Murpman55'application

[levveron 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: murpman55

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada/mountain time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I got a good grip on English I have been using it my whole life and my grammar is not that bad.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm an average gamer, who is in grade 7 and I spend most of my time on my computer on holidays I hang with friends like most people.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10-24 hours a week I'll be playing every day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: acting out a role and fallowing it through going with things that are happening

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have on wow and IRL

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: like if method using strategy or action to fallow a rule set

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:going for the goal of the game working on it.

What do you expect this server will be like?: amazing I have heard many good reviews and different because I have never RPd in minecraft

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: shadow raze and I still play it

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: i promise to fallow the laws and rules

How did you hear about us?: a long time ago from the yogscast and then I just felt like joining

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: no i have not but I plan to

In-Character:

Character Name:Levveron Furberathis

What Race are you?:human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): My life's story eh? you want to hear it? *muffled grunt. then I shall tell you that I do not thou be so nave now. When I was a young lad I was brought into this world by me motha' near the en' of a war, then I turn my first season... just the age O' one! bandits take me away. They were lootin' all the camps and villages taking thing by thing! pop me up an sell me away to slave caravans!... many seasons later I turn around the age O' six when I be sold to one of the slave arenas give me a small light sword and light armor and seven moons of training then sen me strait into the arena. a boy a tad older clearly killed many in cold blood charged at me with a broad sword in hand! something roared in me! I sidestepped and slashed in an to tha' right and cut his head clean off! Many more bouts came with more killing and they start sendin' more dan' one at me!

the more I killed the more deadly I grew as seasons went on i got older and my senses got better! When I was sixteen a group of rogue knights came and ransacked the arena! flaming arrows came soaring threw the sky and bombing the arena, the rogues burst thou the doors at a blinding speed slaughtering guard by guard! One of the rogue knights had a bear on his there helm he walked to me and told me I was free. I stood there stunned, paralyzed even! he threw me a satchel that was on the musky ground of the arena cells I quickly grabbed me my sword and some food and coin from the slave hall and dashed out the giant doors of the arena!

after the insistent at the arena I quickly ran to the nearest village an' ol' village they call Noalfinkan I stooped in at the nearest inn and was astounded by the comfort of a bed, the first time I slept in one. the next monin' I asked the innkeeper about some ways to earn money he told me ways such like workin' for someone to ownin' a shop or eatery etc. the he added on about the bounty business I told him I couldn't read and wright to well he said then I'll read to you. how does that sound? I thanked him and we walked our way down the road, we told each other our names on the way down. as we walked I told hi about my life, next thing you know he says bounty hunting would be perfect. he asked if I ever looked at my self in a reflection or if I knew what I looked like. in all my sixteen years I didn't know what I looked like! we rushed to the bounty bored and grabbed a bounty for a man known as Caris Swifft 300 dead 500 alive. me an the inn keeper rushed back to the inn and walking into the back room I a mirror in front of me there i had short brown hair pail skin and purple eyes and a scar covered by my eye brow but it was quite noticeable. I looked at the piece of paper in my hand the I could for some reason start reading the writing with ease. I packed my satchel and grabbed my sword, and walked out of the in saying good bye to my new friend the inn keeper. as I waked thou the woods out side of town I was travailing north trying to find this Caris Swifft. many hours past and I wound up by a camp there were voices arguing loud! I hid behind a rock swords and axes started clashing the sounds of metal scraping against metal. the fight between about six men,the fighting started to die down all you could hear was the men that died and the yelling and the weapons of the men that lived.the fighting stopped a man started to laugh. I jumped up from behind the rock and yelled an a roar what is you name! the man looked in shock and I was shocked too, to see who the man was. He was the man with the bear from the arena! he looked at me and said my name is Caris Swifft! and I know I let you free but not its time to lock u up in hell! he raised his sword, I unleashed mine and I swiftly killed him. a clean stab to the gut!\

I drag the man's body onto my shoulder and drag him back to the village of Noalfinkan. I threw his body onto the village halls porch and walked away not taking my reward. More seasons pass and I turn the age of 22. wandering though the woods countless battles and journeys looking forwared to the next! and that I can say was my story!

What is your Character's ambitions?:

going on adventures and exploring.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): with a sword in hand he is a weapon in human form!

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? killing

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? charges in and swiftly killing the armed warriors, and protecting the child

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?very good thank you, I like you accent but I don't need any thing at the moment.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:take the bars and leave the sword so someone else may wander upon it.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?hello do you have any food and spare beds? maybe a map?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:tell the guard its taken care of and slaughter the bandits!

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My apologies, but your application has been...

Why did I deny you?

Your ORQs were powergamed, too short. Your definitions of meta/powergaming were incorrect, and also. You can't be an uber killing machine, that isn't fair.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

An FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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