Ungahbungah1618's Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: UnGaHbUnGaH1618

How old are you?: 17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: PST

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes first language.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am making a youtube video on this server as I write this. I am black and asian. I like basketball.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I have a job and school so around 3-6 hours a day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is playing as another character. Basically acting. Boom you got your self RP.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I like RP games and I played on this server before, before my account got hacked.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Taking out of character stuff and using it in character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Basically just abusive gameplay.

What do you expect this server will be like?: Very roleplaying adventure.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: EchoCraft, ZombieRun... I own them!

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes they seem all pretty reasonable.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes sir!

How did you hear about us?: Kahlilnc

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Yes kahlilnc has numerous times cuz I am him ! 4,095

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/): Okay will do

In-Character:

Character Name: Bing (Googled orc name)

What Race are you?: Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Goblin

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Bing was born as a half goblin, half wood elf. He mainly appears to be a goblin with pointier ears. His parents were both lynched by the elves. The day the parents were lynched... There were 2 male orcs, 1 female elf and 1 male baby orc/elf inside a little cottage near the Elvish capital. 1 orc being the father, Ogol, of Bing and the female being his mother, Shel. The other orc being the father's brother, Puurg. Puurg was always secretly sleeping with Shel. And had problems with Ogol. That day they had a huge argument that had Ogol forcingly put his hands on Shel causing her to drop Bing. Bing from that day on had a huge scar on his forehead. Puurg saw that and socked his brother in the face. All the noise and attention drew in fellow elf members to there cabin. They saw two orcs among one of there kind giving a clue of a robbery of some sort. They told the orcs to get off there land. At the same time hearing a baby cry. One peaks into the house seeing a bloody pointy eared orc crying in a corner. Ogol put his hand on the man's shoulder and said "No it is you who must be off our land" and threw the man back with one arm. One other elf that witnessed him do so, took a bow and arrow and pointed it at Ogol. Shel jumps in the way yelling, "No stop!" The man shot the arrow hitting her in the arm. Puurg - "Nooooo don't jump in the way for that fool." Ogol - "She is my lady now stay out of this, take the boy and run." Shel - "Yes please take the boy. Get his some where safe NOW!" Puurg screams loud at the top of his lungs. "AHHHH" He runs inside takes the boy and runs out the back door. A few other elves follow him. More elves come to the point of attention and took Ogol and Shel to there higher ups. And decided to lynch them for there treasons.

Years later... Puurg taught the boy how to fight at the age of 7. And kept training him. The boy grew up a rough life. Boys picked on him because he looked different. His ears were always pointy. He had a huge scare on his head. The other boys calling him scarface. Puurg told Bing to call him his father. Also giving him a goal, to hate the ones that took his mother away from them and the ones that made fun of you. The ones who took his mother away being elves. But Bing never knowing that he was part elven himself. At the age of 21 Bing was grown into a strong built orc. Weighing nearly 365 lb. Almost all pure muscle but very quick due to his other side in his genetics. He set off on his own. Giving his fair well to Puurg.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To dominant his foes and the Elves. Besides that he set other goals of his own and less, Puurgs goals that were brainwashed into him. He wants to become a rich well known man who made a change in the world.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): The o' Might Axe

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Drinking ale like no other. His brute strength and his agile self makes him a force to be reck'n with. But as scary as he is he can sympathize for the struggling and weak as he picked on for his looks his whole life.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

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Other Information about your Character:

Carries great hatred in his heart but deep down is a sensitive, emotional guy who only wanted love.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Unarmed Bing would be tempted to crush the thieves with his mighty strength but knows it would be risky for himself. He would go up to them acting the toughest way possible trying to scare the men. But if that has no effect he would die fighting.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I don't want your stolen goods... And walks away.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Bing is no thief, especially since it may be a fellow orc.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? He would try to respond back in the common tongue explaining to them of his situation.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Bing would love to go to war, especially if it comes with a few bonuses. Such as fighting some elves and the money.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been Denied. This application presents a few mistakes or errors.

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These were the main points which were bad or not so good of your application:

~Your Power-Gaming definition is incorrect. Even though being overpowered is power-gaming, that is not the definition we want, why don't you look around on the forums or on Team Speak to find out its real meaning. And overall, expand both definitions, they are pretty short, you must demonstrate that you know what you are speaking about.

~Your Open Responses are far too short. You must present the situation and then show all the actions and phrases. As if you were in-game, this is not only dialogue though. Also try not to power-game.

~Your biography needs to be worked on, be original, and use correct Lore (the destruction of Aegis and travel to Asulon), be creative and you need to explain your appearance and attitude and what it says in the question. Its also pretty incoherent and that name is just plain weird. Furthermore, its pushing it a bit to be a half elf and goblin...

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Once you fix these things you can re-apply but only 24 hours after your latest application. Use your time well and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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