[Denied]Patu97's Application

[Anderssn 1115]

MC Username: patu97

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Adin

Character Skillset: Swords: 50 Archery: 50 Farming: 50 Lumberjacking: 40

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender): Adin is 15 years old male pantera.

Personality: He is sometimes a bit shy when talking to strangers, but when he get angry he have nothing to hide, and often when he get angry he think he is better than everyone else. Adin never want in to trouble and stays away from trouble makers. And when its about combat he waits for the right tiem to strike with his sword or then he use bow.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Adin was born in a happy pantera family. His father, Zairza was a very good herbalist. Zairza learned Adin about the herbalism but he also learned him to write and read. The reason why Zairza taught his son to write and read was so he could read and write a book of herbalist. Zairza told him to always look in instruction book so he wouldn’t mix with the bad and good plants. Adin's mother, Misira was a very friendly pantera. She was always smiling at her son and her husband. Her hobby was archery and knife throwing. And as job she worked as a town hunter. Misira often showed Adin how to be a good archer, and how to throw the knives at the right type so the knife would not miss the target. They lived ten happy years together until his father died. His father was poisoned by a bandit who then took all his money. Later on the same day a guard came to Adin’s mother and told what happened to his father. The guards had found the bandit so they gave Zairza’s money back to Mirsira. The death of Adin’s father was a very big shock to them both, and it changed it all. The live wasn’t as happy as before and the days looked all the same. Every time Adin went to the place where his father was poisoned, it reminded him about his father.

Adin didn’t want to continue his life like this. His father’s death had ruined everything and Adin wanted to forget what happened. When Adin was 13 he took all the Mina he had, and all his most important items and things with him. He left his mother and started to walk, following the road. He started to search for new friends and Adin is wishing for a new family to continue his life with. In search for friends and a new family, he is also ready for enemies.

Now Adin is 15 years old and is still searching for friends and a family to live with.

Character's ambitions:

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?: Adin sights and gives the human two slices of bread and ends it with “Now please be happy with that and get off me. And next time I see you, you better run!”

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

He looks angry at the man and shouts. “You tall little dwarves have nothing to say! The only things you are good on are mining, eating your self fat and drinking ale! You cannot hunt, you’re too slow with your small legs. You cannot farm when you have eat you fat, the hoe would hit your stomach instead of the dirt!” buys an ale and drinks it as fast as he can and then continues talking “The only job you can do is mining! And maybe blacksmithing! But they both are the dirtiest jobs! So shut your mouth!” Adin leaves the tavern with an angry look.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response? Adin looks shocked. “How could you! Just for a small slice of a cake! What is wrong with you?! I don’t want to see you any more! LEAVE MY HOUSE NOW!” When the door is closed he starts the mumble for him self and thinking about the friend and what have happened.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? Yes, everywhere, every day, every night.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

[Wretched 2075]

DENIED.

A few things need to be added to this, you have the base skeleton of it, just looking for a bit more detail.

• Your personality could be extended. From this I only know that he is shy but when he gets angry he is not.
• Your bio is ok, but it is more of a list of events rather than a bio, if you can try and blend it all together with longer sentences that would be great.
• You are completely missing the "Characters ambitions" section.
• All your situational RP questions are very short. number 2 is better than the other two, focus your effort on 1+3.

You're nearly there. Just edit this post and I or another KAT member will view it later.

[Anderssn 1115]

okay! And thanks for the tips. And looks like you gt an active "KAT" :)

[Princeton 396]

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