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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Ozzyk

How old are you?:

Im 13 years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I live in Norway

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes I belive I do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Im a boy on 13 years and I love playing Minecraft. I enjoy most the RP servers of Minecraft and I found out that tihs was the best of them out there.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Around 3-4 hours a day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is the act of stepping into the shoes of a different person (character); becoming them, you could say. You take on their temperaments, responsibility, personalities, and memories. It is to take on an entirely separate identity limited only by your mind.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

Em... none. But I have seen on some youtubers that is on this server and how they do it. So I can RP. (I dont have any experience because Ive only found bad RP servers)

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming is knowing something your character does not know. EX. Your In-Game character looks for a hidden treasure and then you (yourself) look on youtube and looking where it is.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

When you Roleplay something that may be impossible to do, or leaving another player no chance to make a comeback. EX: You are walking on a gravel path after being shoping and suddenly a thief comes out from a bush and head locks you. He then pulls out his dagger and slits your throat. This is powergaming because he gave the other player no time to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Totaly awsome, but serius. Player that are nice and dont use Meta-Gameing.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Clientcraft and a server with no name because its a Tekkit server. (tekkit is a mod) I left them because there was not manny players on them and one crashed. And a lot of bad RP servers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have read them and I agree them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and

Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes I do.

How did you hear about us?:

By some friends and by Youtube.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Em yes one for like 1-2 days ago http://www.lordofthe...-gabbe-boy-app/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraft...-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

I will do it (again) http://www.minecraft...0#entry14082876

In-Character:

Character Name:

Eriath_Brokenshield

What Race are you?:

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (Note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Northerner

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When Eriath was born in North-West Realm of Hanseti. But sadly when his mother gave him life she died. They did only live in a small house. After his mother’s death his father thought him to hunt for deer’s with a bow. One time when he was hunting for deer’s he saw some high elves walking around in the forest and he said hello to them and asked what they were doing here. But they didn’t answer, they just kept walking. But one night, when he was ten years old, he was out hunting and he saw about 7 or 8 people closing his house. He thought it was orcs, because they were wearing heavy armor and huge war hammers. So he ran until he could take a shoot on them. He heard one of them scream when he shoot him in the knee. And that warned his father that was inside the house. His father took his sword and ran outside and he managed to cut of the head of one of them. Eriath shoot one of them in the eye and his father was almost hit on his arm, but I got a 10-12 cm long scar by it. The rest of the bandits fled into the forest and ‘’we will return!’’ one of them shouted. Eriath ran to his father. He asked: ‘’are you okay father?’’. ‘’I’m okay, but I may need some bandage’’. Eriath ran to the woods and took the deer he caught and ran back to the house as quick as he could with a deer at his back. When he came in his father was sitting in his chair with a bandage on his arm.

After 9 long years the bandits actually came back. They came at the night. Eriath saw a small light in the woods and ran down out the door and said to his father: ‘’ Dad, the food is done’’. And the father came in and Eriath told him what he really saw. His father told him to take the gold and jewelry and run away out from the back door and he also said that this was his time. He ran and took the gold and his bow and some arrows and he also took some bred and apples. He ran as fast as he could. Later that night he saw a lot of zombies ahead so he went down an abandoned mine shaft. On the way down he saw some skeletons of some dwarfs. But he kept going down. And now he was so far down there and it was a huge spider that sat in the roof. And the spider jumped down and tried to bite Eriath, but it missed. Eriath took his dagger by the hand and stabbed the spider in the eye. The spider didn’t die but it fled. And from that have Eriath always been scared of spiders. He ran and ran, and luckily he was a fast and good runner. Until he sees one of the Teutonic banners hanging from a wall. But right when he comes out of the forest, one of the guards shoots him in the arm and Eriath fainted. The guard thought he was a bandit. But the guard ran down from the wall and got two of his friends with him to check Eriath. But before they could get there some thief’s took all his money, food and weapons. The only things he had left was his cloths. When the guards came there they saw that he was not a bandit. So they carried him to the Cloud Temple of Asoulon. And there he got help from the monks. (His adventure starts here)

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To fight the bandits that killed his father. And to find a small town join the city’s defenses.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (Sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc.):

His favorite tool is a bow and his dagger.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

He’s talent is to aim with his bow.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

http://www.minecraft...27536/assassin/

Other Information about your Character:

I don’t think there is any.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small Halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

He hides behind a tree and tries to see what’s going on. And he saw the Halfling and that the other two guys had a dagger pointed at him. So he draws his bow and aim at one of them. And he hits him directly hit in the neck. And the other one turns around and Eriath throws his dagger at him and hit him in the knee. The Halfling had a dagger to so the Halfling threw it carefully to Eriath and he jumps on the man and stabs him two times in the neck. And then he says to the Halfling: ‘’take back your stuff and run to the nearest town and stay there’’.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well-dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Hello, sir. You might have some arrows and a new string for my bow, right? I have a good amount of money.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

He would leave the chest alone.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

He asks: ‘’can I please have some food and water? I have been lost in the wilds for a long time and I had nothing to eat’’.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard has gathered, and his asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offers their support. How does your character act on this information?:

He offers himself to help. And when they are defeated he says ‘’keep the money, you might use them to hire more men’’

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Reasons:

-Open responses are too short

-Biography is Cliche'

-Skin is overused

-Ambition is overused

Please fix these up and Re-post in a day

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