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[Redcake11 4]

Minecraft Account Name:redcake11

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Netherlands Time-Zone GMT 1+

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Well i'm still learning english but i can typ it so i can ask around and stuff.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:an nice guy who won't get angry fast loyal to his friends/won't leave them behind

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I don't know for sure but atleast more then an hour

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Being your character and knowing what your character knows leaving OOC behind

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I had no experience because no one on the other servers i play on knows how to roleplay

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:knowning information that your character doesn't know like:never seen of heard of magic in character but out of character he knows everything of it and uses that in character like blocking spells

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:forcing someone to do something without that he/she can resist

What do you expect this server will be like?:Awesome i have seen all the trailers and all the vids from LoC youtube's channel

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:only Omegacraft

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes i do

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes i do but i don't got teamspeak so thats easyer to say yes to

How did you hear about us?:Youtube/Rekreations

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/user/39028-redcake11/

In-Character:

Character Name:Leo Thanagathor

What Race are you?:Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Leo Thanagor:Middle sized in lenght.Knows some magic not much.Good at swording.Black hair,blue eyes.Was raised by elves.Has an nice personality Leo Thanagor was born in an city in the kingdom of Renatus.He lived there 1 year because the orcs where raiding his village.His father fought against the orcs to stretch some time so his mom could run away to safety.The orcs where with toomuch orcs the village was burned down and only a small amount of survivors.Leo's mom ran off to the elven kingdom of malinor for safety.Leo's mom gave leo to the elfs for safety.So the elves raised him at his 6th birthday he gotted an book called:The history of aegis.He wanted to read it but he didnt know how to read properly so he asked if the elves would read it for him.At his 7th birthday he could read and write.He had to go to school when his 7th birthday was over.He didn't like school because he was always bullied because he has no point ears.But at his 9th birthday everything changed he could go on an traning.He choosed the swords training from an old elf swords master.He was there with 2 other elves almost all of the other elves choosed for magic training etc.When he came home by his elven parents he could go practice with his sword.Little did he know that his elven parents weren't his real parents.His elven parents where both farmers.He had an tournament of swords when he was 9 years old he was placed 2th in the tournament.His reward was an stone sword and 15 minas he used the stone sword for practice from that day on.When he was 13 years old he didn't have to go to school anymore now he could do more things like join clubs and think about his future.He decided he was going to join the gaurds,but the didn't let him join because he wasn't an elf.He was like huh?He asked his elven parents why they said i wasn't an elf.His elf parents explained what happend to him when he was an baby. Leo understanded that and decided to go on an journey to find his real mother.He took his stone sword and some bread and an couple of minas and then set off in the night so his elf parents won't notice he left a note saying:I'm going to find my mother.He searched and searched everywhere for years he was about 18 years old and he finnaly found his original village rebuilded he looked around there and saw an grave he looked at the grave and saw that it was his mothers grave.He left an couple of flowers there and setted off.And he ended up in the cloud temple.....and so his story begins

What is your Character's ambitions?:Helping if friends get attacked with his sword.Being loyal to friends he will not leave them if they are in danger

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Swording

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:Middle lenght,Black hair blue eyes likes swording

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?he would walk up to them tick them on their back and ask:what are you 2 guys doing harrasing that small halfling? they answered:Nothing you have to know.Leo:So you are stealing money from an small halfling? Leo takes out his sword and says let him go.they letted him go and gived his money back.Leo wandered off...

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Hello fine dressed man i would like some bread and a bottle of water the man:ok that will be 12 minas.Leo hands him the minas.Have an nice day

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:He would not take anything from the chest because he isnt an robber/thief

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Hello mind sharing some food with me?I'm lost too do you guys know where this is?the camp:this is trading camp delta in an forest here take an seat and eat some mushroom stew

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Leo would help and take the reward to buy a new sword and armor

[Whitebeard 126]

Denied: Your sentences and spacing need some serious improvement, as does your grammar. I think your Bio and questions lacked depth or a good roleplay understanding.