My App (Sigh) Again

[reallynewperson 0]

Minecraft Account Name:reallynewperson

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA Pacific

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am an advanced 6th grade child.I am inteligent and strong.I not give up easyliy.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10 to 20 hous

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Roleplaying is playing as a character example dnd

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I am a novice at dnd

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:It is following the rulse using externel factors to effect the game

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:The stle of interacting games

What do you expect this server will be like?:Ive been on the server and the map rules i love the rules and i know that this server will be awsome.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:to many to count i left them because they did not have the amount of role playing i was looking for

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes and yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:yes

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:yes all of them :http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?app=forums&module=forums&section=findpost&pid=322466 and cant find the others.

Character Name:Drizzt DO'urden

What Race are you?:Drow or dark elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):I

I came from the dark a devios underground city of menzoberanzan. I left because i was diffrent, i was not a theiving lying murderer.After I left i met a dwarf who after about a year i could not be freinds with anymore.I went to the surface to be a surface dweller.

I am young at the age of only 204.I am a fair and powerful drow.I am black skined with a worn orc cloak.

What is your Character's ambitions?:His ambitions are to start a family.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Stone Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?:Swordsmanship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):its he attached the file

Other Information about your Character:none

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:he threatens to knock out the wariors if the dont stop

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?:compaininship

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:he would leave it alone and go away thinking it to be a trap

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?:i will trade you for food my offer is i gaurd you from all the dangers.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:I go with them to defeat the bandits but stop the gaurd from killing them do to my peacful nature.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been Denied. This application presents many, many mistakes or errors.

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These were the main points which were bad or not so good of your application:

~Your Open Responses are far too short. You must present the situation and then show all the actions and phrases. As if you were in-game, this is not only dialogue though. Also try not to power-game.

~Your biography needs to be worked on, be original, and use correct Lore (the destruction of Aegis and travel to Asulon), be creative and you need to explain your appearance and attitude and what it says in the question.

~Your English is pretty bad, you are misspelling something each five words... Its not easy to understand what you mean. Please check your spelling and grammar. It shows your lack of effort to have so many mistakes.

~Your Power-Gaming definition is incorrect. Even though being overpowered is power-gaming, that is not the definition we want, why don't you look around on the forums or on Team Speak to find out its real meaning.

~Your Meta-Gaming definition is wrong, why don't you look around on the forums or on Team Speak to find out its real meaning.

~Use the right format! Don't delete the things between square brackets! They make the application pretty! Not grey and bland like this one...

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Once you fix these things you can re-apply but only 24 hours after your latest application. Use your time well and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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