Encoded2's Application

[Encoded 0]

This is my 2nd application, I posted a different one with the app from the MC forums and the post was deleted. I assume thats because the MC forum application is not updated, so heres my app using the correct one.

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Encoded2

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

EST/USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am usually nice and hope to get a lot of fun out of this server. I don’t rage about getting my items stolen or being killed. I dislike people who use unfair game mods like Xray as it ruins the game for everyone else. I am a student so there will be some days when I will not be able to come online.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

2-4 Hours a day, Depending on how much I like the server.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Ive roleplayed with a few friends on thier server, but I wanted to play with more people.

Roleplaying is acting as a character (usually a character that you create)and not as yourself.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

2-4 Hours a day, Depending on how much I like the server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Using info that you’re character wouldn’t normally know to benefit you

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Saying your actions have been successful without giving the other player a chance to respond. Or taking actions that would quickly increase you’re money, skill, progress, ect. When your character would normally not do these things.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I’ve heard great things about this server from others, and I hope to improve my RPing by playing here. I expect to see a great community and player run towns that I could join, along with the choice to live in the wild instead. I also expect to see a great story that goes along with the world that I can RP in

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Creation Nation: Repetitive, very little pvp

Super-Earth: No anti-Xray, little pvp

A lot of others: Bad staff, Donate for power, nothing to stop hackers, ect.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

yes

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?:

Other players talking about it, not sure who

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52644-encoded2s-lotc-application/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

yes

In-Character:

Character Name:

Garviel

What Race are you?:

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I was born in the Kingdom of Salvus and joined a group of adventurers at the age of 24. After traveling with them for awhile I learned how to survive in the wild and to use a bow and sword. But I left the group when I realized that they started robbing citizens from my own kingdom. Now I’m collection resources to visit the kingdoms of the world and help out others when needed. My first stop will be to visit my kingdoms capital, Solace, to buy supplies and sell any unwanted materials.

If I find a chest with valuables in it I’m more then likely going to take some unless its someone allied. I am friendly to anyone in or allied with the town that I join but anyone else I may attack if they get to close. I am currently 29 and can sometimes be mistaken as a bandit as my outfit resembles one. I have been known to not talk much as I only say things when they need to be said and I dislike long pointless conversations.

Appearance: See skin

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To join a town and start collecting items to improve my armor and skills. Then to start visiting all the different kingdoms of the land to learn more about the world and meet more people.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Sword when in combat and a bow for hunting

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Using a sword in combat

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Garviel currently dislikes orcs because of some stories he’s been told by other towns people, and is neutral on his opinion to all other races.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Garviel: “I’m going to have to ask you to stop.”

Warriors: “Why should we?”

Garviel: “I’m Sure I could find a few others nearby who would not like what you are doing.”

Warriors: “Fine, he can keep his money”

Garviel: "If I find you doing this again im going to have to challange you"

Warriors: "Challange both of us? Good luck with that."

Garviel: Youre the ones who are going to need luck

(Warriors walk away)

(Garviel walks away as the halfling thanks him)

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

“Id like to see what you have for sale, and perhaps make a trade”

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Gariviel would take both the gold bars and sword. He would feel bad for taking them but if he had left them someone else would most likely have stolen them.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

“I need help I'm starving, Ill pay any reasonable price for some food and temporary shelter.”

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Gariviel would offer his help to defeat the bandits and recruit more people to help fight to make sure that the towns guard outnumber the bandits.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

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Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

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Out of Character:

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Role Play:

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-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

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Character is Cliche [ ]

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Form:

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Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

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Other Comments:

In your application, your character possesses / performs villainous acts. You need to remove this from your application.

The rest of the reasons for your denial are disclosed above.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum