Epicotep's App

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Out-Of-Character:

MinecraftAccountName: epicotep

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: no sorry.

How old are you?: 17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia GMT +10

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do but my spelling is a little off.

Small2-3SentenceDescription of yourself: My name is Mitchell Reinke and I live in Australia. I work full time as an Apprentice Electrician. I love gaming the games i prefer are RTS MMORPG RPG and Action Adventure.

How much time could you be on the server weekly? Ever after noon till 12-2 am and ever weekend.

What do you know about Roleplaying?Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Roleplaying means you play the roll of you character act and speak as they would.

In your own Words, describe what MetagamingandPowergaming are.

Metagaming means to influence a players actions IC with OC info.

Powergaming means forcing some thing upon a player like saying "player1 knocks player2 out".

Whatdo you expect this server will be like?:

Hopefully a good player base with good RP. Little to no lagg and a nice world that has not be broken by players every were.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?

Super earth left due to addons Chaotic Uniformity very low player base and really campy pvp Ecocraft NO rp at all.

Have you read, understood,and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I understand the rules.

How did you hear about us?: On The forums.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus?Which vote number were you? Yes I have.

What is your TheLordOfCraft forum account name?:

epicotep

In-Character:

CharacterName:

Halvard Sapphiredge

Whatis your Race?:

Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When Halvard was a child he lived with his Mother, Father and little Brother Fritjof we did't live like normal dwarf tho we owned a farm near a human town. My brother and I use to play in the mines with our wooden swords and pickaxes killing spiders and mining stone. One day just after dusk when they were heading back to the farm form the mines beyond the wheat fields they saw a very bright glow from there wooden house. So the started to sprint through the wheat fields only to see dark figures scattering from the already ablaze house. We ventured closer to the house only to see the burn corpses of our mother and farther so shocked I garbed my brother and retreated into a near by forest until daybreak. At sunrise I woke up my brother and we headed to the burned down house and garbed any thing we could salvage and headed to town. When we got to town we started to ask around to see if any one had seen anything last night. No one in town would talk to us dwarfs, because to all of them we seemed lower class to these humans. So we heading into the tavern that was owned by a dwarf. He told us of stories he herd of bandits retreating from a burning house and heading to the south. So we decided to track the bandits we tracked the for over 7 years. We eventually found the bandits they were at a camp just north of a coastal town. We watched the bandits for a few days. One night just after midnight it was over cast all the bandits were in camp but most were asleep. Fritjof and I ran into the camp and killed ever thing that lived with out a 2nd thought no matter if they were man or woman, child or adult we killed every thing. That night changed us we felt like nothing could stop us we would't let any thing stand in our way. we settled in the near by town near by about 1 year has passed before Fritjof told me he heard about a boat that was heading to a new land far from here. We decided we should leave this place be hide us it would be for the best. Halvar is 25 now he had his brother is 24 we lookalike both with brown hair and a mighty beard our skin is tanned slightly from being on the surface for so long. The look to prosper in this new world and live out there lives.

Your characters ambitions:

halvard sapphiredge has great ambitions. he wishes to one day rule over a mighty kingdom, with his brother by his side, and he will slaughter anybody who gets in the way of his goals.

Outin the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage.Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits.What does your character do? Halvard keeps on walking it is not his fight and and has nothing pledged to this elf.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

Well I'm in your shop to buy something aren't I.

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information: My app will be like Honedewmelons because we are applying together and will be Rp'ing together on the server so our back stories are joined heavily.

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Why did I deny you?

Your ORQs were short...

Short answers in the ORQ section are not adequate. We need to know what your character sees, thinks, smells, feels and hears in that situation, to an extent that we are there, and we know exactly how your character would react if it were allowed into the world of Asulon.

Your English was not great.

Your english in this application was not the greatest. It included spelling and grammar errors. An easy way to fix this up is to first write up your application in a Word Document, then use the spellchecking feature. It should make your app much more legible.

Your formatting made my eye's bleed

You need to make this easier to read though. Use colours, use spaces to separate paragraphs. Fix up your formatting. There are many guides around the forums that portay how to do this in an excellent manner, showing how to use colours correctly, using spcaes and italics to overall give better legibility of the application.

You need to use the new application format.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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