Azune Applcation

[Zamaru42 53]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: zamaru42

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

- I did not attend tominecon

How old are you?:

-15 almost 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence :

-UTC/GMT -5 hours/Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

-yes, I do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

- I am six feet tall, Ihave brown hair, I love minecraft and most of my friend say I’m weird

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

-about 18 hours ormore

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means toyou.

-I know lots aboutrole-play; I’m in a larp group and sometimes play dnd. Role playing is when aperson changes his behavior or personality to play or act as someone else.

In your own Words,describe what Meta gaming and Power gaming are.

-meta gaming is whenyou use outside information that you did not get in the game, like if yourfriend tells you something in irl.

-power gaming is it means to have "Super Powers" Or to dosomething in game that you cannot do in real life or Role Playing things which may be impossible to do,leaving the other player no chance to fight back. Power gaming people usuallyfocus most on his character.

What do you expect this server will be like? :

-I expect it to be alarge group of people just like me who want to have a great time byroleplaying.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

-I have joined the rpserver nations at war; I’m quitting them because I understood that it isn’t anrp server but more a pvp. Recently trying shaboozey.com server

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? :

-I have read,understood, and agreed to the rules

How did you hear about us?:

-I watched yourtrailer about a month ago.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus?

-Which vote numberwere you? Yes I have, if I understand well I’m 852.<br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;">

What is your TheLord Of Craft forum account name? : azune

In-Character:

Character Name:

-azune<br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;">

What is your Race?:human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life aswell as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

-born of a merchant and a house wife, I was raised likeany other child, I had many friend because I was very humoristic, from the ago9-13 I learn the way of the merchant from my father, he thought me how tocount, read, and write. At the age of 14, my village was attacked by a group ofbandits, it was there that my father died right in front of my eyes, I then sworerevenge on the bandits who killed all his family. A few months later, I foundwere the bandits were hiding. I charged at them, like there was no tomorrow, ofcourse they easily Disarm me. They locked me up and sold me to a slavemerchant. I was destined to fight in an arena; it was there were I got my firstkill. I fought because I had to, because I wanted to survive. I eventually gotbetter and better and managed to become the best, but every day I wished offreedom. And then my lucky day came, bandits, those who I swore to kill,attacked the arena. In the chaos I got away. I followed a road for miles andfound a small town, arriving in the small town, I fainted. From what the villagerssaid I was left there for a whole day until an old man passed by and helped me.He took care of me and helped me get back to health. I owed my life to him andworked for 2 years in his farm until he got old and died. His last wish was forme to carry on his family tradition by joining the ranks of Al’Khazar’s army. Atthe age of 20 I was recruited.at the age of 25, I left the army after servingmy years and went back laboring the fields or the old man. From here on is thesame for everyone else from aegis, the undead attacked and the world wasruined. I fled like everyone else. Asulon is now my home. From here on, myhistory had not yet been written.

Your characters ambitions: survive and thrive in the new world, Asulon and maybetry and remake the old man’s house for good time sake.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside,there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does yourcharacter do?

-I look around for somekind of weapon and pick my choice on a stick. I charge at the bandits and tryto disarm them whit the stick. I manage to disarm one of them and take hissword. I take a fighting stance and prepare for combat. The bandit charged atme. I block and trust the sword in the bandit’s neck opening his artery; heslowly dies of loss of blood. The other bandit run’s away seeing his frienddying. I turn around and find out that the elf fainted because of the blood. Ileave him there thinking ^he probably knows where he is^

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello,my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you withtoday?" How does your character answer?

-Greeting sir, wouldyou happen to have some information were I could buy some coal?

A screenshot of your skin: (well, i'm trying to attach, but its still not working.but my skin is on my other application's.)(the error says: The server returned an error during upload)

Other Information: Ps: kirederf777 is also my account I just got hacked orsomething so I changed my account for my backup one. I will never give up!

I'm really sry if its not exacly 48h, I don't have the same time as you and i think i posted my last application at 7(my time), so this should be ok...

[James Undercroft 129]

Your application has been:

But don't lose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on. Also check out the links at the bottom of this page, trust me they really help.

Try to format it a little better, for example instead of:

[b]Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

add a

[/b]

at the end of the ":" to make this:

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

While not necessary it just makes it easier to read.

The grammar in this application isn't really good. If you have a problem with english just make sure you say so or we may think you were lying. For example make sure all starts of sentences start with a capital letter, make sure all sentences end in a full stop and make sure every word is seperated by a space. I reccomend this website for grammar and spell checking: http://spellcheckplus.com/

Just copy and paste your entire application into there and it will explain to you where you have made mistakes.

I think your biography could do with a little work. The ideas you have used are rather cliche and some of them do not make any sense. For one thing why would bandits attack an arena full of fighting slaves when there are much more suitable areas such as towns which actually have loot. Perhaps the bandits attacked a town that the arena was located in? Also bandits killing parents or orcs killing parents are used quite a lot in applications. If you come up with a more origional idea we are much more likely to accept you, but you do not have to. Just a suggestion :) Also I like how you used the world lore towards the end, but try to use more all throughout the application with town names, people names or events and the such.

I would like to see at least a PARAGRAPH for each role-play question and make sure for the combat question you abide by the rules of combat for the server. In role-play you will need to warn a villain before engaging in combat. At least a couple of lines from each person is needed for combat to initiate or it is considered a no-rp kill and you can get banned on the server for it. Do not just write:

I suddenly pull out my sword and kill the bandits. Then I ask the elf for money for helping him.

Write a dialogue as well as the actions of all those involved. This goes as well for the shop question, do not just write a single line, write a full scene. Write the actions of all involved in the situation and what they say, how they interact with each other.

I want to see how good you REALLY ARE at RPing and I want you to try as hard as you can when answering these questions.

You have not included a skin. For me to accept you I must be able to view your skin as I need to judge whether it is acceptable for this server.

1. Go in-game and press the “F5” button TWICE. (Not once as this will show the back of your character)

2. Take a screen shot by pressing the "PrntScr" button on a windows computer or press F2 on the keyboard, then go to start => Run and type in this: %appdata%/.minecraft/screenshots

3. Find the screenshot and open it in an image manipulation program such as Paint or Gimp.4. Crop the image so that only the area close to your skin (including the skin) remains.

5. Save the file and go to tinypic.com

6. Upload the file

7. Click ONCE on the text box underneath: "IMG Code for Forums & Message Boards"

8. Right click and copy the entire text

9. Paste in your new application

*Note* If you want a tutorial for Macs, please send me a message on the forums.

Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped.

If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums.

Good luck :)

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

All the lore of the world of Aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

Information about the skills system:

http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Skill_Information

F.A.Q of Application submissions:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

[James Undercroft 129]

Moved to Denied Forum