Lu'inbals 3Rd App... [Denied]

[Angel~ 34]

Minecraft Account Name: mas0n99

Character Name: Lu'Inbal Ilanci

Gender: Female

Age: 26 ( Mori Years) ( 120 in human years)

Appearence: Lu'Inbal's Clothing has been torn and ripped from the fights and falls she has encountered through her time and the only place for her to put belongings is her small pouche , she has a red belt that stands out from the rest of her outfit which makes her slightly easier to be spotted in the dark. Her Height is 9ft and weights about 100 pounds , Her Regular clothing is very torn and ripped , its very dark and poorly made.

Personality: Lu'Inbal Is Fast at night when the moons down , she is most interested in the spiders and her culture. Lu'Inbal Is not always kind heart'd but if she gets to know you she will play around , But sometimes when playing she'd steal something less...valuable to the other Mori and hide it , She also isn't the brightest of all she'll sometime's make mistakes and cant always be taught easily and will sometimes stray of from the task at hand but she can also be flirty and kind with most people. She always has a small dagger with her at all time's just in case.

Biography: Lu'Inbal's life was not good at most time's her father left at a young age and her mother didn't always earn enough money for food , Even when she got some money her mother would spend it on drinks or drugs , Lu'Inbal would sometime's have to get her own money by hunting rats or other creatures she could find and sell them for money and use that money to by food or some clothing . She was home schooled but was never fully taught what she needed to get far in the world , She would sometimes get in fights with other female's and come out with scars or scratches but in most times she'd win , Her Scares where healed by the priestesses since she couldn't find her mother . She would mostly try to make some friends so if she got into some trouble they could help but her attitude only lead to her injuring her "Friends" cause they fought over some food or any item , Her Only friend was killed in the Alure d'aphyon she was sad but not impressed with her friends death but would sometimes mark down some other Mori's to steal from afterwards . Sometimes when she went exploring she'd look for cloth that has been torn or fallen of of something or she would steal some to fix her own clothes .

Your characters ambitions: She wants to try to survive her longest and gain more money to explore the world around here ,

===Roleplay Related Questions===

As your character wanders the back-streets of Menorcress, you sight a cloaked figure lurking in one of the shadowed nook behind the Brothel: a rustle of cloth is heard, and the figure ushers you in with a skeletal finger. The hooded figure imparts information involving a conspiracy to over-throw the House of Miiystra, and offers you a hefty sum of coin to partake in the planned attack. How does your character react? : She would get confused and scared from the skeletal finger as she backs up she yells "Guards! , This man wants to over-throw the House of Miiystra!. Come help!" As she says this the man's finger recedes into the shadows once more groaning . The figure gets up very weakly and try's to run from Lu'Inbal and others that are on there way but isn't very fast . The guards soon show up and chase down the man firing several shots into the mans legs before catching up to him . She smirks as the man is dragged off into the distance and finds a coin bag where the man had fallen , She grins widely and quickly grabs the bag of coin and rushes off.

Your character finds him/herself watching the Alure d'aphyon: the several fighters within the void maze wield only sticks as they prove their prowess as warriors by battling to the death. One of fighters happens to be a close companion of yours, and you witness him being strategically cornered by three of the other fighters and beaten to death. While the crowd cheers in celebration of the violence, and the death of your friend. How does your character react? : She see's her friend beaten to death and looks at the crowd cheering but says nothing to nervous to talk but inside she is mad but she feels no grief cause of her friends weakness , She afterwards steal's money or items from some mori's that she saw at the Alure d'aphyon and forgets about her weak friend and begins seeking money , good clothing or items of value.

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[Amethain 25]

Age: 26 ( Mori Years) ( 120 in human years)

Appearence: Lu'Inbal's Clothing has been torn and ripped from the fights and falls she has encountered through her time and the only place for her to put belongings is her small pouche , she has a red belt that stands out from the rest of her outfit which makes her slightly easier to be spotted in the dark. Her Height is 9ft and weights about 100 pounds , Her Regular clothing is very torn and ripped , its very dark and poorly made.

~~ Age 26 Mori Years

(You don't understand this do you... Here is an excerpt from the last Denial.)

~~ The age of Lu'Inbal is 26 years old

(is this in Human years or Mori Years? either way its EXTREMELY young. Here is the Mori vs Human years basic maturity guide again. What this shows is that the child would be barely more than an infant, or a young infant if in human years.)

Infancy: 1 - 25

Childhood: 26 - 50 years

Adolescence: 51 - 119 years

Adulthood: 120 - 199 years

Middle Age: 200 - 299 years

Old: 300 - 369 years

Venerable: 370+ years

Death age/Maximum age: 600

~~ Height 9 ft, weight 100 lbs

(You made a Very tall STICK FIGURE, you would not survive if you were this tall and that light. Also, Mori generally are fully grown around 5-6ft tall.)

Personality: Lu'Inbal Is Fast at night when the moons down , she is most interested in the spiders and her culture. Lu'Inbal Is not always kind heart'd but if she gets to know you she will play around , But sometimes when playing she'd steal something less...valuable to the other Mori and hide it , She also isn't the brightest of all she'll sometime's make mistakes and cant always be taught easily and will sometimes stray of from the task at hand but she can also be flirty and kind with most people. She always has a small dagger with her at all time's just in case.

~~ If she gets to know you she will play around

(She is trusting if she gets to know you, it is a weakness, though masked in mistrust.)

~~ Sometimes when playing she'd steal something less...valuable to the other Mori and hide it

(Depending on what you steal you might be proposing to the victim in Mori Culture.)

You might have slipped by with just the personality flaws, but the Size and Age got you denied...

[Danny 2232]

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