Bagabuns 2Nd Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: My Minecraft account name is bagabuns.

How old are you?: I'm 13 turning 14 on August 4th

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Standard Time and I live in the Las Vegas, Nevada, United States.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I'm only in 8th grade but I prefer to see "I"s capitalized and prefer not to see "immature" things in the chat, I think I am pretty good with grammar for my age.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well, my name in real life is Kai, and I exactly don't like to pretend to be someone else, so I gonna make my character like me if I were in those times. So I like to be in a nice active community where everyone is doing something. I play xbox and so sometimes I may not be online but I make time for Minecraft whenever I get the chance.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can put in 1-5 hours a day (or more depending on what kind of day it is and what is going on in real life), but weekly I can't be exact.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is basically where you act in the shoes of someone you're not. So you pretend to be that character and show what that character knows only.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I played on this server called Cecelia, but I kind of quit because it wasn't the experience I was looking for because they would always just type in chat and do nothing pretty much, but this server I don't think I'm gonna get board of.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is where you basically go outside of the games limits. So say you tp to someone base and write the cords. Then you go to the cords and say you found it. That would be MetaGaming because you didn't actually find it. So MetaGaming is just where you use "eternal factors" to do things in the game. (I had to look it up on wiki to see what I missed in the definition last time)

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: PowerGaming is where you have an unfair advantage over other people. For example, hackers, they fly and cheat, that's PowerGaming. So PowerGaming is just when you have an unfair advantage pretty much.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect an awesome community and great wonderful people to meet and make lots of online friends with some fair nice pvp. Also I expect to be able to joke around with nice mature people and not get any stuff put in chat like "guyz can i cum to ur base i need somewhere to stay plz, bagabuns r u gona lets me". Hopefully nobody like that, that stuff is so annoying when  people type like that.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played alot of pvp servers and some roleplay with a tiny bit of vanilla Minecraft. I left them because of the things they had wrong that admins won't fix or just terrible admins. I left all them but one and that one is Grudgeofmine. I'm planning playing both servers (this one more) and just have the ultimate Minecraft experience.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read the rules and agree with them to the max, I think people should at least put in some thought to what their typing.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I promise to follow and respect the rules.

How did you hear about us?: I heard about you guys from one of Petris' old videos when I was looking up "Minecraft role play servers" lol.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: http://www .lordofthe craft.net/ forum/inde x.php?/top ic/52135-b agabuns-ap plication/

In-Character:

Character Name: Kai Bagabuns

What Race are you?: Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): none

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

   Kai Bagabuns grew up in a nice village at the border of Aegis. It was a peaceful village with a small population. He lived there with his friends and family growing up. He lived a peaceful life till one day...

   At the age of 6 the town Kai lived in was attacked by bandits. Him and his friends were kidnapped. Everyone who wasn't taken was slaughtered. A year later Kai and his friends escaped to a near village. They stayed there and worked in exchange for the towns people allowing them to let them stay. Kai eventually asked the towns people if he could use some time to train his fighting skills to avenge the bandits. When Kai became 19 years of age he went off for the kingdom to join the human kings army and live as a citizen among the kings people.

  While wondering Kai was lost. He kept walking and found a trading camp, Kai didn't want to disturb them but his stomach growling of hunger he couldn't resist. He asked the traders if he could buy some food. "That would be 15 minas" the trader replied with a shaky voice. "Here you go sir" Kai replies. *Exchanges items*. " Do you mind me staying with you kind travelers for the niight?" Kai asks, "Sure why not. The more the better" *He replied in a friendly voice.

  Kai was walking around the camp when he saw a strange man in the corner of the camp packing some items in a chest. "Hello sir, got anything for sale?" Kai asked hoping the man was a trader. "Sure what do you want, I got numerous amounts of items you won't find anywhere else in all of Aegis. "I'll take some spider eyes I guess." Kai says, *exchange items*.

  In the mourning Kai says his goodbyes and continues on his journey to the main castle and comes across a house. Kai knocks the door to find nobody answering it. Kai looks around, "Hmm nobody here, must be abandoned.". Kai walked inside and say webs everywhere and blood splattered on the paintings of the walls with some shattered armor pieces on the floor. Kai looks in the chest and finds some swords and iron. "Hmm must be bandits that left this behind, I gotta bring this to the guards. Kai grabs the items and gets on the main road to the kingdom.

  While walking on the road Kai sees two grown warriors harassing a small halfling. "Stop hurting the child before I have the guards alerted of this nonsense!" Kai yelled. *Bandits stand up dropping the halfling and take out two iron swords* "Aww does this numrat want some too?" *Kai takes out the gold sword he had in his belt while pushing the kid behind him with his other hand*. The two bandits charge Kai and being out numbered is cut in the rib, he manages to slice one in the throat before falling to the ground. As Kai falls to the ground guards rush in surrounding the three with bows pointed at them. The halfling tells the guards what was happening and Kai is quickly rushed to the doctors in the city.

  When Kai is fully restored his strength he leaves the monks area. Walking out he sees a few men sitting and talking while one is shouting "Join the party to get rid of the awful bandits who haunt travelers!" Kai walks over to see the poster better. He decides to join the party. "I would like to volunteer to get rid of those bandits sir." Kai said walking up to the man. "The only thing I will need is a swor-" feeling the gold sword still there, "oh never mind then." "Alright sign your name right here and here." the party leader instructed. While looking at the list of the party members he sees some familiar names on the list. Turns out his friends made it here before he did. Happy as ever Kai enters in the bar where the men moved into for the night. The party leader told Kai something but he doesn't remember exactly what it was. Kai didn't care he just wanted to catch up with his friends. They had a nice conversation and then went to their rooms to sleep.

  Kai was woken up early. "Alright men! We are marching to the bandit camp and taking them down once and for all, all the men and women who lost their lives to those cruel bandits will be avenged today!" the party leader yelled! The army eventually started moving out and made it to the camp in an hour. They snuck up to the wall. "Kai your up, climb up the tower and take out the two archers up there." the party leader whispered. Kai started climbing up the tower. He made it up and killed the two silently. He hoped down and opened the gates. The party charged in. Most bandits were killed before they can even arm themselves. They fought for hours before the bandits surrendered. Freeing the prisoners Kai found the traders who gave him food a while back. "Woah, you're a good man here Kai, thank you for saving us." the trader said. "Eh, just returning the favor for giving me some food" Kai replied. *Both chuckled* "See you around old champ" Kai said walking away. Kai went and got his reward and continued his quest to the king to join the human forces. "You guys coming?" Kai said breathing hardly. "Nah I think I might come join you in the future pal, but for now, it's your adventure." Kais friend said to him. Leaving each other Kai went to the castle and his friends went back to the village.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To keep all evil away from the lands.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Kai prefers to use a sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? My characters most skilled talent is sword to sword combat and the ability to know his surroundings.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): I hope this works

Other Information about your Character: He is aware of his surroundings and will protect his comrades with all his life. He obeys orders but if he believes they're right and not wrong against humanity.

Open-Response-Questions

I put the response questions in my bio if you guys don't mind, I thought that would be better for you guys and more interesting.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been Denied. This application presents a couple of small mistakes or errors.

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These were the main points which were bad or not so good of your application:

~Your Power-Gaming definition is incorrect. Even though being overpowered is power-gaming, that is not the definition we want, why don't you look around on the forums or on Team Speak to find out its real meaning.

~Your biography needs to be worked on, be original, and use correct Lore (the destruction of Aegis and travel to Asulon), be creative and you need to explain your appearance and attitude and what it says in the question. Also, your bio should not be constructed by the ORQs, you seem to have filled it up with them, they are too show your RP qualities and not your story writing ones. Thus...

~You have put in open response questions, I must say, they are the most important bit, but in the wrong place.

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Once you fix these things you can re-apply but only 24 hours after your latest application. Use your time well and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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