Owen Silver-Tooth Nardin 0 Share Posted January 27, 2012 Out-Of-Character: Minecraft Account Name: BlaDrzz Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No, maybe next time? How old are you?: 16 Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+1, Brussels Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I do commentaries on youtube, nobody ever told me my english was not good. Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm born at 11sept 2012 and I'm a gamer since 2002. I like playing mmorpg's. I don't like learning for school or doing the dishes. Sometimes I can get really mad but I will never rage. How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 4Hours/day on weekdays, 10hours/day on weekends/schooloff. What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Living your own life in a "want to be" character. In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. power gaming: Doing something that is not in your character abilities. Meta gaming: Using OOC information in-character. What do you expect this server will be like?: Heavy-RP, great buildings,... What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: My own personal servers(3creative, 5Survival, 7Custom map, no players), Server of a friend(medieval rp, no players), Vaultcraft(survival, to much griefers). Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I did. How did you hear about us?: Friends of me told me about this server. Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No, but I will when I'm accepted. What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: BlaDrzz In-Character: Character Name: What is your Race?: Human Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Name: Wilfried Orgborn Gender: Male Race: Human Age: 38 Weaknesses When I was an 8year old boy many childeren bullied me because of my appearence. So When someone says: "You're fat" I will rage. Personality I am kind and defensive. I help people out when they need me. But I am a lone wolf. Appearence Small(but not dwarflike small). Rather fat. Long beard and brown hear. Nordic looking clothes from my hometown. History I was born in a small woodcutters town in a snow biome. That's how I got resistance to almost all cold. My mom(Housewife) and my dad(Farmer) teached me everything they know. They wanted to make me a farmer. Just like my dad. On a fine day(age of 12) when I left off to play with friends an old dwarve came to us and told us that we had to leave the town. Otherwise bandits would come to violance and they would destroy the town. We were still young so we ran away and went playing on another piece of land. As the dwarf predicted the Bandits came with around 12 men to capture our town. He murdered my parents and everyone lower than 16year where kept and hold in their small kingdom. So I grew up as a miner of the Bandits. As soon as we(I and my friends)hitted 16 we where allowed to leave the city and become an enemy of the Bandits OR we could stay in the town and live unhappy as miners. My friends stayed at that town but I really wanted to be a farmer. So I left. Naked I left the kingdom and I had to survive by eating apples and using leaves as clothes. I arrived at my old town and I found my mum and dad murdered on the bed. I took my dads clothes and hoe and I started reordering the farms. 5years passed(21Years old) A group of young men and ladies passed my barn. I welcomed them with bread and ale. They where so thankful that they wanted to stay. We buried the bones of the death couples and we rebuilded the city. So we lived for 15years. And babys where born. It was time for me to live in peace on a small farm. I left the town once again and so I arrived in Asulon where my journey begins. Your characters ambitions: Becomming the owner of a huge farm. Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Readies his sword and helps the elf! Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? -What do you have for me? *Everything you need -Ok can I buy some food please? *Sure, cooked beef: X$, cooked chicken: Y$, cooked pork: Z$ -2Chickens please {pays 2*Y$} *Gives chickens -Thanks! *Come again! A screenshot of your skin: Other Information: // Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Undercroft 129 Share Posted January 28, 2012 Your application has been: But don't lose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on. Also check out the links at the bottom of this page, trust me they really help. Your definition for powergaming is incorrect or partially correct but not the definition we are looking for; to find out the correct definition you can do a google search, join our Team Speak channel and ask around or search for Powergaming on our wiki. Please make sure you have voted as it is a requirement to join the server. The link to the website is here: http://www.minestatus.net/6317-the-lord-of-the-craft/vote To find your vote number look at the total number of votes for this server, because you were the latest to vote, this number is your vote number. If you do not want to vote because you don’t know if the server is worth your vote or not, have a look at some videos, look around the forms and ask around on Team Speak, if you do not like what you see/hear don’t vote and don’t join. On this server we do not think of things as "Snow biomes" and the sort of terminology you would hear people say when talking about minecraft. This is an RP server so your character or you would be talking as if it was real life. So instead of "snow biome" it would be something like "towards the north in a snowy village of ..." . Also instead of writing all the different parts of the biography under different headings, try to incorperate it into one big story. For example: Jeoffry was a relativley small middle aged male human, coming up to about 160 cms and has short hair and a very deep green eyes. He can generally be found wearing a long brown adventurers cloak, a sword at his hip and a bow strapped across his back, although for the life of him he would never be found holding an axe or a hoe, he finds menial tasks for those he calls "peasants" and prefers the "noble" tasks of combat. He likes to defend the weak, but he has an eye for money which... If you write it like this, it will definately help you getting accepted. We would like you to include some lore from the world of Aegis and/or Asulon such as names of towns and people, or even events which have happened before and your characters connection to the event. You can find all about the lore of Lord of the Craft here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page,'>http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page, or in the lore/history sections of the forum and website. For example you could write my character was born in the elven kingdom of . . . or near the human fort of . . . I would like to see at least a PARAGRAPH for each role-play question and make sure for the combat question you abide by the rules of combat for the server. In role-play you will need to warn a villain before engaging in combat. At least a couple of lines from each person is needed for combat to initiate or it is considered a no-rp kill and you can get banned on the server for it. Do not just write: I suddenly pull out my sword and kill the bandits. Then I ask the elf for money for helping him. Write a dialogue as well as the actions of all those involved. This goes as well for the shop question, do not just write a single line, write a full scene. Write the actions of all involved in the situation and what they say, how they interact with each other. I want to see how good you REALLY ARE at RPing and I want you to try as hard as you can when answering these questions. Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped. If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums. Good luck :) Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted: To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/ Tips to definitely include on your application: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A must-read guide to the world of aegis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ All the lore of the world of Aegis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page Information about the skills system: http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Skill_Information F.A.Q of Application submissions: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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