Deadlyspacemonkeys Application

[DeadlySpacePig 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:deadlyspacepig

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern Us and Canada time and i live in Ontario Canada Toronto

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Quite well yes born in a english country very good grammar for my age.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:A very imaginative minecraft player.Someone who loves telling stories.I go to dungeons and dragons on monday to Rp im a half-elf theif in it btw.im energetic fun outgoing and friendly but i do enjoy playing evill rp charecters hehehehehe.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Probably about 3 days a week atleast

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:Roleplaying is you expressing your imagination and pretending your a charecter that you are not.for example im halfius ironsword the human i do not turn down challanges I am a brave soul who hates elves etc.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are:Powergaming is where you have insane and unfair power like if you hit them and their instantly dead.Metagaming is when a charecter knows something his charecter shouldnt know but he knows it anyway and he uses it for his advantage.

What do you expect this server will be like?:A good rp server that attualy is about rping unlike various other servers i find when is scroll down server lists i mean they never attualy rp its all just fake unlike this where you can be a elf and a dwarf etc

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on Darkcraft a survival server.I never attualy quite left i go on it with my friends when they go on i mean this server i think i would enjoy more but you get it you have to be with your friends :)

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about us?:Looking for a Good rp server that reaches my expectations and i found this

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:No sorry

In-Character:

Character Name:Starius

What is your Race?:Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): My charecter is a 25 year old male dwarf.he is quite energetic especialy if he has had a few beers.He comes from a family of Mercinaries as he trains to be one himself to master the arts of bounty hunting.Unlike most dwarves that grow up in snowlands he grew up in a small swampy town called Vinitar he enjoys Doing villanious things ever since he was a child he has been terrorizing and punching kids his age.He got the name starius becuase he was born under the stars at midnight in his town.he has a black beard naturaly but he dyes it different colours and curls like any other dwarf though.Even though he has a jokester villanous hummourous personality he is trustable to get a job done as a mercenary.He is also Outgoing and fun.Now on to his story. One day on a starry night a baby dwarf was born his name was starius.as he grew up he began to learn mearcanary skills like tricking the enemy or backstabbing him.Everyday his father gralo and his mother margra used to take him to the beer store to buy him a little.His friends at school always loved him as he was humorous and the funniest person around.He grew up to have the exact same humor but also grew a sense of villany.Today starius is a well trained mercenary and is trained in the ways of it.He has two sibilings roin and soin.One day a evill elven warrior named gladius killed his brother soin and he swares revenge no matter what.He also always had a intrest in alchemy and blacksmithing.

His parents always told him when he was little you cant be a mercenary without a team they always suggested the dark brotherhood to me they said they were free from having to follow rules and do acts that are always good they could choose the path they wanted to choose.He went to the college of assasians to train his skills as one.He was the best student in the class so his teacher gave him a dagger not just any dagger a magical one it had been enchanted with a shooting star power my parents told me this is very rare.They told me to treasure it forever and so i did and noone shall ever touch it but me.I am quite nimble for a dwarf i prefer shortbows and dual swords as it was what i was taught to use.if i he had to choose a race he hated it would always be the elf.they terrorized him since he was a child and so him and the elves are sworn enemies.

Your characters ambitions:He wants to learn more in the ways of a mercenary and take revenge for his brother and follow his family line.he wants to learn how blacksmith and be a alchemist.he wants to learn more about the world

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?:Kill The two bandits.Ask the elf to join my bounty hunting team.To get revenge

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?:Pardon me good sir but do you have any good weaponry or potions.Anyway how is buisness doing.have any new stories or gossip i could use some right now.

A screenshot of my skin:http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/dwarf-black-beard-737/ copy it and then paste it in the web thats my skin

Any Other Info:Nope thats about it.Hope i get in :)

[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

Denied.

Things you need to revise.

-Grammar, the worst grammar is at the end with your biography as well as the scenario questions, please fix this for your second app.

-Biography, you need to revise this almost completely as well, expand on your character. We need to ensure that you can write your own lore well enough before contributing to the server's with your character.

Suggestions

-Skin, You don't need to change it, but come on. A black bearded Honeydew? Do something that actually looks like a dwarf instead of something that looks like it's out of "adventure time".

[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

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