Falgrims 3Rd

[falgrim 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: olpol123

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have a good grammar I sometimes if rushing I might accidentally take of a letter.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[/colour] I am 13 year old wanting to find a good RPG server so I can start a adventure with my friends.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I should be on the server everyday unless something has come up like going on a holiday or an accident has happened.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: a role-playing game is a way to get out of real life. To play as a fantasy character to act like a different character.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have played sky-rim and iv tried to make a RPG server of 8 slots but I failed

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta gaming is when you find information out of game and it affects your in game. example someone has told me that if you dig two blocks down and put water in the hole it explodes. Then your nervous of what might happen if you did do that. That was just an example it is not a fact.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: power emoting is when someone wants to express how they feel or there actions example falgrim ignores maleks warning and pushes past or falgrim yells out to the public.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the server will be a normal RPG game. Like people will speak kindly example iv just came on and a dwarf walks up to me and says oh morning fellow adventurer.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on my friends server and the Eden project I have tried to make a small RPG server of 8 slots but it didn't work out.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I agree to the server rules and abide by them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:yes

How did you hear about us?: I was looking for a lotr server and it said lord of the craft so I checked It out and I looked at the server trailer and it looked good so I registered.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: yes this is my third application. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61091-falgrim-2nd-app/

In-Character:

Character Name: falgrim

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): as a child falgrim tried to learn the talents of druids he learned through old stories of ancient magic

but found no way of mastering them his mother and father tried to keep him away from the books of the ancient magic he tried as hard as he could to sneak into the library for ancient magic but to no avail growing more and more eager to find the ancient power.

At 45 years old falgrim found a book of all the alchemy tricks but as he read through each page he realised there was more than just alchemy there were small prints on darker pages with mysterious writing he whispered the words the next 2 months and found someone was watching him. As he walked past the library stooping over the a tall elf the elf was the library master falgrim unsheathed his sword the dark figure slowly turned then stopped it screeched at the stunned elf stunning him falgrim whispered the ancient words when he felt a tingling feeling through his hands before the dark figure lashed out. Falgrim came to his senses as he raised his sword the dark creature collapsed into a pool of darkness all in the village grew wary of falgrim when the leader of the village ordered the banishment of falgrim

falgrim grew silent as he travelled when he heard of a great land asulon.

What are your Character's ambitions?: falgrim to master the talents of the ancients.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):his most treasured tool is his hoe and bow which he keeps close.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? bowman-ship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character: ever since the day of the banish ment he has tried to master his power but it no longer was in him and he went to becoming a druid

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Falgrim draws his bow just in case of an emergency the halfing starts to shout for help the warriors shush the halfing but turn to see falgrim unsheathing an arrow from his quiver they shout out to him oh hey there friend what are you doing walking down this path this is my friend morris he was just giving me something the halfing shouts out to the stranger help please I non of them. put what you have in your hands down falgrim yells. They laugh at the stranger and reply why should we you have no way of beating us we will let you pass. falgrim breaths in and out trice then aims his bow at the warrior nearest to the halfling. The warrior wails out in pain the other is less foolish and is quick to retaliate swinging his sword blindly falgrim takes a shot at his shoulder blade the warrior flinches but charges forward falgrim fires a second arrow at his legs the warrior trips and staggers to a crack in the road. Falgrim speaks calmly to the halfling you will be fin pick up your bags and make for the nearest town. The halfling runs frantically back to the path falgrim whispers to himself then leaves the warriors to there self s

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? falgrim answers kindly to the man do you sell any cheap goods the man replies well I have some out of date fruit and dry bread falgrim takes no offence by the sarcastic response and replies well thank you anyway I hope you have good business with your customers and farewell.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Falgrim speaks elfish they understood little but managed to mouth out the words and point they offer him bread and a short supply if water falgrim accepts the food but try s to pull his weight

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Falgrim asks if anyone needs his help the guards say to leave it they should be gone by night falgrim ignores the advise and orders the guards to open the gate they judge him for a while but understand his loyalty to the town as they open the gate he takes an arrow from his quiver. 7 rough men wait at the gate armed with short swords and maces they start to yell out to falgrim finally they've sent someone to fight us falgrim stands his ground firing twice at front line men they fall to the ground falgrim whispers 5 to go then takes his hoe from out his bag fires a second arrow at the man unaware of his bow he falls falgrim whispers again 4 to go all 4 men charge at him swords and maces waving maniacally falgrim trips one warrior with his bow jabbing another in the stomach winding him and swinging twice at both men remaining the guards come to his aid finishing the warriors. The guards try to put money into falgrim hand he squints but accepts the reward and walks back home

Anything else you would like to say?: I'm not sure if his name is valid when you say add emotes do you mean add these [:D or just he smiles] hope you accept my app................please

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Your role-playing definition needs to be expanded.
  
• Your powergaming definition is incorrect.
  
• You need to include server lore in your biography. Show us that you are at least a little familiar with the places and major events of the world. You can research the lore on our wiki here
  
• You cannot enter Asulon with knowledge of magic. You can enter with ambitions to learn magic, but all training and learning must be done in role-play, on the server.
  
• Your biography needs to contain a description of your character's appearance, personality and age. In addition, expand it to explain your other answers, like why his favourite tools are the hoe and the bow. Why is he skilled with the bow?
  
• Grammar and punctuation is important. Use it.
  
• I cannot understand your Open Response Questions due to lack of grammar, punctuation and run-on sentences. Perhaps try running your application through a spell check first next time?
  

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

I'm not that scary and usually don't bite.

You may reapply in 24 hours

[Cappy 1599]

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