darkhawk645's application(proper one)

[darkhawk645 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: darkhawk645

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No.

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT/England

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:First language and yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I an happy to help out and ask questions but if someone is being stupid or is to lazy to do something i wont help/

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: lots of time on the weekends and Fridays but little time on weekdays

What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:You can't just say the name above peoples heads you have to be introduced and use their Rp name.Definition RolePlay: Taking on the role as a charcter made up by someone or you and acting out as if you were that person.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are: Metagaming is when for example a player goes up to another player who they haven't met or know their name in RP and say oh hello darkhawk645 or James tarmey. Powergaming when a player uses Role play but does not let the other player have a chance to resist e.g. * I grab darkhawk645 by the throat and ram my sword into his heart killing him instantly*

What do you expect this server will be like?: Fun and a great experience as thats what many people have told me.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: My family one (sometimes still play it) Dizzy craft and remypas.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have I totally agree with them and will follow them.

How did you hear about us?: People I knew talking about it saying how fun it is and people on servers talking about it.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No not yet I will do that very soon now.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:darkhawk645

In-Character:

Character Name: Quentin hawk

What is your Race?:Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Born into a middle class he was raised to be an archer for the king when he was 16 he saw guards attack a defenceless old man, rage built up inside him and he attacked the guards, many people had witnessed this and he ran away deep in the woods he meet some bandits who taught him everything they knew and then Quentin parted with them to continue his life, he is now 24 and he is clean shaven and he wears a green outfit with a quiver full of arrows on his back.

Your characters ambitions: Become a famous member of a faction and the best archer in the land.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Aids his fellow bandits rob the elf,not killing the elf but crippling it taking his share of the loot and leave it there to die.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?: " I'd like to see your stock of bows, mine is becoming old and is not working as good as it used to work..

A screenshot of your skin:

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Other Information:I will be joining a faction that a friend runs and if I don't get in keep up the good work as many people have told me how amazing this server is..

[DoubleDeetz (Fomsil) 237]

Please wait 48 hours between making new Applications.

[Salamandra 1136]

Just some tips to help you out:

1. Your biography is one sentence. Please expand more on your character, and create a better background story for them. Remember, you're trying to make the application reviewer want you to play on the server.

2. Format is all funky. You have a bunch of 's all over the place, and to add to that, It's difficult to tell what the questions are compared to your answers. Try only bolding the questions, to make your application more appealing.

3. Expand more on the scenarios at the end, they give little to no detail at all.

:mrgreen: Hope this Helps!

[Shadehealer 4]

And maybe do something about your screenshot too, it should be a picture.