Xxtornmagexx Whitelist Application

[Eldrin Nym' 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

xXtornmageXx

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern Standard. United States of America.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes. It is the only language I speak.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a very outgoing person. I love to roleplay. I like playing video games of all types. Overall I'm just a swell guy! :3

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Well, I could probably be on four out of seven days for at least an hour.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.

Roleplaying is simply taking on the role of someone your not. Like pretending your a prince when you were younger. When you roleplay you need things like a bio, name, race, things like that. Roleplaying to me is more than just fun. It gives me a chance to escape real life. To do things impossible in the real world. Why walk to work when you could ride a dragon? You know?

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have a lot of experience roleplaying. I have been roleplaying for many years. I started when I was about 11. I played WoW, I used to always join roleplay servers. Then I really started to get into the idea of RP. I started playing games like Dungeons and Dragons. Then I discovered minecraft. That brings me here.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

I'm not exactly sure, but I think Meta-Gaming is when a character uses knowledge that his actual character in the game didn't obtain. The player may have obtained the information but the character did not. I apologize if this is incorrect.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Power-Gaming is when a character decides if his actions have a good outcome or not without giving the opponent a chance to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be big. Though I have read over the wiki numerous times, I still see myself getting lost the second I join the server. I have been watching candle's LP's. The server looks great!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on numerous servers. BlockEmpires is probably one of my favorites. I didn't leave it. I played on Tales of Mel'Lenxia. I left because the server was shut down. I played of Legends of Talarra. I left because there wasn't much to do. The server just wasn't set up well.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I understand the rules and I agree to all of them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I promise to abide by said rules, and laws on the server, the forum, and on teamspeak.

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?:

I heard about this by watching candle's LPs.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

I have. I can't seem to find it in the forums. :/ I have made 1 previously.

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

No,but I plan on doing so as soon as I am finished posting this.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Elric Shadowthief

What Race are you?:

Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

I'm not.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Description:

Elric is average hight. He is muscular for an Elf. He has a scar under his left eye from when he was

only a child. Elric is 18 years of age.

Bio:

"I'm leaving... I'm leaving... don't mind me father!" Said a boy as old as the age of seven. "Son, you better be leaving... i have important work to do!" The boy left his father's study and went down to the grounds of the mansion they owned. As the boy stepped out of the doors he walked to the small patch of farmland him and his family owned. He picked up a rusty iron hoe and swung it around aimlessly, thinking it was a sword and he was a mighty warrior! He swung at a tree and got the hoe stuck inside of it.

The boy sighed and put his hands on the stick part of the hoe. He pulled and pulled until the hoe flew out of the tree and on the ground. Th boy picked it up and walked to the wheat farm and started to harvest the wheat that was ready for harvesting. after finishing the harvesting of the wheat he walked back into the house with wheat in hand. He walked to the kitchen and put the wheat on the counter and walked away upstairs.

As he finally got upstairs he went into his room and and shut the door silently. He sat down in his wood chair and put his hands on his forehead and temples.

The boy was thinking hard, Thinking about his future and what would be in it, Thinking about why he had a strange last name, Why he had to be called, "Elric Shadowthief." All these random questions started pouring into his mind and started random experiences. What could this boy do in the future? he was just son of regular people, what was so special about the name, "Elric Shadowthief?"

They boy was thinking way too hard and went on thinking about his name. This name was to odd, strange, Dangerous! but why? what's wrong with having Shadowthief at the end of a name? apparently everything! Elric fell asleep after thinking so much on his desk and woke up to his father shaking him roughly. "Elric, Elric get up!" it's time i should show you something!" Elric slowly got up from the chair and followed his father into the cellar. His father moved a bunch of crates and barrels to reveal a hidden lever. as his father pulled it some stone moved away and what Elric saw amazed him. Under the mansion there was a hole complex of life-like people and swords on racks and sticks. Armor was held up on walls and training dummies were set up at the far end of the room.

"Father, what is this?" asked the boy hesitantly. "This, This my son is a training room. A place where you can learn how to fight. A place to earn knowledge. A place to learn to defend yourself and other people!" said his father proudly. "I built this after your mother died. I still remember her because she was the greatest woman i ever have known! Elric, my son, listen i will teach you everything you need to know. If someone kills me and tries to kill you, you'll be ready! if someone tries to hurt your friends! you'll be ready!" His father walked to a weapon case and pulled out the most elegant iron blade in all of their village. "Take this son... I hand my sword, The Winter's Delight, to you... please, keep it Elric. in memory of me if i die!"

The next mornic Elric woke, but not in his bed. He was in the back of a waggon heading to prison. Elric, confused, searched. "What is this? Whats happening? Why am I here? I did nothing!" Crying, he started to beat on the back door of the waggon. The waggon stopped. "What do you think you are doing back there boy?", a scratchy voice yelled. Elric heard footsteps. It sounded like a giant. "BOOM" "BOOM" "BOOM" Elric was scared. He backed in to the corner farthest from the door. He pulled his shirt over his face too terrified to watch. The door opened. Silence. He waited about 30 seconds. Finally, he slowly pulled his shirt out from over his face and looked around. No one was there. Just as he started to get up a hand went over his face and dragged him out of the waggon. As he was fighting to get out of the character's grasp he noticed the waggon driver. He lay on the ground beside the waggon with his throat slit. Elric started to relax. "Do you want to die boy?", said a strange woman. "No, who are you?" Elric turned around. "Who are you?", said Elric. "I am Veronica, Veronica Clemmence", said Veronica. "Why did you save me?", said Elric. "I was a friend of your fathers." "My father? Was? Did something happen?" "Meet me in Asulon, I will explain everything." Wait, don't go! What is Asulon?" Veronica vanished in to the mist.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

Elric hopes to be a king one day. He wants his name to be known all throughout Asulon. While he knows he wants to rule, his heart tells him he is a mighty warrior.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Unlike most Elves, Elric's favorite tool is the sword. Though he is also a very skilled archer.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Elric doesen't have any talents, but he has a good heart, and will stop at nothing to help others.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Elric runs behind some small bushes to watch from afar. He knew he had to do something! But, those warriors were huge! They would rip him to shreds. Elric disregarded what his gut was trying to tell him. "Hey, you can't do that!", said Elric. The guards turned and looked at Elric. They began to laugh. "And just what are you going to do to stop us?", asked one of the warriors. Sweat poured down Elric's cheek. "I'll show you!", said Elric. He pulled out his sword. The warriors laughed. "Take the money", said the warriors. "We are not going to fight you, you are only a boy." The guards gave the halfling the money and began to walk away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Hello there sir!", said Elric. "Do you have any thing for me to wear on me hands?" "It is getting cold out, and my fingers feel like they are about to fall off." "Here you go lad!", said the merchant. The man handed Elric some gloves. "They're nothing special, but they will get the job done!" "How much?", asked Elric. "I heard what you did for that halfling near the cloud temple.", said the merchant. "For you, they're on the house!"

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Elric doesn't even begin to take the items. His father had taught him never to steal. So he didn't.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

"Excuse me, do you happen do have any food?", said Elric. "I'm starving." A woman walks up to him. "Here you go",she said. "Take this, I feel good things son. Good things indeed.", said the woman.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Elric quickly prepares. He won't let scums like them get the best of the people who have been helping him. He grabs his sword and bow, and quickly joins the rest of the town. "I fight for those of good heart", said Elric. "Let this be a lesson to all who threaten me, or friends."

[Groobs03 297]

-From your last app

your biography and open responses both contain instances of powergaming.

, your bio was unchanged.

-A hint for your open responses would be to stop making your character so lucky, having one lucky instance is ok, but show that bad things can happen to your character. A bit of humility for your character can go a long way in an app.

If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I

Will gladly explain.

If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel"

For above problem.

I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go.

Have a nice day/night :)

[Groobs03 297]

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