Callumrh Application

[Kai Asakura 0]

Minecraft Account Name: callumrh

How old are you?: 14.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United kingdom.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a 14 year old RPG n00b I love minecraft and skyrim im a nice guy and all ways want to help people.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 4-5 hours a day

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: roleplaying is becoming the person you want to be from sci fi to fantasy even if your 3 years old or 90 role playing is the link to or childhood

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I’ve played skyrim D and D and I do warhammer 40k and fantasy

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is using knowledge from the real world or knowledge from other games to get an advantage

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: getting better/smarter at gaming

What do you expect this server will be like?:friendly magical adventure :3

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:shaboozey.com well I haven’t left I just don’t go on as much

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes I have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do

How did you hear about us?: looking for an amazing RPG server and the most recommended was you

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have but I can’t seem to find it as soon as I find it I will send u the link

In-Character:

Character Name: Rin_blueflame

What Race are you?: human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):My dad was killed by the devil himself I was fostered by dads best friend and have been taught in the ways of magic

What is your Character's ambitions?:To get revenge on the devil and demons of this world

What is your character’s favourite tool? (Sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): sword or whatever can shed blood

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? magic/exorcism

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): also http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/145245/black-hood/

Other Information about your Character: A good guy who wants to make allies

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small Halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? He will protect the Halfling with his life.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I’m looking for fresh potion supply’s do u have any?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Look around for anyone if no one appears he will go inside and look around

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Hello I have been lost for days I have no food or water could u spare any?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information? He will help but for no reward helping does not need a reward knowing u have helped someone is the best reward.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [X]

Bad Information [X]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

-Open Response Questions are Lacking [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [X]

Bouts of Powergaming [X]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [X]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X]

-Incorrect Character Description [X]

-Incorrect Skin Format [X]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your Reasoning for Denial is Disclosed / Marked Above.

Overall, it seems your application lacked a lot of effort. Next time, please implement much more detail and effort into your application-- I suggest you take a read at our lore and further your knowledge with roleplaying. You had quite a few errors, but they can be corrected with careful study of their meaning and context in Lord of the Craft.

PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS, THANK YOU.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum