Irishsailors Request To Join The Lands

[Irishsailor 0]

irishsailor

no i could not make it due to work and school

26

-8gmt / USA California

English is my first language

Love Roleplay read almost all R.A Salvators books and played alot of D&D games. Play minecraft daily once home from work and love exploring and building not so much pvp.

I can play almost daily sometimes im gone over weekends tho.

Roleplaying to me means creating another world to become apart of, it means creating an alter personality and living it RP is only limited to your imagination that is why its so great.

Metagaming is not staying in character or using real life knowledge to play with, its not supposed to be used because it takes u out of character.

Powergaming is one sided RP. RP is only as good as the others participating, if one powergames and does stuff on there own what is the point to being in a server with many individuals.

I expect this server to provide a stable fun RP server i can explore and get to know many other characters in. Enjoyable but not overpowered. Gives some challenge to not just free itms i like to take pride in what i work for.

I have played on herocraft, buxville, minescape a few other no names. I have left due to too much lag, cheating players, no challenge, no community, boring playing by ones self.

Yes i have read, understand, and agree to all stated rules.

I have seen Lord of the craft on the forums and a few other players on the server.

I have voted on minestatus and i was the 2,991 vote

My forum account is irishsailor

I like my irishsailor but for RP i might need to use my ShadowHuntsman

IrishSailor Of decided that that is not RP enough i will go by ShadowHuntsman

Half-Elf raised by mother since Wood Elf father left

I was born with Long sharp ears so I guess i took to my fathers Race as an Elf my mother named be Elrik but from a very young age i took to the trees hiding in shadows hunting game wherever i could so Shadow Huntsman or just Huntsman was what i was used to. My mother was a Gaelic Wood Sprite raised by a nomadic tribe and my father a proud Wood Elf Thatcher and exceptionable Marksman. When i was young around 30 Moons, we were going though kelrec woods and were attacked by an unusual group of halflings and gnomes. My father saved us but lost half his right ear and lacerated left brow. We found another clans hideaway where we spent the night. When my mother woke My father had left to seek out the raiding party Who had been seen leaving the shores headed to the land of Aegis.We never saw my father since but I had the privledge of being raised by my mother and another spirited Tree Spirit named Rottroot, Childhood was spent training in the use of a bow and learning to use the woods as a means of survival, Once i went through my adulthood rights to become a full member of the clan at 60 Full moon cycles i decided i would not stay longer in the safe woods but wanted to venture out and find if my father ever survived. I said goodbye to my mother and Rottroot took up my bow and took to the seas. Due to my ... little... love for the new found mead and liquors the sailors would so often slip me i was henceforth just called IrishSailor. Im still looking for my father and have found myself on a coast of Aegis, I shall seek out all those who know of Wood elf passings. Ill head to Malinor and the Cloud Temple to start the next stage of my adventure!

My ambitions shall be yo learn all i can in the arts of Archery and Tracking. To make new friends and start a roaming clan of my own who might someday come across my fathers whereabouts!

First I take out my Spruce sapling bow String an arrow. Move Closer Yelling at the Bandits to turn and run away before im forced to let loose!

Thank you good sir you can call me Huntsman or IrishSailor, im here seeking a good bow and possible some arrows, One more thing before i go would you happen to know the whereabouts of Wood elves in the area? Im seeking one with a scare above his left eye and half an ear on the right?

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Looking forward to adventuring in your lands and looking forward to the experience that follows.

[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

Denied.

If you were playing on a fantasy/medieval server with real world cultures you would be set! However this is an RP server. We have our own lore and we do not have Gaelic mothers or gnomes, (but we do have forest dwarves go figure.)

From what I can gather you have explored the server adequately enough to know the Elven country along with the cloud temple. This is good but it seems you did not get enough information to squeak by on your application.

As for the name thing. A name like Irishsailor or Shadowhuntsman would not make sense. Stick with Elrik, I actually like that as a name for an elf. Our server has a plugin that allows you to set your name. For instance I am wardog4445 but my server name shows up as Ser William Baldwin.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10 Look here to brush up on your lore for the server and your next application.

Now for the actual application itself, what you need to fix.

-Formatting, I have read apps enough to know what questions were being answered, but you do need to follow the format that is provided here http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-form/

Copy that into your next draft and answer the questions as you proceed, but leave the questions there.

-character bio, Naturally because most of the lore is wrong you will need to revise this completely.

-Grammar, you just have a few missing punctuation marks and spelling errors nothing too big but proper grammar will help your cause.

PROS OF YOUR APP! :D YAY COMPLIMENTS!

- Liked your definitions of power and meta, they were original and I could tell they were your own because of the grammar.

- I liked the Al'khazar shopkeeper sample question, not so much the bandit question but I have seen worse answers to that one. but not many....

- I liked your apparent RP experience. A seasoned roleplayer like you is always welcome on this server, you just need to provide an app that is up to our standard of Roleplay.

IN REVIEW:

check the links I provided, work on what I told you to fix and the next time around you should be accepted. Remember not to reapply until 2 days have passed.

[Alan 1815]

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[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

Moved to Denied Forum