Application Attempt #1

[Sakura_Elf 0]

Minecraft Account Name:Bluemuffin23

How old are you: 11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:A music freak,listeniong to song everyday while playing minecrrft.A good drawer,and a minecraft FREAK. Played minecraft for 2 yrs.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:most of the week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you?:Going on an adventure or a Quest.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Skyrim.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: lolwut?

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: ...

What do you expect this server will be like?: an epic adventure.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Tanelorn. It was boring and no roleplay.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes.

How did you hear about us?: www.minecraftservers.net

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: My first application.

In-Character

Character Name: Sakura

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Sakura's parents when missing in a war. She was raised by her grandpa who was a skilled hunter and blacksmith.Sakura has learned a lot from her grandfather.She wants to make him proud and find her hiding parents.She is shy but brave and very quiet.Sakura is 13. She loves to wear a blue cloth armour her grandma made.

What are your Character's ambitions?:she wants to find her parents.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Bow and arrow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Making armour.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):It's attached.

Other Information about your Character:female.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP

While traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Shoot them with my bow.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Buy from the man.

While wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Take the items.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?: Buy food and walk away.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Help out.

Anything else you would like to say?:Nope.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Denied

-Wrong definition for roleplaying

-Need a definition for metagaming and power-emoting, do research and put your own words to what they mean.

-Bio needs more detail on what happened to her and need some form of link to our lore like places e.g.

-Your skin image was not attached so I could not see.

-Your answers for open response questions are too short, add more roleplay to them. Movements, speeches e.g.

-Presentation for the application was kinda hard to read. Everything is kinda close together, add spaces in between, add colours e.g.

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Moved to Denied Forum