Dalia44's 3Rd App

[dalia44 (Bacon Goddess) 10]

Account name: dalia44

Age: 12

Country: United States

Good grip of English: Yes

Description: I'm somewhat weird, and come up with wacky stories, but I am a fun-loving girl who enjoys Minecraft.

Time on the server: At least an hour a day, except for on Saturdays, and for my 2nd session of camp I can't be on a computer.

Roleplaying knowledge: Roleplaying is when a person or group of people make up fake identities and pretend to be a different person.

Roleplaying experience: I have sampled many Roleplaying video games, and have played on quite a few roleplay Minecraft servers.

Meta-Gaming: Using info you got out of game to your advantage. If you don't know someone, you could look at their nameplate, even though you aren't supposed to have nameplates.

Power-Gaming: The act of using the Roleplaying to an unfair advantage. For example, if you are being chased and the person catches you, you can't just say "Escapes" every time the person catches you.

Expectations of server: A cool server full of Roleplaying, and lots of fun. Also, a fair server, where I can hang out and build without someone just killing me.

Other servers: I played on dozens of other servers, but mostly the Valhalla server, but it shut down because there were too many people breaking the rules.

Have you read the rules: Yes

Do you promise to obey the rules: Yes

How did you hear about us: I was looking around for a good server on Planet Minecraft.

Have you made another app: On the Minecraft forums, but I think it might have been deleted.

Have you posted the app: No.

In character

Name: Dalia

Race: Elf

Sub-Race: None

Biography: Dalia was raised in a small jungle village of elves in Southern Aegis. Her parents were Chief Planter, and Yin. They lived a nice life, until the undead came, and scattered the villagers to Asulon. Dalia and her father, Planter, could not find Yin. But they kept searching. They searched for years, until Dalia was 79. A group of bandits came out of nowhere, and killed Planter. Dalia escaped into the wild. Dalia lived a miserable life for 6 elven years. Dalia was hiking up a mountain, when she saw a jungle just like her own. And on top of the highest tree was her mother, Yin. Dalia rushed up the tree, but her mother had vanished. That was when Dalia was hit on the head, and she fell off the tree.When Dalia awoke, she couldn't remember anything. The family of Dwarves who had rescued her said they had found her in a river. She had been asleep for a whole year. The Dwarves asked her what language her amulet was in. Dalia was about to say she didn't have one, but looked down. There was a strange golden amulet around her neck, with strange words on it. It said: †ÓˆÍ ؘ´ ˆÍ ÓØÒÁ¡. Dalia thanked the Dwarves for helping her, and set on her journey, to find her memory.

Dalia has blue eyes, and hair that sometimes changes color. She is 119 years old, and has slightly tanned skin. She wears a blue tunic, with silver wristbands. Dalia loves working with animals and architecture, and loves jungles. She volunteers for work a lot, and can be seen sitting on a very tall tree, looking of into the distance, when she is sad. Dalia loves adventure, and is very skilled in wilderness survival.

Ambitions: Dalia wants to find her memory, what the words on her amulet mean, and become either a mage or archer: Dalia is very interested in the mysteries of magic, and thinks archery is also worthwhile.

Favorite tool: Hoe. Farming is a joy to Dalia.

Skill/talent: Other than survival,Dalia is skilled in running through obstacle courses.

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Other info: Dalia thinks she might have very distant Dwarf relatives: That could be why she's so skilled in mining.

Open-Response

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Dalia tries to help the half-ling. She thinks that it's cruel that warriors should be harassing the citizens that need them.

The guards turn to her, and try to push her away. "Go away, Twiggie. We don't need a dumb elf like you in our business." Dalia is very mad by the insult, and kicks one of the guards in his groin. While he is bent over, the other warrior stares, and runs away. Dalia goes up to the half-ling. "You ok? Stupid jerks. We need real warriors, not lazy thieves." The half-ling thanks Dalia, and walks away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character's response?

Dalia goes up to the merchant and asks what he sells. H replies "we sell exotic foods 'n plants. Some good fer potions 'n such." Dalia buys a 2 loaves of bread, and some healing herbs. She then thanks the merchant, and walks away.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?

Dalia looks at the iron. It's tempting, but she knows she shouldn't. Instead, Dalia feels pity that the person has to live in such a small hut. Dalia helps disguise the hut, so no one but the owner would recognize it. Dalia leaves some food for the owner, and walks away.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Dalia goes up to the leader and says "How much for a spare bed and some food?" The leader replies that they are free, since they could not charge such a lost person. Dalia thanks the merchant, and falls into a deep sleep. When she awakes, she asks the merchants for directions. "Down that way." They tell her, and point to her left. "Just keep the sun to your right when it isn't setting." Dalia thanks them for their hospitality, and leaves.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Dalia joins in the fight. There are more bandits than she expected. Dalia and the others slash their way through the numbers of bandits, and only a few have deep wounds. Dalia is about to follow them back into town, when another bandit comes out, and trims the hair near the side of her head. "You-you cut my hair." She stutters. Suddenly, her shock turns into anger, seeing her horrible-looking hair. "YOU CUT MY HAIR! DIE YOU ***!" The bandit trips backwards, and Dalia slashes at him with unknown skill. The bandit leaves, barely holding his life. Dalia calms down, and rushes after the others. When she gets to town, they start handing out the rewards. When Dalia receives half a dozen diamonds, she is shocked by the big reward, and turns back to the guard. "No no no," she says, pushing the diamonds into his hands. "I cant accept such a big award for a small deed like killing a few bandits!" The guard looks at her. "Huh. Well, we have to give you some kind of reward." He hands Dalia a small iron sword. Dalia accepts, and walks away.

[steelersfan1221 300]

Under Review.

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[steelersfan1221 300]

Your definitions are well written.

Your biography is well written, and it now has a bit of lore implemented into it.

Your ORQs have been enhanced with detail. But, there are really no potions on this server, unless there is a specific RP event going on.

I would like you to change your skin though. I do not feel it is very RP.

Accepted.

Please wait for a GM to implement you. This could take some time.

I suggest you take a look at some of the in-game guides here.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions, comments, or concerns about the server.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it! Just click on the link in my signature! We all would really appreciate it.

[steelersfan1221 300]

Moved to Accepted Forum