Rennegate's Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:My minecraft account is Rennegate.

How old are you?:I'm 17 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Romania, GMT +2

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:In my opinion i can handle most of the english language, my english teacher on the other hand says that i'm a prodigy .

*I started learning from cartoons like scooby-doo and so on, then i played a lot of games,school and the list goes on .

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a reasonable guy, i like playing minecraft, hangind out with my buds and playing sports. I'm a helping guy and love to make part of big projects/events.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:About 3-4 hours daily and a lot more in weekends.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Role-playing it's about trying to change to assume a rol, but, In-game talking, when a person creates a character and have to choose his/hers actions based on that character's traits/life/moral. That means that you decide that character's actions by your will using those traits.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I'm an actor if you could say that, and i played quite a large number of MMORPG's and so on, so i think i can manage it.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-gaming is using information or resourses Out-Of-Game in one's IN-game decisions/actions.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:OK, for this i was denied, so i quess i would explain it this time.

Power-gaming->

1. Using Objects you do not have.

2. /me Actions / commands that is not possible.

3. *Tickle* with your /me's.

Now lets look into what they mean and how you should Role Play. If you are not going to read all of this please just read part 3 (*Tickle* with your /me's). This is the most commen thing people do with their /me's and it makes Role Play Old and borring.

So:

1. Using Objects you do not have.

Well it explains it's self. Do not use the command "/me Pull's out a MP5 and aims at Casper's Head." If you do not have a MP5.

2. /me actions / commands that is not possible.

In other words playing super man. Doing commands such as "/me Picks up the Building and throws it 100 Ft in the air" Would be stupid. In less of course your trying to act stupid.

3. THE BIGGEST ONE, /me tickle.

What is /me *tickle*? Well it is not using the following command "/me attempts to *tickle Casper" or "/me Attempts to knock Casper out and tickle him" or even "/me Swings his right arm at Casper's face, Attempting to tickle him up".

But it is "/me tickle(s) Casper and makes him laugh out loud".

No /me tickle dosen't mean role playing tickle. In fact its forcing a player to do a action or actions with your /me Commands.

Read Example one and two. Then think to your self what example looked best and looked like more fun to be in.

1.

Zippy pulls out a pistol and slaps Casper.

Zippy Knocks Casper onto his hands and knee's.

Zippy Kicks Casper in the face.

Zippy Knocks Casper out.

Zippy Steals all of Casper's cash from his wallet.

((Zippy, Pay me i just stole all your cash))

Alert- Zippy has been banned by admin Casper reason, Stealing all my cash.

2.

Zippy Pulls out a Pistol and swings it in the direction of Casper's head. ((Attempted hit))

Casper Notices Zippy's attempt and jumps back out of range of Zippy.

Casper Pulls out a water gun and aim's at Zippy's Body and fires.

Zippy Notices Casper unholstering his water gun and jumps behind near by four door can and uses it as cover.

Zippy start's to shoot in Casper's direction.

Casper is able to dodge most of the bullets but is hit in the leg.

Casper Yell's in pain, droping his water gun next to him he falls to the ground .

Zippy hear's the cry and jumps up turns around and keeps a steady aim at Casper's head with his Pistol.

Zippy Says "You can't fool me. I maybe am 80 years old, but i need those money."

Casper says "I won't give anything to you, old man!"

Zippy Says "Wrong answer I am getting my money way or another."

Casper says "We'll see about that."

Casper reach's for his water gun and aims in Zippys direction and fires as many times as possible.

Zippy see's Casper's attempt and shoots at Casper, Zippy takes several hits.

Casper is laying on the ground so Zippy's aim is correct. Casper fires several shots but also takes hits.

Zippy falls over wet .

Casper shouts "I'll be back!"

Casper falls over from the gun shots.

Casper start's to smile while closing his eyes.

Now what Rp would you rather be part of? Part of a good Rper is keeping in mind that you don't always need to win. You could die several times and not get much of what you are trying to get threw your RP but you will be a highly respected player. Don't be afraid to loose and don't be afraid to die. Both CAsper and Zippy died in this RP. But they both had a fun time. So both Casper and Zippy needed that respect, like their goal.

Hope you understood. If not i can make another one trying to explain more better...

What do you expect this server will be like?:I've seen many of your video's and i just bought my minecraft to play LOTC. Do i need to say anything more ?

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: 1.I've played on "Romania minecraft server", "LCSnet" , one of my friend's had a server and i've played on it and one more(forgot it's name).

2.I did leave them because none had what i was looking for, thing's like polite people, nice server rules,story and map.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes, i did. And yes, i do.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Here, in front of all of you, I promise to respect and abide all the rules,laws with everything that includes them!

How did you hear about us?: A friend told me a while ago about you guys and saw lots of videos.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/51581-rennegates-application/

In-Character:

Character Name:My charachter name is Nathryl

What Race are you?: I am part of the great elven race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):My name is Nathryl, son of Nuzhir.I don't know my mother, she died at my birth..that's what dad said at least, but i don't believe him, i can still dream her holding me in her warm arms. As a baby, i lived near the big city of Malinor but i've never been there until i turned 20 years old tho. Why? Because i needed to be strong. Those times were you needed to fight everywhere, who knew that it can get worse, right? haha!

Now i'm 68 years old,i have brown eyes and i live in Malinor and try to keep a decent life, who knows, everyone says that i'm a great guy but i'm a little hasty sometimes. Doesn't matter i'm a great warrior.

What is your Character's ambitions?:" I will be the best warrior and a well known prince someday! "

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My character's favorite tool is the bow!

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? "Cunning, i'm the best at it!"

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):Elf Prince

Other Information about your Character:He likes chilling out on the beach, and he's a womanizer.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?My character will jump in front of that halfling and fight with those warriors.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Hello , i hear you sell things? let's see what are you selling here "

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I will stay a little while to see if anybody will come, if not he will leave a note and leave those items there.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?I greed them back, and ask for their help in exchange i will help them when they are in need.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I will take my bow,sword and armor and assist the party.

*Tell me if you guys dislike something, i gladly would remake it :wink:

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This application has been

~DENIED~

Reasons:

-Open responses are too short

-Bio is too short

-Bio doesn't contain sufficient lore

-Please correct a few mistakes. Just try please, Your spelling and Grammar is better than most people who study it for 12 years at school :P

Please fix this up and re-post after 24 hours thanks.

P.s Good luck~

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