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[thekillerseat 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

thekillerseat

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

gmt

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

i speak good English but my spelling isn't the best

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:f:i like playing video games including minecraft,mw3,skyrim and saints row

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:24 -34 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

it means to take on a different character who is entirely different

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:i was on a sever called from ashes

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

When game information outside of what is available in a game is used to give a player an advantage in-game. Most commonly seen and frowned upon in many forms of role playing especially when consent has not been given.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:People who Powergame usually RolePlay's things which may be impossible to do, leaving the other player no chance to fight back. Powergaming people usually focus most on his own character.

Here's just a little example of someone Powergaming, let's say the Powergamers name will be... John_Wollie.

EXAMPLE:

John_Wollie : Hey, come in my car, let's go to my crib! You'll get some cash.

Jack_Shang : Uhm, okay... I'll come with you in one condition...

John_Wollie : No, get in!

John_Wollie grabs Jack and throws him into car.

John_Wollie ties him.

What do you expect this server will be like?:i believe it will be fun

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:i do

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:i do

How did you hear about us?:i overheard guy on my friends teamspeack

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/51402-application/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

In-Character:

Character Name:

cian scully

What Race are you?: human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

i was a drunk . i spent all my money on drink and women until there was nothing left ,so i begged on the streets . Then one day i saw a man beating up a woman and i went to help.. he bet the hell out of me . When i woke up i found the girl dead next to me.

after that day i started a new ,I got back into shape and got off the streets and started trading .Now i know that i if i had been stronger that girl would not have died .I should be something not nothing.

I went from my home Winterfell and went travelling. so i set of a tall ,brown haired man going on a quest to become something great .

What is your Character's ambitions?:

he wants to become a ruler of a nation and help poor people

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):he likes swords and bows

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?he is a good archer

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/traveling-trader/ i put a link instead

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?cian shouts a thugs " hey why don't you pick on some one yer own size f*&kers" *trowing a rock at them *bandits run at cian**he runs away halfling runs away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?*cian checks out some fruit and veg than sees a nice bow and asks "how much for the bow "100 minas " "thats a bit steep

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:*cian opens the door to the abandoned**he takes all the stuff but leaves two iron bars *

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?"hello may i have some food and drink ,i have minas"

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:"hello, sir i believe you need help" " yes what is your name " cian scully sir "

[Trouvo 205]

the only feedback you applied from lucas...was formatting.....you may reapply in 24 hours

I am very sorry, but your application has been moved to the denied section of the forums. There are numerous reasons for this, all of which I have included in my feedback below this message. In the mean time there is an abundant source of information, stories, guides and other helpful tips to get you on your way to being accepted; all you need to do is look around. I would suggest the lord of the craft wiki and application submissions section of the forums to start off your little quest to make the best application. Good luck!

The reasons that I have denied you are:

Your have used incorrect formatting of the application.

You need to re-copy the application format. Make sure you have copied the text from the white box and not anywhere else. Also make sure that you do not delete anything in [these square brackets] as they are vital to keep the colour, boldness and size of the text. If you are having trouble because your entire application turns out in funny colours, make sure that you are writing your answers on a line underneath the question, as this is a common error and can mess up the formatting of your application.

Your grammar makes sections of your application hard to understand.

While grammar is not a vital part to becoming accepted, we require a certain standard of grammar to be used so that you can be understood during an RP interaction. When posting your application please check and double check what you have written to make sure it is of the best standard possible. Some other solutions are to use a word processing program which spell check capabilities or to use www.spellcheckplus.com . The latter is a very useful website which gives detailed descriptions on how to impove upon your grammar and spelling, without the option of just fixing something with a single (or double) click.

Your definition of Roleplaying is not what we are after.

Your current definition of Roleplaying displays to me that you do not fully understand what Roleplaying is all about. It is either too short and needs expansion, or it contains information which goes against what Roleplaying is all about. Please go back and so some research as to what Roleplaying is. I needn’t remind you that this is a Roleplaying server, if you do not know how to role-play or do not show evidence that you are keen to learn how to role-play I suggest you find a Minecraft server better suited to your needs.

You did not give valid examples of RP, or you did not describe how your examples are RP.

You need to give us specific examples on how the games or locations you have talked about pertain to an RP environment.

You need to expand on your both of your powergaming and metagaming definitions.

Currently your definitions are very basic. You need to write more than just a sentence or two. You need to really describe what these things are and how they relate to role-play. Also remember to never plagiarise and to always include an example to display your understanding of the concept.

You need to have a character last name.

Unless you have a specific reason for why you do not have a last name of your character, you need to write a last name to show that you have put some in-depth thought processes into developing and creating your character.

Your biography has a lot of errors.

You need to completely re-write your biography. Please include lore from the server (you cannot come from "another land"), your grammar is terrible as I can hardly understand what you are trying to write, this needs to be fixed. You also need to include the ENTIRE question, please re-read it.

You need to embed the screenshot of your skin.

For me to accept you I must be able to view your skin as I need to judge whether it is acceptable for this server, reason being if someone joins this server, but do not show their skin but they have a Tron skin on I would be in big trouble, but for me to be able to view your skin it must also be embedded. The reason your skin needs to be embedded is because recently people have been linking some dangerous websites to where the image of their skin has been hosted. To avoid this we request that the image is directly linked to this website either as an upload or being embedded into the post itself. You can do this by following this tutorial:

1. Go in-game and press the “F5” button TWICE. (Not once as this will show the back of your character)

2. Take a screen shot by pressing the "PrntScr" button on a windows computer or press F2 on the keyboard, then go to start => Run and type in this: %appdata%/.minecraft/screenshots

3. Find the screenshot and open it in an image manipulation program such as Paint or Gimp.

4. Crop the image so that only the area close to your skin (including the skin) remains.

5. Save the file and go to tinypic.com

6. Upload the file

7. Click ONCE on the text box underneath: "IMG Code for Forums & Message Boards"

8. Right click and copy the entire text

9. Paste in your new application

*Note* If you want a tutorial for Macs, please send me a message on the forums.

Some or all of your answers to the Open Response questions need a lot of improvement.

Instead of describing what your character would do, you need to assume that your character is in the situation and acting as they would in that situation. You need to describe a scene of RP. This means that you cannot write “If this happens, then my character would do that.” As this shows that you are not Roleplaying, you are answering the question from what you think that your character might do. You need to show us that you know who your character is, you know what the situation is and you know how your character is going to react.

This also means that you need to write in full RP. For example:

We expect that you write in full RP and that you write a full paragraph or more for each question.

You powergamed and godmodded. One does not simply kill bandits. You need to write some REALISTIC rp. Chances are these bandits will kill YOU/knock YOU unconscious. Bandits are players and are very powerful characters. If you are by yourself in-game and you try to just kill bandits you will be banned for no-rp killing (read the rules) or at the very least completely destroyed by the bandits whom have had a lot of combat experience since they are BANDITS. We encourage RP pvp on this server, which means each party will demonstrate their actions through emotes. When responding to this situation you need to write DETAILED and DESCRIPTIVE responses. This means no "slices through the bandits neck" but write what your character aimed for, how much force he put in, what weapon he was using, how the bandits responded, what tools they are using, how they used them, how they blocked/parried/dodged, their skills and abilities. You have so much to write, this is what we expect of you.

This is the BEST roleplaying minecrat server and as such you need to be on par with the rest of the server in terms of RP skill. Those who display sub-standard RP skills should not be allowed onto the server lest they make everyone else's minecraft experience bad.

If you have any questions about my feedback, or would like to create some constructive criticism about the way I give feedback (I.E am I being TOO blunt, or am I coming across rude) then please send me a message! I take all questions, none are stupid! :) You are not allowed to apply again for a full 24 hours.

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Moved to Denied Forum