Submission 5#

[Dalax1257 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:Dalax1257

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

What is your deffinition of metagaming and powergaming: I belive metagaming is planing through unknow causes such as Skype or vent with other people as if you have a telapathic link. Powergaming is making yourself all powerfull as if you are a god here is a example "I use my burning fire!" "Nope fire and ice dont phaze me."

How old are you?:18

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States Of America Moutain Standard Time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I belive I do I may misspell words sometimes as I have a small keyboard

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a fun and active guy and I love to roam arround in some games, I belive if you set your mind to it you can achive it. I think im a good builder, I have designed some creations, I do wish to be a architect In my future career.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:In the afternoons because I have school.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:Roleplaying means playing the role of your character and becoming who you imagine yourself to be, playing your role doing your part its all the same, you can imagine your future.

What do you expect this server will be like?:A fun and energetic server with lots of people to play with.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on a few other roleplay servers but most of them are abbandoned with no one to play with.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

How did you hear about us?:Petridagamernerd played on your server and I though "thats what I need a roleplay server with alot of people on!"

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: I have voted and my number was 3,771

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Dwarven-guy

In-Character

Character Name: Olgslaugh Harneld

What is your Race?:Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):As A young boy I relized my dreams, the dreams of fame fourtune and being well known, I had always wanted to be an adventurer. As I matured I started geting deals from merchants, they would give my quests of sorts and I would do the task I started realizing I was shaping to be a fine adventurer. One day I was walking down the allies and a man told me to stop, I did and looked back, he was wearing a cloak and holding a dagger. I laughed and said "how dare you challenge me!" and he charged. His death was done with two swift blows of my hammer. I lifted the robe and it turrned out he was one of my employers he wanted the money he had payed me. I shook my head and left him. I am 26 years old and I have gold chains on my wrists with a fine musky red beard.

Your characters ambitions:To become the greatest adventurer ever known

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?: run up to the aid of the elf whit hammer in hand I grab the elf and shove him aside as I crack teh two bandits heads together then slam one into a nearby trea, the other bandit starts fleeing into the woods I grab the first one and tell him "leave or face my wrath." He runs as fast as he can. I walk up to the elf and ask if he is alright, and he gives me some money, I continue walking into the forest still on a quest.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?: "Do you ahve any tasks? I will do anything of your bidding." He nods and motions his head to the back of the shop. "well I have been seeing some shady figures arround latley... I hear you can handle them." I replie "I can and will." I wait for these people to come by and I see them at last they wore robes as black as midnight I ran up to one and said "The shop owner dosnt want you here anymore." They look at me and rush I grab my hammer and swing knocking the first two of there feet, they suddenly turn to dust, I was to awestruck to see teh other one leave. I knew who they were. They were undead. I walked back to the shop owners shop and said "they were undead...." he looked at em with alarm and I rose my hand "but i dealt with them." He nodded and handed me a small sack of money.

A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/a-dwarf-from-wow/ If you cant click on the link, copy and paste it into the top bar.

Other Information:A long time went into the making of these stories. I hope to be on the server soon, see ya all later.

[MartinDaMartian 62]

Your idea of metagaming is a bit off but the powergaming idea is ok

[James Undercroft 129]

As martinvilla822 has not given a verdict I will give you one.

Your application has been:

But don't loose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on. Also check out the links at the bottom of this page, trust me they really help.

As martinvilla822 said your metagaming definitions needs some work. Do a Google search or search the forums and read the links at the bottom of this page and you will find out in no time.

Secondly your biography contains traces of powergaming as you cannot just "crack teh two bandits heads together then slam one into a nearby trea". Also I would like you to include some lore into your biography such as place names, kingdom names events and/or people. You can find all about the lore of Lord of the Craft in the wiki link at the bottom of this page.

Your RP questions need a bit of work. In this server you cannot "No-RP" kill such as what is shown in the RP questions. This means that RP must be done such as talking from BOTH PARTIES INVOLVED (not just you shouting "You die now") and then combat may commence. Likewise you may not even do this and attack an innocent if you do not have a villain application.

I also recommend http://spellcheckplus.com/ to help you with your spelling and grammar. This website can show you exactly where you have gone wrong and will explain to you how to fix it and the rules involved.

Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped.

If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums.

Good luck :)

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

All the lore of the world of Aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

Information about the skills system:

http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Skill_Information

F.A.Q of Application submissions:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

[James Undercroft 129]

Moved to Denied Forum