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* A book lies on a shelf and you take it out and read it *

It was his birthday he was on his island and was building as per usual , recently he had started to talk to himself and pace a lot. He was getting thinner and slowly getting more insane but today he wouldnt eat he just kept talking. Near the end of the day he walked into the inn and stood at the top [[ 22 blocks ]], he was talking really fast now and his last words were " I have nothing left " and he fell, i had tried to grab him but missed by mere seconds as he plumeted towards hs death. With that i climbed down the ladder i walked up to his body and removed all of the items he had . Next the tears still pouring down my cheeks i carry his body and put it on the mud in the church yard . Slowly i dig a hole and put his body in it. I then walk away after burying his body

this is Aphrodite

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[[[Every shelf in Malinor? o3o... I'd suggest fixing the grammar in this post, rewriting it, providing color. Etc.]]

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It was his birthday, he was on his island. Doing what he loved most, the art of building, recently.. He'd started talking to himself, pacing around the island spewing nonsense to himself. His body was getting thinner and thinner, near the end.. He was like a ghost. He woulden't eat, just speak and speak, to me? I spotted him from the ground, screaming nonsense from the rooftop to me? No.. To himself. He spoke in a flurried daze, as the end came, all I heard was "I have nothing left." With that, he leapt. His corporeal being smashing against the ground below, his body now a pile of guts and blood.. I- I tried to grab him at the end, but I could not see where he intended to fall.. I stared at the lifeless body, and prepared a grave for James, I walked away after burying him. I could not stand to be near the mangled remains..

This is Aphrodite. ((Here, did it for you.))

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