Rennegate's Application

[Rennegate 0]

This is one PM that app Volutional sent me yesterday after my 4th post, so this is my fifth try and the last it seems, hope me luck:D" "Sent Yesterday, 06:27 PM

On your most recent one, ignore the "You may not post for three months"

This was an error on my side, and I wish to tell you that you may post after 24 hours.

Sorry in advance, I'll get somebody to edit the post

~ Volutional ~

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Application Team Member

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PM me any issues you have, remember that you can't post again for 24 hours after a Denial

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:My minecraft account is Rennegate.

How old are you?:I'm 17 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Romania, GMT +2

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Just i said in the previous application i think i can handle most of the english language, but without "making myself a statue", my english teacher says that i am the best at it.

*I started learning from cartoons like scooby-doo and so on, then i played a lot of games,school and the list goes on .

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a reasonable guy, i like playing minecraft, hangind out with my buds and playing sports. I'm a helping guy and love to make part of big projects/events.

For the appearence i have brown eyes, 1.80m, brown hair as well. Think that's it.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:About 3-4 hours daily and a lot more in weekends.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Role-playing it's about trying to change to assume a rol, but, In-game talking, when a person creates a character and have to choose his/hers actions based on that character's traits/life/moral. That means that you decide that character's actions by your will using those traits.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I'm an actor if you could say that, and i played quite a large number of MMORPG's and so on, so i think i can manage it.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-gaming is using information or resourses Out-Of-Game in one's IN-game decisions/actions. *To decide one(s) character actions/doing like so.

Example: I'm on a forum/teamspeak of a server and i planned all the steps that i need to make from now on IN-game, so my job now is to go in game and do all that i decided with my friends/colleagues .

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:OK, for this i was denied, so i quess i would explain it this time.

Power-gaming-> represents the aim towards a specific goal.

Now lets look how you should Role Play.

So here are some examples:

1. Using Objects you do not have, like "/pull out a bazooka and aim for Casper".

2. The second one is using /actions /commands that is not possible, like "/throw the whole server on fire"

3. And the last one, /me tickle.

What is /me *tickle*? Well it is not using the following command "/attempts to *tickle Casper" or "/attempts to knock Casper out and tickle him".

But it is "/tickle(s) Casper and makes him laugh out loud".

No /tickle dosen't mean role playing tickle. In fact its forcing a player to do a action or actions with your /Commands.

Think what of those examples will fit you most.

1.

Darth Vader pulls out his light saber and yells at a Stormtrooper.

Darth Vader uses force to chokes the Stormtrooper.

Darth Vader cuts the Stormtrooper in half.

Darth Vader kills the Stormtrooper.

Darth Vader steals all of his ammunition.

[[Darth Vader, Swear loyality to me, i have your ammunition]]

*Darth Vader has been banned by admin Sith, reason-stealing all ammunition*

2.

Zippy Pulls out a Pistol and swings it in the direction of Casper's head. ((Attempted hit))

Casper Notices Zippy's attempt and jumps back out of range of Zippy.

Casper Pulls out a water gun and aim's at Zippy's Body and fires.

Zippy Notices Casper unholstering his water gun and jumps behind near by four door can and uses it as cover.

Zippy start's to shoot in Casper's direction.

Casper is able to dodge most of the bullets but is hit in the leg.

Casper Yell's in pain, droping his water gun next to him he falls to the ground .

Zippy hear's the cry and jumps up turns around and keeps a steady aim at Casper's head with his Pistol.

Zippy Says "You can't fool me. I maybe am 80 years old, but i need those money."

Casper says "I won't give anything to you, old man!"

Zippy Says "Wrong answer I am getting my money way or another."

Casper says "We'll see about that."

Casper reach's for his water gun and aims in Zippys direction and fires as many times as possible.

Zippy see's Casper's attempt and shoots at Casper, Zippy takes several hits.

Casper is laying on the ground so Zippy's aim is correct. Casper fires several shots but also takes hits.

Zippy falls over wet .

Casper shouts "I'll be back!"

Casper falls over from the gun shots.

Casper start's to smile while closing his eyes.

3.

Tom aims to hit Jerry in the head with his broomstick.

Jerry notices Tom's attempt and starts running to the kitchen for a weapon.

Tom chases Jerry along the hallway and hits Jerry with the broomstick, throwing him in the sinkhole.

Jerry grabs a dirty knife and cuts Tom's broomstick in little pieces.

Tom looks at the pieces of the broomstick and pulls out another knife from his fur.

Jerry attacks Tom with all his might and fights with him for a while.

In an unguarded moment, jerry gets stabbed by tom and dies.

Tom sees what he has done and starts crying until Jerry's soul rises from his body.

Then Tom catches his buddy's soul and tries to make it stay there, pushing it to Jerry's body.

Jerry's soul manages to escape from Tom's hands and ascents to heaven, but at the halfway there he hears Tom crying and decides that he can return to his body once more.

When Jerry wakes up, they hug as two old friends and start fighting and chasing again.

Keep in mind that you don't always need to win. You could die several times and not get much of what you are trying to get threw your RP but you will be a highly respected player. Everyone in this Rp's had a fun time. So they needed that respect, like their goal.

Hope you understood...

What do you expect this server will be like?:I've seen many of your video's and i just bought my minecraft to play LOTC. Do i need to say anything more ?

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: 1.I've played on "Romania minecraft server", "LCSnet", killion detention center, super-earth, one of my friend's had a server and i've played on it and one more(forgot it's name).

2.I did leave them because none had what i was looking for, thing's like polite people, nice server rules,story and map.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes, i did. And yes, i do.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Here, in front of all of you, I promise to respect and abide all the rules,laws with everything that includes them!

How did you hear about us?:A friend told me a while ago about you guys and saw lots of videos.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/51779-rennegates-application/

In-Character:

Character Name:My charachter name is Nathryl

What Race are you?: I am part of the great elven race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):My name is Doriath, son of Lorien.

As a child i travelled a lot with my father, he seemed cautious and we never stayed in the same place for long. I never asked why or where are we going next, i just simply followed him, but i often asked him where is my mom and everytime he tapped my head and smiled at me and said that we will see her soon. Because we traveled a lot i heared so many stories about the great city of Malinor, about all the wonders it posseses, so i decided that when i grew older i would at least go and see them personally. Of course that when i grew older i realised my mother was dead.

When we travelled from place to place , my father decided to take a safer path, the wilds. "Have you ever seen perfectly safe paths?", my dad always said. He was right, we often were ambushed by bandits, creatures and sometimes orcs, so i decided that i needed to protect myself and my father as well. I trained with my father everyday and i was happy because in those moments i saw my father being happy from the bottom of his heart. He always said after my training that i looked just like my mother, that i have her beautiful and big green eyes.

But that didn't last long, because when i turned 20 years old, i remember that one night me and my farther camped in the wilds because it was already dark. It was my turn to watch for dangers but i fell asleep and at somepoint i heared the trees falling and their whispers saying that they needed help. I opened my eyes and saw a unfamiliar creature, smelling like the dead ones, pointing it's cold and rusty sword, covered with fresh blood at my neck, then i turned to the right and saw my father laying dead in a pool of blood. In that moment i realised that it killed my father and i was next on it's list, when i tried to take my sword, the dead one suddently collapsed on me. After i pushed it over, i saw 3 men killing those things and save me. I couldn't let my father there but one of those men hit me in the back of my head. I woke up in a small house where they explained me that my father is dead and they are ''lost druids'' from the guild of ''the druids'' and they came there to save the forrest after the dead started to cut all the trees. I realised that i need to join them when i was ready enough and i left after i burried my dad in the elven ways thinking that i could not forget what he has teached me, the story of Asulon, the different races like "the humans,orcs,dwarfes, Kharajyr" and all the sub classes, the ancient races and all the places and nations.

Now, i wear my father's blazon on my chest and his "trusthy" bow and my young elvish age of 300 years i still feel powerful and capable. I have made road to the city of Malinor at last and indeed is the greatest of them all. I can't wait my new adventure and hope i will find "that" girl someday now.

So the story of young Doriath continues...

What is your Character's ambitions?:" I will be the best warrior and a well known prince someday!", that's what he always says. Above that, he's waiting for the next adventure.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My character's favorite tool is his father's 'trusthy' bow.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?"Cunning, i'm the best at it!"

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):Elf Prince

Other Information about your Character:He likes chilling out on the beach, and he likes drinking a lot!

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?My character's first reaction is to try convince them to leave that halfling alone with his cunning skills, if that doesn't work he will fight with hi's father's bow and sword with all his might.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?My character will ask the merchant what goods he has. From there on, there are two posibilities: 1.The merchant has good items and my character will negociate with him for a smaller price.

2.The merchant has old and bad items and my character will knock him off, stealing his items.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:My character will stay a couple of days in that hut, afterwards he will leave, taking those items with him for a fair trade in the next city.Of course, he is a nice guy, but he needs to survive. After that, when it's possible, he will go back and leave the same number of iron bars and one golden sword.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?My character will never suffer from hunger because of his survival skills, but if that happens, my character will sell his services for some food , water and shelter, after all, he is raised by his father,an honorable elf. After that, he would thank them and then he will leave on his way.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:My character will ofer his services to the leader of the party for two reasons: 1.The happiness of a new adventure, the thing that he desires the most.

2.He could use some money and some new friends and some new adventures.

I hope this time is well done :D

[Brokencrowe 111]

I am deeply sorry for this but your application has been:

Denied

Your application has many small grammatical errors riddled about, but that is hardly the reason you were denied.

Your powergaming definition is still wrong; where as your examples are extensive, but a bit confusing. Powergaming is subjecting others to roleplay scenarios that break realism. Powergaming is about the realism. For instance if I stab you in the stomach, and slash upward along your chest and you still go fighting strong without taking into consideration your wounds, that is power-gaming. If you can sprint long distances while wearing heavy iron armor, and not get fatigued that is a form of power-gaming. It goes far beyond that of a combat scenario. Where as if it lays inside of the combat scenario you cannot just assume your actions will one hundred percent successful or vice versa, you must take into consideration your character's faults and missgivings, and assume you won't succeed all the time.

Your biography is mixed, you should definitely describe how you got to Asulon if you started in Aegis. And of course include more lore related material that ties into your story; for instance where you ended up in Asulon, and how you got there.

Your open reponse questions are sorely under-developed. You need to write these answers in full roleplay, and should aim to show off your character to his deepest details. Show us all his faults, and missgivings, as well as all his strengths and good traits. You should make him feel real and offer us a glimpse into his life, and his way of doing things. This is your oppurtunity to show us your ability to roleplay and get a feel of who your character is and what he will do in these scenarios.

You will be allowed to reapply in three months time, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

Moved to Denied Forum