Ipkforthelol's Application!

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Ipkforthelol

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Timezone 0:00 GMT, The Netherlands

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I would say it's decent.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I like to game and hang out with my friends.

I also like to swim once in a while.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: ranging from about 10-20 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Playing as a character in a fantasy world and doing the things your character would do.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:i haven't got any experience, but that's what i am here for right :D?

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta gaming is knowing things your character isn't supposed to know.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Power gaming is making yourself overpowered; *Ipkforthelol kills 100 bandits with one arrow*

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it to be a wonderful server which i can enjoy in my spare time.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on Swyzencraft but the server couldn't afford itself anymore, and i have played on Newzone for a year but I didn't feel like doing hardcore pvp faction servers anymore.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes, Yes, and Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:I promise that i abide the rules and laws from the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak rules.

How did you hear about us?:I've been looking for a roleplaying server on Planet Minecraft.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:No i haven't

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):I haven't

In-Character:

Character Name:Esbern

What Race are you?:I am a human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):I am a Northener.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Esbern was born in Oren, his father was slain in the war.

His father used to be a blacksmith but then his father joined the army.

His mother didn't want the father to join the army but the father knocked her out and left.

Since then his mother trained in swordsmanship while Esbern was growing up.

Esbern didn't really miss his father because he was young when his father died and he doesn't remember it all too well.

Then on a day, his mother asked him to gather some herbs and make some potions but Esbern couldn't make the potions.

His mother was disappointed and tried to find Esbern's talent.

Some days later Esbern's house got raided by two bandits, Esbern tried to fight off the bandits

but he got knocked unconscious.

When Esbern woke up he saw his dead mother and all their worthy items being robbed.

And there was a note, it said: ''We spared your life so you can become a bandit yourself.''

Esbern got really mad and sliced his back with a knife and fell on the ground without any reasons.

When he woke up he calmed down and continued his search for his talent.

Esbern made a simple bow from wood and string and missed all arrows, He had no talent for archery.

Esbern made an axe and started woodcutting, he wasn't very good at it neither.

Esbern made a wooden sword and started swinging it at some trees, he was pretty good in it.

Esbern continued his practice in swordsmanship and became a decent swordsman.

Now that he found his talent he decided to focus on swordsmanship.

Esbern has a scar in his back from the time he sliced himself with a knife.

He hopes he can find a place to be respected and known.

What is your Character's ambitions?:He wants to become strong and avenge his father, but he doesn't know who did it.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Esbern's favorite tool is the sword because he has no talent in a bow or axe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?His most skilled talent is persuasion and swordsmanship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://i42.tinypic.com/4deux.png

Other Information about your Character: Esbern likes cold weather.

He has a fear for soulsand.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Esbern would try to knock the warriors out, if that would fail he would try to escape.

If that would fail he would try to bribe the warriors.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Esbern would browse his goods and see if he has anything of his interests, if the merchant would have something of his interests he would buy it if he can afford it.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Esbern would look around for any people. If he wouldn't see anyone he would take small things that could help him.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Esbern would ask for some food and if they ask items for it. Esbern would offer them some items and if they wouldn't give them anything he would offer them to work for them.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Esbern would ask the guard how many guards there are to help, and if he sees any chance of winning he would accept it and try to chase off the bandits and get the reward.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been Denied. This application presents a couple of mistakes or errors.

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These were the main points which were bad or not so good of your application:

The great Thu'um said~

[16/04/12 11:19:17 PM] Thu'um: Metagaming Definition is Incorrect.

[16/04/12 11:19:38 PM] Thu'um: Open Response Questions lack Detail / effort (1-2 Sentences)

[16/04/12 11:20:06 PM] Thu'um: Powergaming Definition is Contestable (Says it means your overpowered, which is incorrect but lists a correct example.)

[16/04/12 11:20:46 PM] Thu'um: His Biography contains Oren, but yet he never includes how he got to Asulon.

[16/04/12 11:20:53 PM] Thu'um: So like..

[16/04/12 11:21:04 PM] Thu'um: His Biography needs to be fixed.

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Once you fix these things you can re-apply but only 24 hours after your latest application. Use your time well and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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