Luzcifer27 Application

[luzcifer27 4]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:luzcifer27

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:New Zealand

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Creative and intelligent.Fun and humble.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I still go to school so i have to worry about subjects but most likely 20 hours if not more.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: For me roleplaying is slipping into the live of a character created by you or created by someone else. As you play as that certain character your acts and decision are based upon how the character would think and not you. You have to be one with the character to be able to roleplay in my opinion. I often find creating a story behind my character very useful as it help making decision that the character would make easier. It also gives your(my) character personality which is vital for good roleplaying.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. I have never had to do anything with metagaming(powergaming) so i only know little about it. What i know from the dungeon and dragons games i have played is that it is something where you set yourself a goal and want to accomplish that goal with out looking out for other people. Basically just doing what You want and not respecting others. I guess metagaming would be unsporting.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Well it is mine craft so i'm not expecting some fancy MMO and it is also free which is nice. I think it will be fun to play, medieval style (well it is called lord of the craft :) ). Im also expecting a nice player base.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have really not played on many minecraft servers expect on private server with my friends. I have also played on some pvp servers (faction pvp i think). I left them because most people on these servers use hack clients and xray which ruins the game for other players.Ofcourse i still sometimes play on my private server with some friends.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

How did you hear about us?:Well i am a fan of Lord Of The Rings and as i googled LOTR with minecraft it gave me Lord Of The Craft :)

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes i did vote i think i was number 228

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Luzcife27

In-Character:

Character Name:Lenwë Telrúnya

What is your Race?:Elf (Dark Elf)

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Winter. The days were growing colder. The Harvest was small. Villages were plundered by craven knights. No one was safe. The king had died. The great houses were fighting over the throne not caring about the needs of the people. On a cold winter morning a sharp cry pierced the stale dry air. A cry of life. They named the young suckling Lenwë Telrúnya, which translates from the ancient language into The One Born In Snow.

Lenwë woke at the sound of the horn. Today was his one and eights name-day (aka hes 18) but no one cared about that. He might get some extra soup at supper but that was all. They were brought up with no traditions. The only thing to follow was the creed and the oath you swore in front of the gods. He was being trained to be a no face, some would call him killer other savoir. It didn't matter to him, today was the last day of training and on the morrow he would get his dagger. Not just any dagger but a dagger of the finest steel. Folded and folded by the Smiths, infused with a dark blue glow. Able to cut at the slightest touch. Decorated with ivory and ice blue sapphires. This dagger was not just any weapon but a metaphor. This dagger would finally complete his training. A training that lasted for 18 Winters. This dagger would make him complete.

He was trained for anything, no matter what. He was thought everything from breaking out of cells to killing kings and Queens at their royal dinner without being noticed. He could do it all. Not yet a master but well on his way.

Lenwë was brooding over an old piece of leather. Stripes and dots covered the wrinkling pieces of skin, only someone experienced could read the map. He was in a dark mood. Three of his brothers in training had failed their test this afternoon.

They had shown fear. He could not understand why. They where in their last year of training. He had completed his training the year before and had shown no fear. In fact since his ninth name-day he hasn't shown an feelings. None. He didn't hide them as other people, in a sense the constant training robbed you of any humane feelings. Fear was the first one to go. Love came soon after and the others followed.. Of course he could display feeling if his task required to however they would never disturb him while working, they would never disturb him like fear made the three young ones fail.

As he looked up from the map he met his own eyes in the mirror. They were dark blue with a hint of green.His coal black hair reaching for his shoulders.His dark studded leather Jerkin reflecting the last sun light. His dark leather pants and boots we custom made. He always wore these clothes while helping to train the others. When on a mission he would change depending on what was required for the completion of the work.

He left his room to find his way to the three brothers that had failed him. He knew he would have to punish them, hurt them, make them leave their fears behind.

Your characters ambitions:To complete the task trusted to him. To show no fear and never fail at work.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Not showing feelings is hard in this situation. Luckily for the Elf, Lenwë is of elven blood and will therefor help the struggling elf. Even if he may later ask for a favor...

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? Tell me what you have heard.

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information: Lenwë is looking forward to meeting new people. :) . Also im still working on the skin to make it look nicer and i hope the picture is not to big.

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

Fix up your presentation. Don't make the entire thing blue.

Proof-read your application for mistakes.

You'll need to research metagaming and powergaming.

Your character is overpowered and cliche. You don't really describe his childhood much, nor what he wants out of life. If you just want to be another mysterious angsty hood-wearing assassin, then your application had better be pretty amazing. I also suggest taking a look at this, to get an idea of when your character starts to become "too" special.

You need to actually play out the scenario in the first open reponse question. Saying you'll help the elf is not enough.

Your second open reponse question needs a lot more work, and you'll need to continue the scenario until your character leaves the shop. One line of dialogue is not enough.

[Rhisereld 317]

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