[Revised]Ki'komansi's Application [Unread]

[baehr86 1]

MC Username: baehr86

Rp Username: Ki'Komansi

Character Skillset: Ki'Komansi has been hunting since he was very little. He took to the forests and spent most of his time there since he was a young Kitten. He is great with his sword and bow and is a master hunter. When he sets off on his hunts he brings back food that lasts his small family for a very long time. Besides hunting, Ki'Komansi also enjoys the water and anything that has to do with it. Because of this love he began fishing at a young age, after he mastered hunting. With these two skills mastered, Ki'Komansi, has become a very self sufficient Kharajyr.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender): Ki'Komansi is 35 years old. He is of the subrace, Kha'Leparda. He is a lighter brown color throughout kost of his body, but has darker spots, distinguishing him as a Kha'Leparda. He is around 6'0 and considers his height to be one of his advantages over others, in work. He is normally built for his kind, and wears average clothes.

Personality: Ki'Komansi is a very kind Kharajyr. He believes in helping others because he has been self sufficient since a very young age. He gives away most of his belongings rather than selling them. He hopes that because of his kind nature others will treaat him the same. Even though Ki'Komansi is a very kind cat, if someone messes with his friends or family he is one to be feared.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Ki'Komansi was born into a very poor family. His father taught him how to hunt from as soon as he was able to grasp a sword and bow. His father taught him how to use his hunts in order to make arrows and he continued hunting for many years. One day his father gave him a fishing pole. He told his son that he would have to master it on his own, for his father was a very poor fisher. It took Ki'Komansi a while but eventually he was an avid fisher.

One day while he was returning to his home from selling what he had gathered in town, he heard screams and crying. He quickly drew his bow and ran to his home. upon first arrival he kept his distance, to ensure that he was not spotted. What he saw he will never forget. He saw his Father, Mother, and young Sister all executed by a group of Kharajyrs. He quickly pulled a new arrow from his quiver and with a few quick placements between their eyes, silenced their laughter.

With everything he had ever known or loved he set off into a new adventure hoping to find a new area to settle. He headed into the forests and was never heard from again...

Character's ambitions

Ki'Komansi has been traveling for a very long time, and has not had a permanent home in many years. His main ambitions are to be able to have a house he can call his own, that will not be taken away from him. He also wants to one day be able to share his talents of hunting and fishing with the less fortunate. With these skills he will one day open a shop to make himself a profit in order to not fall behind in the economy. But, other than all of these ambitions, Ki'Komansi just wants to find himself something that is as close to a family as possible...

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide,then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?

Ki'Komansi reaches into his pouch giving the man four fish that he had just caught. He then asks the man where he wants to go. The man states that he was on his way home and got lost. Ki'Komansi then points him in the direction of the end of the jungle. The man says, "Thank You" and departs. Ki'Komansi walks away so the man does not feel pressured, but stays in the trees following the man, to ensure he leaves.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak."Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?

Ki'Komansi begins to exit the tavern, only to be stopped by a punch from the dwarf. The dwarf then proceeds to kick him. Ki'Komansi quickly rises to his feet and knocks the dwarf over. He quickly gets on top of the dwarf and begins beating him. The dwarf continues to say racist things toward him, so Ki'Komansi gets off of the dwarf. He then wals over to the side of the road where he picks up a stick. He walks back over to the stunned dwarf and hits him across the head knocking him out.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

Ki'Komansi welcomes his friend in and prepares him a bed. He watches his friend fall asleep and then leaves the house. He goes to the nearest authority to report the crime and tells the guard not to hurt his friend. He then returns to his house with the guard and convinces his friend to turn himself in. As his friend walks outside he notices the guards are already there and tries to run. As he begins to run, Ki'Komansi sticks his paw out and trips him, allowing him to be captured.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?Yes

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[KarmaDelta 969]

We arent accepting anymore applications.

[baehr86 1]

We arent accepting anymore applications.

ever?

[KarmaDelta 969]

We will open them soon.

[baehr86 1]

We will open them soon.

Will you be able to accept or deny this application then? Or do I have to re-post it?

[James Undercroft 129]

I think when the application process starts again it will be reviewed then, if it does not I am sure they will inforrm you to re-post but I don't see the logic in that. :)

[baehr86 1]

Ok thank you

[Praetor 1550]

DENIED.

Reasons:

-Please clear up your app, putting both questions and answers together, in the same font, is very unclear.

-Devellope his appearance.

-We have never met any other race before, thus your bio is incorrect. Work on that too :).

-In the open answer questions, you talk of "Salvas" or Salvus. Your char should not know where that is.

-Developpe your open answers, putting more detail in them other than direct actions.

((My first app, if I made a mistake, Karma, or the other K.A.T members, feel free to correct me.

[baehr86 1]

DENIED.

Reasons:

-Please clear up your app, putting both questions and answers together, in the same font, is very unclear.

-Devellope his appearance.

-We have never met any other race before, thus your bio is incorrect. Work on that too :).

-In the open answer questions, you talk of "Salvas" or Salvus. Your char should not know where that is.

-Developpe your open answers, putting more detail in them other than direct actions.

((My first app, if I made a mistake, Karma, or the other K.A.T members, feel free to correct me.

I fixed it

[Praetor 1550]

DENIED.

I'm sorry if I can't supply you with a valid reason. But your application all in all, is...Lacking something.

Add more detail all around, reread it, and make it more fluent.

Do NOT edit, repost the whole app please.

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.