Firradaia 3 Share Posted January 9, 2012 Out-Of-Character: Jonathan Minecraft Account Name: Whoba Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No How old are you?: 14 Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Austrailia Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like minecraft and want to try something now but i still want to play minecraft. I hope this sever will help me improve my rp skills. How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 12 hours. What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Ropeplaying to me is when you take at role of a character, And have to stay in the borders of what that character can do. In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming is defined as any out of character action made by a player's character which makes use of knowledge the character is not meant to be aware of.Powergaming is playing to achieve a goal, with lack of attention to the storyline and atmosphere of a game. What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be a new experience, and hope that it will be different to other server's. What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Minehaven, I bored got bored of the same old thing. Mikeland Faction, the server just started crashing alot. Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have read and I do understand the rules. How did you hear about us?: FalconByte Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes and i was number 1,161 What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Weragus In-Character: Weragus Character Name: Whoba What is your Race?:Dwarf Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Childhood: Relgard childhood was a slow one he spent most of his time out in the wilds down a mine with his father, who loved mining and it was hard to get him out of the mine but when they did they would spend time together making weapons and. From time to time the would go fishing and one day when they did this, this huge shark attacked them while on the water, the but survived but Weragus lost two fingers and now is two scared of water to even take a bath. Current Life: Weragus current life is basic try to survive, but he prefers to spend his time in big city's looking at the huges buildings, he hopes to one day move to Alras where his fathers friend Falcon has a home. Weragus Father died not to long before Weragus was about to leave and head to the city of Alras. His father left him one note and it read: Dear son if ye are reading this then i am gone, i hope that you can continue on without me. I want you to go and find my friend falcon, he has a home in Alras so i think you may find him there, and can you tell him that he owns me a favor and that he must look after you. Your characters ambitions: Relgard hopes to one day regain his love from mining. but for now he wants to journey to Alras and find his fathers friend Falcon. And then join the guild his father talked about. Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Would do his best to scare the bandits but if they would not leave the elf alone Relgard would be forced to kill them. Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? I would like some ale to drink away the sad thoughts of my father's recent death. A screenshot of your skin: sketch (17).png (897bytes) Number of downloads: 2 Other Information: 2 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Undercroft 129 Share Posted January 9, 2012 Your application has been: But don't loose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on. Also check out the links at the bottom of this page, trust me they really help. I noticed you deleted the little tags for what ever reason. Make sure that you leave them at the end of the question (DO NOT add them to the end of your answer) so that it makes the questions in bold. For example, it would look like this: [u]Out-Of-Character:[/u] Jonathan [b]Minecraft Account Name:[/b] Whoba [b]Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:[/b]No [b]How old are you?:[/b] 14 And turn out like this: Out-Of-Character: <--(By the way, this is not a question :P) Minecraft Account Name: Whoba Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No How old are you?: 14 See the difference? You biography is missing some information, namely the "age, appearance and personality" part. Make sure you include this into your application next time. I would like to see at least a PARAGRAPH for each role-play question and make sure for the combat question you abide by the rules of combat for the server. In role-play you will need to warn a villain before engaging in combat. At least a couple of lines from each person is needed for combat to initiate or it is considered a no-rp kill and you can get banned on the server for it. Do not just write: I suddenly pull out my sword and kill the bandits. Then I ask the elf for money for helping him. Write a dialogue as well as the actions of all those involved. This goes as well for the shop question, do not just write a single line, write a full scene. Write the actions of all involved in the situation and what they say, how they interact with each other. I want to see how good you REALLY ARE at RPing and I want you to try as hard as you can when answering these questions. You have not included a skin. For me to accept you I must be able to view your skin as I need to judge whether it is acceptable for this server. 1. Go in-game and press the “F5” button TWICE. (Not once as this will show the back of your character) 2. Take a screen shot by pressing the "PrntScr" button on a windows computer or press F2 on the keyboard, then go to start => Run and type in this: %appdata%/.minecraft/screenshots 3. Find the screenshot and open it in an image manipulation program such as Paint or Gimp.4. Crop the image so that only the area close to your skin (including the skin) remains. 5. Save the file and go to tinypic.com 6. Upload the file 7. Click ONCE on the text box underneath: "IMG Code for Forums & Message Boards" 8. Right click and copy the entire text 9. Paste in your new application *Note* If you want a tutorial for Macs, please send me a message on the forums. Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped. If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums. Good luck :) Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted: To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/ Tips to definitely include on your application: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A must-read guide to the world of aegis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ All the lore of the world of Aegis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page Information about the skills system: http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Skill_Information F.A.Q of Application submissions: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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