Ventus2S Second Apilacation

[Ventai 291]

Minecraft Account Name:ventus2

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No Because I have school

How old are you?:17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1GMT

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I am good at english but somtimes make mistakes like any other person

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i go to school and try to hang with my freinds but usaly play on minecraft.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:like 7 hours a day

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:roleplay is when a lot of people get together and plays as a charecter that rospons to him and what he thinks of his self.also it where the player brings a part of himself to live in a group that shows what he can do and be in a part of his charecters life.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming: metagameing is when you use out of chrecter information to benafit your own charecter ex. were going to kill person a then person a goes and kills that person who said it in OOC even tho he didnt know it was in roleplay terms

Powergaming: powergaming is when someone forces another charecter to do somthing wich is unresponsable or unrealistic also it is when someone overpowers there charecter in roleplay ex. one person goes up to someone and use the action Actomic nuke and destroys everthing that is known as overpowering your charecter.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I heard really good reviews about this server and videos and i think personaly will be a really good rp adventure for me.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: a server called wasteland blood of the planent and left it because it shutdown.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes i did

How did you hear about us?:i heard from a friend and videos wich said it was a really good server

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? not yet i would like to see how it is frist.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:ventus2

In-Character:

Character Name:Akutare

What is your Race?: Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): It was a nice day when Akutare was born everthing was peacefull happyness filled the land Akutare was excited about the ways of combat and how to fight in many diffrent ways tho he was just a child at the time and could not fight like his father his father used swords as a way to fight Akutare father told him that fighting should not as a weapon but a way to protect. Akutare thought about this for most of his childhood even most his freinds were starting learn the ways of fighting when Akutare was strong he tryed to fight with weapons but whatever he did he could not learn with weapons the only thing going for him is his fist combat but even that was weak but Akutare did not give up untill a great disater came to his village it was a great overlord who rules over deamons his name was overlord zennon the strongest og all overlords he came to destroy the village because of how Akutares farther was a runaway servent of overlord zennon in one attack all of the viallage was destroyed except Akutare because he was training his fists. after Akutare got back to the village he saw his father and the overlord. the overlord after put a curse on Akutare that drains his life force and gives its power to the overlord. after the insidinte Akutare found out about Guilds and dicided to join a guild called Phantom Phantom was a guild that helps people in testing there power. Akutare found a girl in the guild wich he liked he became friends and partners with her after awile he went to a s class misson wich is a misson for really advenced people in the guild Akutare and his partner Manoria go to the misson and in it was a overlord who was a aprentice of overlord zennon Akutare and Manoria fight the overlord but can not win after they are sent into a rift to a another world were they are lost and needing to find a way to get to his home world and find his partner Manoria.

b]Your characters ambitions:Akutare always likes new challnges to test his power and aglity

b]Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Akutare trys to find a way to get the elf to safty before fighting the bandits so that the elf wont get hurt he take a bow and shots a arrow at the bandits legs so they can not move after he brings the elf to safty then goes back to take the bandits in cusaty after he sees if the elf has any wonds if so he brings the elf to the infrimary to heal.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? Akutare ask for any quests or jobs that he can find for upgrading his strengh.

[Danny 2232]

I'm sorry, but your application for Lord of the Craft has been...

Please remember and wait 24 hours before re-applying.

Notes for applicant:

• Your definiton of roleplaying is strange, and it doesn't make sense.
• Your biography doesn't fit lore, read the lore.
• Your open response questions aren't detailed, what does your character:- do, say, feel, think/
• Use a spell checker. This hurt my eyes.

Please note: Whilst you may be angry or irritated at this denial, you need to understand that as a member of the Application Team it is my job to ensure we only have people who made great applications on the server. After you fix the issues that I've detailed in your application, it will probably be accepted.

Where can I get help to fix these errors?

It really depends on what you need – you are not allowed to have anyone else write part of your application for you. As the Application Team we're here to not only accept and deny your applications, but it's our job to give you help for fixing them. We'll help you as much as we can, but we will never write a bit of your application, no matter how much you ask!

The best way to get help, is to contact the Application Team member who denied you, (in this case, myself; Danny). You can contact me either here on the forums, via a PM – or you can also find me on TeamSpeak most of the time, either in the “Application Team” channel or in one of the private channels. Feel free to poke me, or send me a message for any help, and I'll try my best to help you!

I'd also suggest that you do some reading up, depending on why you were denied, as there's some good help out there, already written for anyone who needs it!

The WikiYou provides almost every scratch of lore that we have, there's people dedicated to expanding on it, and making it as detailed as possible. It's possibly the best place to find lore on the website, although you can also find quite a bit in this forum section.

You should also read the various posts that have been made by GM's and Application Team members to help with your applications, and believe me, there are many. The most useful is the “Application Team's Advice” thread. Which can be found right here.

Can I re-apply?

Of course you can! Often people post as many as 3 applications before they're accepted! Just make sure, that you wait until after 24 hours before you re-apply or your application will be denied. We have the 24 hour wait system to keep the Application Submissions forum tidy, and to ensure that the application team aren't overwhelmed by applicants posting a new application every five minutes.

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[Danny 2232]

Move to denied please folks~

[williewonka01 45]

Moved to Denied Forum