless elven players. With a village of his own destroyed, he wants to create a safe area for others so that they do not need to experience family separation and violence like he did in years past.