Thehobbit's Second Application

[TheHobbitGames 1]

Minecraft Account Name:

My Minecraft account is TheHobbitGames.

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No i didn't.

How old are you?:

I am 16 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

The Netherlands

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes i have.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm an nice guy from Holland. i like RPG's so u play games like skyrim like the person would do and stay that way.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I could be on about 5-7 hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Roleplaying is when you choose a character then act like you are him/her. You have to think like they would think, act like they would act, and feel like they would feel. In role playing, players become interactive. They step out of their normal roles and into another role -- often one that opposes their own goals and values. In this way, for example, an environmental activist and an industrial representative might change roles for purposes of the exercise. By presenting their own interpretation of how their characters would react, participants are often enlightened about the attitudes and behavior of others. You can roleplay on games or in real life such as, when you and your spouse pretend to be out on a first date, even though you have been married for ten years.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming is when you use out-of-character information in-character such as telling who someone is by looking at the name above there head.

Power gaming is it means to have "Super Powers" Or to do something in game that you cannot do in real life.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think the server will have an active community with al lot of things to do.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on some servers but i left because the community wasn't very active.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes i have.

How did you hear about us?:

I first got to know about the server on Youtube.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

Yes i have my number is :3,459

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

TheHobbitGames

In-Character:

Character Name:

My character's name is Gloin

What is your Race?:

My character's race is human.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I was born in a small village deep in the wilds. At the age of 16 I was hunting to feed my family until one day I saw bandits sneaking to the village. I pulled out my bow and pulled back an arrow. Before I could shoot I stepped on a stick and the bandits looked at me. The 3 bandits ran towards me so I shot one. Before I could draw another arrow they were to close so I pulled out my knife. I could take down one but the last pushed me to the ground. I thought I would die. Before he could kill me an arrow came out of of the bushes into the bandits back. When I got back up I saw someone run away. I ran after him till I got hit by something. I woke up on a boat. When I got up I saw some monks. I asked where are we going. One of the monks said somewhere safe.

Your characters ambitions:

Gloin wants to live a nice but quite live and help other people. But in his hart he still wants revenge.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

I saw the bandit harassing an unarmed man, he was defiantly going to need help in the next few second or he was good as dead. I couldn't bare to be to blame for the crime if I was found here but I didn't want to be burdened with more gilt... I run at them screaming the stopped and turned to fast for me. They both countered my attack and one shoved me back. I fell. They looked around and the elf was gone. He had escaped! I thanked the gods and got up. They turned to me again, I got and retrieved my sword, and swung. I hit one mans sword hard which knocked him of balance. I pulled away and thrust by sword into his chest. The other man had caught up to me to late to save his partner but not to late to try and kill me, he swung his sword and I saw nearly to late, I with drew and he hit my sword rather than my neck, I let go of my sword and withdrew my dagger. He then landed a blow to my back crippling me and bruising my back.

I fell on to my back painfully, he stood over me. Then his eyes went wide. He fell on top of me

I pushed him off and lay there. An elf holding a bow stood over me and held out their hand to me.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

Ogling asks to buy some food and supplies. Then asks if the shop worker know where he can get a job.

A screenshot of your skin:

http://imageshack.us...0127184531.png/

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

Overall, you still have a lot of problems from the last time your application was denied that you need to fix up before reposting.

Roleplaying definition is still copied from the web.

Your biography needs a lot more detail to develop your character. Right now it only describes the event leading to your seperation from your village, but you should also write about what kind of person your character is and what they are like. You should also continue the story past waking up in the boat, obviously your character has done a lot since then.

Your second open response question : Ogling? Your character's name is Gloin. You need a lot more detail and dialogue here.

The link to your skin does not work.

[Rhisereld 317]

Moved to Denied Forum