Bagabuns Application

[bagabuns 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: My Minecraft account name is bagabuns.

How old are you?: I'm 13 at the moment turning 14 in four months.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Standard Time and I live in the Las Vegas, Nevada, United States.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I'm only in 8th grade but I prefer to see "I"s capitalized and prefer not to see "immature" things in the chat, I think I am pretty good with grammar for my age.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well, my name in real life is Kai, and I exactly don't like to pretend to be someone else, so I gonna make my character like me if I were in those times. So I like to be in a nice active community where everyone is doing something. I play xbox and so sometimes I may not be online but I make time for Minecraft whenever I get the chance.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can put in 1-5 hours a day (or more depending on what kind of day it is and what is going on in real life), but weekly I can't be exact.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying to me is being in a act. For example, say a village is under attack in the game and you are talking over plans and you remember something you saw that worked out that doesn't have anything to do with the game. Instead of saying "Oh I remember this one thing I saw on TV..." you say something like "Here's a suggestion, my father told me tricks like these when I was a little child back then...". Stuff like that.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I had some rolelplaying experience before on one minecraft server, it was called Cecelia, I didn't like it to much because it wasn't the experience for me. I got tired of sitting around doing nothing reading chat, so I kinda just quit of inactivity.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is where you find stuff without role-play, for example: say you get tped somewhere into a base and you write down the cords and get your army to go raid it, that would be Meta-Gaming. In other words it's where you find something non role-play and say you found it when you didn't.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is where someone has an unfair advantage. For example, say someone has god mode on and they attack you. That would be Power-Gaming because you can't do anything while he's untouchable.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to have fair pvp, and have a mature, nice, friendly community.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on alot of pvp/faction servers, I left them because of hackers and what not, but as far as I know, this server has really good admins. (I left all them but grudgeofmine, I like that server it's just that I'm gonna split the time equally so I can have stuff to do so I don't get bored of either)

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I read the rules and I think they are reasonable, and I most certainly agree with the rules, I think people should at least be able to spell correctly.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I promise to obey the rules.

How did you hear about us?: I heard about you guys from looking up good role-play servers and found some of petris' old videos and watched them and thought the server loooked really fun.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have not and hopefully don't have too, but if so I will make sure to link you to this the next time I apply (24 hours after the denied application) if I don't get accepted. (I changed the template to the one with the colors because I just realized that I used the wrong one so I just copy and pasted my old answers to this new template and will delete the application with the wrong template in a few moments).

In-Character:

Character Name: Kai Bagabuns

What Race are you?:Human (I perfer to be human in most games)

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): I'm just gonna stick to only human.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Kai Bagabuns was raised in a dangerous land known as the Grudge of Mine. At the age of 7 a group of bandits came and attacked his loved village. The parents sacrificed themselfs for their children. Kai and his friends ran from the scene and sad and nowhere to go, they started building their own army. Using the stuff they learned from their parents they built and became scavengers. They did whatever it took to survive and eventually grew to be a civilized group when kai was around 15.

He started to make his kingdom and became leader of the group, he had people move into his kingdom. Him being a leader created him to gain some humor. He lead his villagers to safety, always protecting them the best he good. He always stayed on the inside of Grudge of Mine, never journeyed out to the other countries that bordered the land. His army grew and grew...

Two years later his army had many allies, but an ally was mad at Kai and hired an assassin faction to take Kai down. The assassin faction started by killing villagers on their way to the capital. Eventually they attacked the base late at night. Kai Bagabuns fought with his men but were overwhelmed and in battle a chunk of wood fell off a burning building behind Kai and hit him in his head. He was cut in his stomach. Wounded, Kai woke up hours later, everyone was gone! Dazed and confused he wondered in a direction for hours.

He eventually fainted of thirst came across a village named Falgamor. They treated him till he was better. When he got better he asked who and where their king was, they pointed him in the direction of the kingdom. After many goodbyes he went off to the kingdom asking to join them along with any of his men still alive from the raid. He asks if he knows anything about the assassins and finds out they are the same people who came in and killed his parents 10 years back...

What is your Character's ambitions?: To find the rest of his friends and army to regroup and to avenge all those who died to the hand of the assassins who killed his parents and his friends.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Kai Bagabuns prefers to use a sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? My character's most skilled talent is his ability to have common sense, and put a sword to good use when necessary.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): I couldn't find how to paste (I have mac so I don't know) I'm sorry for that I spent 3 hours looking how to do that but I know how to make a link for it: file:///Us​ers/kai/De​sktop/Scre​en%20shot%​202012-04-​23%20at%20​6.03.40%20​PM.png

Other Information about your Character: He is trying to find his friends who survived the raid while helping the humans with any conflict they have.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Kai Bagabuns runs up to the warriors and pushes them away from the child and gets infront of the child holding out his sword, "What are you two men doing harassing this child here?" Kai Bagabuns says. "Well, we're just having fun, you can be harassed too if you want. *Guards come and arrest the two* Kai Bagabuns tells the guards what he saw and continues on his journey with the child to bring him to his home.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I ask him what does he have for sale, he says a bunch of stuff that's used for potions, I say I don't know how to make potions and tell him of a friend who does and wish him a good day and carry on.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I look around for anyone. I see there is nobody and start to think. I don't want to steal if it is somebodys and their just on a mining trip. So I leave and keep everything the way it was.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I walk up to the traders and ask how much will it cost for some food and shelter. I pay the amount they demanded. I crawl in the ragged up bed and slowly fall asleep only to wake up with nothing and everything gone. "Dangit!" Kai yells, "darn bandits".

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Kai Bagabuns wonders in a city seeing a party to hunt some bandits, remembering how he just got robbed by bandits again he rushes to sign up. During the night he rests and fills up on some food, all ready to go he charges the enemy. In the battle he recognizes their faces. He turns around and sees the person he bought the food from as he gets cut in his leg. On one knee he stabs the bandit infront of him only to fall to the ground. The party surrounds him covering him dragging him out of the battle. The battle is one moments later. "Well heres your reward kid" the party leader says while tossing his money at Kai* *Kai looks up slowly* "Thanks, can I stay at your cabin for a bit, you know, till my leg heals?"

There I go. Thank you for reading my application, I hope you liked it, if not I plan on fixing any errors I missed (after 24 hours of course). Thanks again and cya I guess.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Denied

-Add more to what roleplay means then you can add examples, just missing tiny bit which you slightly explained in your example.

-Wrong definition for metagaming, it is kinda right but missing the whole point of what metagaming means. Powergaming explained kinda half of it, need to add more.

-For your bio, please do not say you made a kingdom or city. Aegis was fully explored and cannot make one in Asulon, use real places please and re-read the lore.

-No skin, you must find a way, try using the website called Imageshack.

-Few of your open response answers need more detail, maybe more speeches and roleplay actions you r character makes.

Please re-apply after 24 hours.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Moved to Denied Forum