Orc App #3

[urukaresh 2]

Out-Of-Character:

Out of character my name is Josh Toney. I am 15 and still in school and live in Mt.pleasent MI, but am an avid player and I love to RP with people, even if I tend to slip up every once in a while (but no one’s perfect)

Minecraft Account Name:

Urukaresh

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

US Eastern U.S.A.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I love to play minecraft and love to RP.I can’t stand people who force me to deal with bad players and bad role-players. I can’t wait to join the server.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

5-40 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

I know that roleplaying is getting into character and having fun with the game. Roleplaying to me means that you play not as yourself but as the character your controlling talking and acting like the character would.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagameing is using info gotten ooc and out of game to better yourself or anyone else, like when a friend tells u where a lost treasure or something like that is ooc and u log on and go get it. Power gaming is role playing your character is as not to give someone a choice and forcing them to do something, like roleplaying

Guard trips man and arrests him, Man head-butts the Guard and runs off, Guard shoots him with bow and knocks him to the ground grabs him and drags him away.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be a fun and energetic sever with lots of interesting twists and turns

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on Monster Craft but left it because of the players griefing everything

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes

How did you hear about us?:

An old friend

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

No, but I will when I get to play on the sever and see what it’s like

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

username:peanutx6 display name:Urukaresh

In-Character:

In character I am a person who loves to see good RPs and I can tolerate bad RPs somewhat and just play it off but I can only deal with so much

Character Name:

Urukaresh

What is your Race?:

Orc

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Urukaresh stands 9 feet tall is green with black hair and 300lbs.Uruk was raised in Sanhar. Where he was taught to fight with all manner of weapons but favored the axe, for it reminded him of his connection with Krug and his lust for blood that only his own death could quench.Uruk was sent to his final school days with respect for he would soon be an adult or be dead his 3 companions Regnarc, Dracfilak, and Gruock met him on the way as was there custom meeting each other with a strong kick or head-butt and then continuing on their way. Uruk and his team were given there test Regnarc a test of strength, which with Dracfilaks help should have been easy but he failed and was sent out into the desert. Dracfilak a test of friendship but could only befriend 2 out of 3 people required and was said to wait until later to be sentenced. Gruock a test of speed, which he trained with Uruk for, but he failed and was sent into the desert. Then Urukaresh was called into the arena for his test and was told to choose a weapon of iron he took an axe. He knew instantly he would have to kill which wasn’t a problem but when he stepped into the arena he seen Dracfilak standing opposite and was told he went rouge and must be executed. Uruk couldn’t believe this but knew he must proceed, but Dracfilak was the stronger. None the less he charged roaring as his axe came down but was stopped by Dracfilak's sword and then his fist landed on his face and he was sent flying. His axe was flung from his hand and he was flung to the dirt then he realized it was kill or be killed because this was a test or Dracfilak as well. Uruk ran for his axe ducking to avoid his sword barely missing his head. Uruk staggered for a moment then rolled for his axe picking it up and turning to face his opponent and seen it, Dracfilak's weakness he can’t last long before he tires. Seeing this he looked up silently asking his ancestors for strength and he charged swinging his axe down for a last time and Dracfilak raised his blade to block but the force of Uruk's axe was too great and his blade broke and the axe came down into his skull effectively slaying him. After the fight Uruk's family met him in celebration of the event his brother, Ulurg, was raised in the same manner and was soon to go through his final test the next day. Uruk and his brother Ulurg are identical but behave differently when confronted. Now he is looking for a place to call home in the Kingdom of Oren along with his brother.

Your characters ambitions:

to lead his own tribe and take over control of the orc war nation alongside his brother, Ulurg

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

I would examine the bandits and the elf and then after deciding if my axe and fighting style of basically raining down blows as fast as I can fling my small wooden axe can stand and if the elf even needs help or not either way I join the elf against the bandits and ensure that the elf is safe from harm before going on my way

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

(grunts) "Ug Shara mi need ash lusk"(translation: Hail human I need 1 axe.)

A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/orc-skin-v2/

Other Information:

Please send feedback on anything that needs to be fixed

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

Out-Of-Character and In-Character are titles, not questions.

Work on getting rid of your text-speak.

Expand on your explanation of powergaming and mention powergaming where players make their characters too powerful by giving them powers, etc.

Oren only exists in Aegis, which has been destroyed. Update your lore for Asulon.

There's insufficient explanation for why your character wants to leave the orcs and go wandering around the humans.

Your first open reponse question needs a lot more detail, there is not "would". Use dialogue.

Your second open reponse question needs actions as well as dialogue, and you need to continue the scenario until your character leaves the shop.

[Rhisereld 317]

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